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hilly

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Posted: 10 years ago

#641

Loving the updates Aditi! :D
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you're doing a faab job and I'm lovin' em. seriously. Thank you for considering to continue this story and enhancing the characters and creating an amazing plot.
The intensity is increasing and I'm lovin' it... keep up it! I'm excited for the further update.
It's saddening what Anjali is doing .. although I know where she is coming from, but she has got to realize that Arnav is not wrong either. He has made and settled all foundation for her security which she couldn't care less about while too involved in seeking revenge. Awwwhiee.. I wish she had gotten together with Shyam. I would love to have a flashback on Shyam and Anji regarding their decision and whether they were close and why she chose the monster- such a foolish decision she made and that DOESN'T mean K will abandon/betray A.
Last emotional bit :( on A&K. AWH. I wish they don't seperate and Manyata gets the trio settled together.

You're doing great! Keep it up! Keep continuing :))

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Aditi

@uv-crazyfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#642

Teaser:

"But you said that you and Mumma will stay with me. Always. You lied." Manyata shrieked, stepping back as Arnav took a step forward, losing her balance and falling on her backside. She winced in pain.

"Manyata..." Arnav rushed ahead quickly, crouching down to pick her up.

"DON'T" She shouted again, running into their room and locking it from inside before Arnav or Khushi could get in.

And started sobbing loudly, ignoring her parent's crying pleas to her.

Nobody loves her. No one.

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javeria

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Posted: 10 years ago

#643

interesting. shyam was right, only manayata can force arnav and khushi to change their minds.

looking forward to read update

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rulama

@rulama

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Posted: 10 years ago

#644

Interesting way to make them bend to her wishes...

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radhvi

@radhvi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#645

In this game of power, politics, revenge, justice and sacrifices, nobody is giving a damn about a poor innocent soul who is in dire need of love!

Though I appreciate Khushi's gesture to think about a doing a greater good to the society, she is depriving a soul who needs her love as well. Is this not why Arnav asked her to stay away from Manyata initially? But then she willingly signed up to fill in a mother's shoes for Manyata's life. Agreed that this was unforeseen, but this 'let go for its freedom and happiness' theory is crushing child's hope to get a little love from her parents.

I may be wrong to think like this,but isn't that child also part of this society? But Khushi is not the only one who is responsible for Manyata's distress.

Good teaser Aditi,

waiting for the update!