His Journey Towards Euphoria#4 Link to thread 5 on PG 1

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sushan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#231

another wonderful update I always love Ebu Khushi parts but you have very well written the part where Khushi is telling him she missed him I could feel it

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TaujooMadiha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#232

OMG I can't believe Khushi intiated the kiss. Well-done girl well-done 👏👏👏

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Brishti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#233

Awesome update. I love that you don't rush things and allow the characters to realize their feelings for each other slowly. And Ebu is just the cutest... Can wait for him to say 'Abba' to Arnav.

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thiyamappy

@thiyamappy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#234

This para is really sweet "I think now it has become impossible to breathe without you..." he confessed, looking at her sleeping face.

Khushi crying over him by confessing how much she missed Arnav when he came back..AWESOME..
their kiss 😊
hope Arnav comes closer to Abeer and accept him , felt bad how he is avoiding Abeer.

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dumas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#235

Did she really initiate the kiss did Khushi try to kiss Asr and when he did not kiss her with the passion she wanted scraped him omg i just died wow loved the update loved her letting him know with her tears and that she missed him and was craving for him loved it so cute loved that he rein in his passion because he knew she was not ready for it and loved how he made her realized it was alright and so cute when khushi and ebu was talking to each other and hope Arnav starts getting closer to their son awesome update thanks for the pm happy friendship day.