Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS OS 5 Link to #2 in Pg 1(21/8)

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Arshix144

@Arshix144

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#181

Ah, I have no idea why I was sort of expecting a continuation of the first OS? I guess it goes to show how awesome your OS series is! Each and every OS always has the potential to go on and on, so much so that one can't get enough.

Loved this new OS, there is a certain sweetness and innocence in the way you always portray Khushi. She is adorable and manages to affect our ASR no matter how much he wants to hate her and push her away, he ends up doing the exact opposite and falling for her. He ends up feeling protective and possessive of her, making all your readers all delighted.

Loved their first encounter in his office, loved their every other encounter but most of all that beautiful proposal in the car. Thank you for transporting us to this happy place via your OSes S, you have no idea just how much we appreciate it! 🤗

Thank you Rashmi for the notification and for sharing the work with us! 🤗

PS. As always loved all the pics that went with every section matching the character reactions with perfection.

Edited by Arshix144 - 11 years ago

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MDTharun

@MDTharun

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#182

Wonderful

Only Smitar di can come up with such heart whelming stories about Arnav and khushi . I love each and every story written by you .

This is simply amazing , the khadoos ASR fell for simple Khushi .

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Deepa

@deepa.e

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#183

So sweet!!$ parts totally and it was like a magic to read!!

smile but beautiful!!! awesome and cute!!

Waiting for your next OS!!

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sonal

@srain10

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#184

Awesome...

Such a beautiful confession❤️

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abcdefg1234567

@abcdefg1234567

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#185

Really very cute os. Liked it very much. Thanks.

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pinkly

@pinkly

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#186

Lovely story. Just in 4 parts you have finished this beautiful story. Very nicely written. Will wait for next OS...

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Sravya/Sravs

@...Champ...

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#187

Res

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This one is an awesome One-Shot. The way the story has processed is too good. I mean the perfect Arrogant ASR and his rants, always behind marrying him Nani, supporters of her Anjali and Mami too here, that was really cool. 👍🏼

And then Khushi's entry into his life even before he guessed it. And then his thoughts seeing Khushi for the first time it's so good. 😳

And I obviously didn't expect Khushi's strangeness towards Arnav's proposal. Not that I'm complaining, but still I thought at least she would have a guess about what's happening, but she even was unaware of the decisions of elders. 😕

And last the simple proposal for marriage and at the very last, the confession of love, everything is so sweet. Reading this was really a treat. Thanks for writing the OS. 🤗 👏

Edited by Lucky_arshi - 11 years ago