Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS OS 5 Link to #2 in Pg 1(21/8)

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PixieFairy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#161

So beautifully penned down it is :')

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sarozz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#162

Brilliant update...it was so cute...

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thephoenixenigm

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Posted: 11 years ago

#163

loved it and the pictures are just perfect👏

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Ayesha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#164

👏 awesome

loved it👏👏

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Suchi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#165

AAwww.. its too cute.. so beautiful.. loving this series..

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mishti_17

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Posted: 11 years ago

#166

That was amazing.. Arnav being apprehensive to meet her at first and then getting drawn to her innocence and simplicity.. And then falling in love with her..😳 The confession was fantastic too.. Seedhi baat, no bakwaas..😎

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Varsha Dutt

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Posted: 11 years ago

#167

awww... how lovely...

Arrogant, Rich, self-made man falls in love with a sweet, bubbly, orphan...

loved the OS 👏

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badfaith4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: pinkly
Superb start. The khadoos ASR already likes Khushi. Arnav's initial irritation and annoyance before meeting Khushi was nicely written. Later he was smitten by her smile and innocence. I love this story already. The pictures were appropriate and go with the story beautifully.

Awww. Such an adorable story.