KriYaansh Drabble : Beautiful Distractions| Chap 4 -Pg 14. |PMs Later. - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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i didnt know u guys will start writing this drabble this fast.. 😃

nevertherless..that was beautiful piece of work girlies...

it simply looks amazing... *though i know the story anyway* 🤣

still m looking forward to read this story full of passion n aggression.. 😃


btw...both of u.. snigs update soulmateee

and pasto..update ur drabbleee...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
awesum story pls continue soon n pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
Different concept!
But nice one would like to read more do update soon. 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Effacious

i didnt know u guys will start writing this drabble this fast.. 😃

nevertherless..that was beautiful piece of work girlies...

it simply looks amazing... *though i know the story anyway* 🤣

still m looking forward to read this story full of passion n aggression.. 😃


btw...both of u.. snigs update soulmateee

and pasto..update ur drabbleee...

😈 You never know... 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 2.


Little whispers buzzed around as they surrounded the two.
'Leonotore', one believer screamed and they were almost going to pounce on her when Rae realized and pulled her inside his private quarters

She was startled but she knew that this was coming. After all her kingdom lost this important battle. She looked at him, Into his deep brown eyes which had pride of victory in them.

"What did you just say?" His hard voice echoed.

"Take me with you, As per the rituals" She replied sternly. Her voice was firm, demanding. His eyes widened with confusion and unsure.
She took in a sharp breath watching his widened eyes. Letting go off his arm, she moved closer to him and leaned in closer astonishing him.
"Let this be a secret between us", she chimed into his ear and he felt he couldn't register much than her closeness but he heard her right.
"What is cooking in your mind Kria Leonotore?", he yelled pulling her a bit away by holding her arms. His high pitched voice made the believers rush to them and they were amazed to see the princess of the kingdom standing so close to their prince.
" Whatever your plan is...Nothing is gonna work", his harsh words echoed and Kria noticed the extra presence when whispers hovered and it became louder every second. She knew they would pounce on her if they understood what was happening. She had to get everything back in control before it breaks down. Without thinking much, she placed her lips on cupping his face with her palm. She was surprised on her own actions and Rae was far more than surprised, He was numb. It was ironic that the same Rae was unstoppable in battlefield but here her one action glued him to ground.
The believers gasped in shock when they encountered this moment. They walked out drawing their own meaning out of the situation.
Time stood still as she kissed him aggressively and demanding, making him forget how mad he was on her. Her lips weren't sweet; They were alluring and desiring. Her fingers trailed to his night hair holding him against her. She could feel his heart fluttering hard. He closed his eyes captivating the moment. Her fingers gently traced back off his cheek. She stood inches apart with their foreheads touching as she broke the kiss glancing at him. Her breath was still struck in the throat.
She never wanted to kiss him ; but she did. She never wanted to break the kiss ; but she did.

"Take me with you." She whispered on his lips.

He opened his eyes slowly and realizing its impossible to speak more, she just ran out of the quarters to the believers who had now arranged the necessity to take them to Felistisia.
Her heart fluttered in the chest restlessly. She had miles of journey ahead and she coaxed herself to welcome other shade of life and sat inside the palanquin. She didn't realize when she fell into deep slumber. She slept peacefully feeling relieved with the present ; not worrying about tomorrow.
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So how was it? 😃 Do review! 😉
Edited by snigdha_arsha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
Me first me first me first 🥳
But I m so confused Man.
What is this lady trying to do...
She is traping him I m telling u... something is mysterious in Kria...
Next time a super long one..
Edited by Endurance - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
is she trying to get herself safe...?

awsum update snippiii... I want a longgg one next tym... :) :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
She is planning to take revenge.. i'm Damn sure :/
but still i'm confused :$

Awsum update..
word u used n ur writting skill.. hatts of to it :-D

thnks for d pm dii :)
Edited by jyoti_arsha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
wow.
how i wished to read a story on Kr as king and queen.
you fulfilled this wish.
coming to the start.
loved the way you portrayed both the characters.
the strong yet kind king rey.
and the beautiful yet brave and don't know somewhat mysterious at least for now princess Kria
Edited by arshafan94 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
Omg woahhh...

did she really kiss him???

like really she did.. omggg 😲

i thought Rey will ask her the reason..guess uski zarurat he ni padi... 😆

awesome chappyyy... me loved it...

aagey its gonna be even more interesting... 😉

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