Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS OS 5 Link to #2 in Pg 1(21/8) - Page 49

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Posted: 11 years ago
so kushi is katti with arnav. let see how arnav makes her dosta
thank u for these beautifullOS.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Another great OS Smita!!


Dammit ASR! He had to spoil thing for himself when everything was going his way! Laad Governor kahin ke!
Poor Akash and Payal though. They were married off hurriedly because Arnav took to his head to get Khushi at any cost 😛
Can't wait to for the remaining parts!

Thanks for the email Rashmi! :) x
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome Updates..
poor Khushi, due to Arnav's Jealousy she had to listen to all his taunts..
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome parts...thanks for the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
I was loving this besotted Arnav until he reverted to type. But then, I guess, that's him!

Kabhi Dard Ye Deta Hai, Kabhi Chain Ye Deta Hai
Sometimes it gives You pain, sometimes peace
Kabhi Gham Deta Hai, Kabhi Khushi Deta Hai
Sometime it gives You sadness, sometimes happiness


Khushi pleading with the sunflowers was just too cute.
Some serious apology and placating by Arnav is needed now...


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Posted: 11 years ago
This is cool 👏 but the end, it was not per the liking though. 😳

First time I guess, Arnav had got the correct punishment for sharp tongue to make him know how much his words can that hurt others. 😳

Arnav was cute and I was loving him the first, when his feelings and intentions were explained, but then the ASR has to come and he stained then respect and adore for Arnav in an instant. 😡

Well, Khushi even though from her words, I guess, remains just being there to help him and give him a company or to be precise to look after him, nothing more than that she feels for him, maybe she isn't ready to think or want to think about that? 😕

Now what's going to happen? What will Arnav do?

When will this continue???
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Lucky_arshi

This is cool 👏 but the end, it was not per the liking though. 😳

First time I guess, Arnav had got the correct punishment for sharp tongue to make him know how much his words can that hurt others. 😳

Arnav was cute and I was loving him the first, when his feelings and intentions were explained, but then the ASR has to come and he stained then respect and adore for Arnav in an instant. 😡

Well, Khushi even though from her words, I guess, remains just being there to help him and give him a company or to be precise to look after him, nothing more than that she feels for him, maybe she isn't ready to think or want to think about that? 😕

Now what's going to happen? What will Arnav do?

When will this continue???


But this is not the end Lucky...😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome...awesome...how do u do this smitaji...ur characters r sooo...
adorable.🤗...thanx for such a lovely OS series...& to u too rashmiji...👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome OS...

Mr Raizada is head over heel in love with KKG... He stares at her, finds every excuse to keep her with him, dream about her but can't convey his feelings to her?? Why o why??

And now he has hurt her with his big sharp tongue... 😔...Why o Why??

Loved the updates... Waiting to see how he is going to woo her now...
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Posted: 11 years ago
That was amazing.. Arnav is so smitten by her, so much so that he did so much from marrying Payal-Aakash to getting in the good books of Khushis parents.. But his words have hurt her bad now and he knows that too.. Waiting to see how he makes it up to her..

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