new story on arsu- meeting of two-souls part 24 page 58, pr- pg 59 new

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Yagya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#391

Very well written, dear!!! Loved my dear bhratha and Aryaputra Arjun and Subhi is so cute here!!!

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...Hemangi

@...Hemangi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#392

Awesome update dear 😊

Ahh... Arjun had to do so much explantion to convince his Darling Subhi... Subhi liked the Sanyaasi disguise of Arjun that's why see ran off carrying those sanyasi clothes. 🤣

Madhav teasing Paarth & Subhi 😆

Paarth shocked to hear his kidnapping plan by Subhi & Madhav. Naughty Bro-Sis duo . Poor Paarth😆

Post ur next part soon.

Edited by hpatgiri - 11 years ago

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naq5

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Posted: 11 years ago

#393

wow nice update...madhav, parth & subhi together😳. madhav full on in teasing mood😉

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PARVATHY44

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Posted: 11 years ago

#394

That was a brilliant update.Totally enjoyed reading the whole part.Eagerly waiting 4 the next part.

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 11 years ago

#395

Awesome, beautiful part

loved it

loved Arjun-Subhadra moments

their heart to heart talks

which were needed for them...

Madhav teases Arjun n Subhadra n later Subhadra join Madhav

like Brother like sister

loved the bonding between Madhav n Arjun n Madhav n Subhadra

waiting for more

continue soon

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Kalyani Nitin Bujone

@Kore-Soteira

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Posted: 10 years ago

#396

Simply beautiful Shavii.
Poor Arjun had to give a deatailed explanation to his darling wife...par kya kare yeh ishq nahin aasan.
And sorry dear for commenting so late as I am preparing for my exams which is in next month, hence the delay on replying.

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shavii

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Posted: 10 years ago

#397

thanks for all the comment

will be updating soon stay tuned for promo😊

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Antacid :P

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Posted: 10 years ago

#398

Welcome back dearie🤗

And sorry for not commenting I have 27 unread PMs mainly of FFs😭

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shavii

@shavii

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Posted: 10 years ago

#399

enjoy the promo😉

guys pls comment as just 3 parts are left 😊

he steps in fully into and stops and closes the door as he did not want someone to hear her being angry and It was bedroom matters after all. He decide he will go and apologize but did not knew something was waiting to surprise him.He walks a bit and raise his head to get an huge surprise his jaws dropp.. he clutches his gandheev more