MY LIFE IS INCOMPLETE WITHOUT YOU [ PART 37 ( A ) UPDATED ]

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anu_anya

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Posted: 11 years ago

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emotional tha per last mein tho cover kar diya na d great rd confessing his feelings wow such a supeab update loved it thanx for pm continue asap :)

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SAKSHI SINGH

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

its amazing

u r such a awesome writer

thanks for pm me

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sakshi😊

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Karishma Sewani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#73

hey, it was awesome! But very emotional! I am just happy that sanyu did not stick to her words, about jumping from the airplane! I am curious to know, what happens next! So please be a wonderful writer(you are already) and update soon naa! *puppy face* love you! Thanks for pm'ing! Keep writing! :) <3

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sonali mishra

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Awesome updates👏

It was very emotional😭

Finally randhir accepted the truth😊

Eagerly waiting for randhir's past to unfold

Update soon

Happy friendship day to you

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Ananya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#75

The part was awesome and the last some lines were so cute!! update soon! and ya btw happy friendship day!!😊

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oioYY

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Posted: 11 years ago

#76

Super se upar update soon...happy friendship day 😊

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CaramelCritters

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Posted: 11 years ago

#77

this is superb...pls update soon

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Sweta

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Posted: 11 years ago

#78

Yaaar plz jaldi update karoonaa

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Sara

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Hey... I just read all of it upto part 25😊

Its sooo awesome...

You're such a wonderfull author...

I love the way this story has progressed👏

HATS OFF

Love

Sana :)

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Nain5000

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Posted: 11 years ago

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So guys... Ds quick response is jst 4 ur lv n support... I wonder hw u ppl manage 2 read it in one go... So a hearty thnx 2 u ppl... Lv u all..

PART 23

"still I dont believe", her words mentally punched me out and my mouth shaped 'O".

"Yes, I mean if you would have really cared thn you must not have said sanyukta. Come on mr. YAM gave me a pet name, teasingly he can call sanyu n nw when I want him to call, then he is calling me in wayward names. Do you think its fair?", she yell with a smirk as if not me she was my boss.

Still I was happy. I was talking to her after 7 long days. Both our face placed a curve to our lips.

"ok sanyu baby. I can call it because it is your punishment for scaring me like hell"
"punishments are so beautiful then I wish to commit thousands"

"gosh, you can flirt too"
"i can give you competition in every field. I was district topper in every step"

"impressive"
"what is the use? I am still unsatisfied"

"but now I have promised right"
"yeah but two things are still left"

"and what are those"
"1st is these tears. These are wetting your eyes. I dont like these"

She brought out a hanky and wiped my face. I was continuously peeking her and those which I could not covey her were..

"saalon baad kisika pyar bhara hath choo raha hai
mujhe mujhme waapas bhar raha hai
dekh k aj ye sukun mil raha hai
ki koi aj mere liye bhi ro raha hai"

After drying my face, she glanced me still placing the cloth on my cheek. Suddenly a lady went to washroom and our broke my concentration broke.

"aaa.. Second is still waiting for you", she said removing the cloth from my face in one go.
"oh god this girl. Say", I irritated.

"tell bittu bhaiya to change seat with you. He will not disobey you and I cant ask him to do"
"but why"

"o hello. 7 day have passed. Have you forgot, we have not quarreled since 7 long days. This has become uneasy now. Otherwise I will jump"
"dont threaten me otherwise I will jump alongwith you. Aaa..i am asking him"

Having no choice, I asked bittu to exchange seat, he agreed and she sat beside me.

"can I ask you something", she asked.
"hmm"

"how come girls come to you when you are so boring, no doubt you are hot but seriously you are like old man you know"
"and why do miss. URL thinks this"

"i mean, being just 26 you are a succesful director. I mean you had time to enjoy but didn't"
"oh really, you are more boring than me. District topper at 14, working like bulls from that age and that too.a katerer, you are telling me boring"

"my reasons were different. I had to fill my family's stomach. My responsibilities did not allow me to do so. But you are rich, having no reslonsibilities"
"everyone has different reasons sanyu. I will tell when we will be alone after reaching there"

She agreed and our whole journey went on like a sweet treat. After a few minutes of continuous arguments, we slept.

The plane landed and air-hostress asked everyone to get down. I opened my eyes and found her sleeping on my sloulder peacefully. Her innocent face, angelic glow, silky hairs, extra-smooth cheeks and fairy eyelids were attracting me towards themselves. I stroke face and removed the strain of hairs disturbing her. She leaned more closer to me slept more deep clutching my arms. It was impossible for any male to stop himself. I leaned closer to her and planted a soft kiss on her nose. I was gazing her like a baby to his dall. My breath touched her nose and she got up.

An eye contact of few minutes was disturbed by the air-hostress to leave. We both got embaressed and left.

We reached the lodge. It was just beside the sea-shore. After getting settled in aour respective rooms and taking some rest, I got a message from her "come to sea shore, waiting for you YAM". I smiled a bit and left. Hopefully it was my a smile coming from core of my heart after years.

I reached sea shore and found her with a two piece; sliveless vest type t-shirt and short skirt upto her long straight waist length hairs adjusted to one side of her neck. Those were flowing like river abd she was standing crossing her arms against her chest thinking something deeply gazing the sea.

"raaz kitne dil me dabe hein
hum kholne yahaan aaye hein
jisse ye sab kehne aaye hein
wahi kahin aur khoye hue hein"

She got into attention from my words and turned back. Her beauty was flowless due to mere light of setting sun and cool salty breeze. The golden glow came when she attached a smile on her lips.

To be continued...

Edited by Nain5000 - 11 years ago

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