Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS OS 5 Link to #2 in Pg 1(21/8)

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devishree

@devishree

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#401

i loved it

it was awesome and beautiful

i loved the talking of khushi in bhang mood

charming proposal from ASR wow superb

so cute little love story👏⭐️

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#402

simply wonderful !!! loved it.. ASR have fun at khushi's cost.. poor khushi.. however loved the happy ending.. 😃

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sheshnag1952

@sheshnag1952

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#403

lovely update. loved this story too. when are u starting your next story😉😉😉

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pree2605

@pree2605

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#404

awesome...
awww soo sweet...
loved it ...
thnxx fr email

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#405

indeed a special holi... beautiful story Smita Di... loved it... thanks for the mail Rashmi...

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Sravya/Sravs

@...Champ...

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#406

These three parts indeed worth a wait. They are just awesome! 👏

From the moment I completed reading the shots before, I was anxious and curious to read about Khushi's thoughts, her feelings, her view to the point on being with Arnav after she woke up and remember nothing. And everything was, as I said, worth the wait. 👍🏼

Knowing Khushi, I was awaiting for the laughing too. 😆 And indeed all the while reading I had cracked up several a times. 🤣 Arnav, naughty boy, he's no less too. Was into making the parts hilarious too along with Khushi. 😛

And the proposal, the way he asked her to marry him, the way he pronounced it in a third man's talk, that was really beautiful but what will beat the direct confession of his? Loved each and every part of these parts. ❤️

Thanks for another awesome OS! 🤗

Will be waiting for the next one...next week!

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#407

the way he teased.. too good.. loved it...

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Jyothi

@Jyo.Arshi.IPK

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#408

Happy Friendship Day Smita and Rash 🤗

am sry I couldnt comment after the first 2 OSes ... uni totally kept me busy

the last 2 OSes ... ASR's heart and the Holi OS ... both are super cute ... and its almost like I am watching it play out in front of my screen.

thats the beauty of ur works Smita ... its as good as watching the IPK on TV ,... the simplicity and beauty of your words easily transcend into the visual senses.

awesome job !! hugs both of u.