MY LIFE IS INCOMPLETE WITHOUT YOU [ PART 37 ( A ) UPDATED ]

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Hey! Nain

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Heyy guys... This is my 1st supersuccesful ff in india-forums... So ds is a thnk u post 2 evry1 though I dont hv words 2 thnk... I just had a few drops of happy tears in my eyes when I foind 15 successful pages completed... Being a new comer, ds is a very nig achievement... I lv u every1 who hv commented n been a part of my success... Spl thnx 2 purnima who had been my inspiration from the very 1st day of my writing... #Chilu_baby if u r reading ds then god bless u baby.. U r such a darling to me n u wl b such a spl frnd 2 me in such few days I nvr imagined...

N all others #sakshi n #samridhi without whom I had no strength 2 step ahead... Thnk u both...

Another thnx 2 #anu n #somya.. My 2 dear darling babes... Lv u both...

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Thank u so much darloo...
But what I did..??
I did nothing..
U deserve it.

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: samridhigoodiez
Thank u so much darloo...
But what I did..??
I did nothing..
U deserve it.

aww sweety.. U r my way 2 if dear.. I think u hv 4got dat wat amt of ques I askd u at once n u did reply evrythng.. lv u a lot babes...

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Posted: 11 years ago

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congrates hope u soon start ur 2nd thread too
really u r a superb writer
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we have to thank u for giving us dis 3 beautiful ffs
thanks for ur love
love u to dear
plz continue asap :)))

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Posted: 11 years ago

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thank you so much yaar
😭 aankho me khushi ke aanshu aa gaye
but u r such a awesome writer nain
keep writing
love u so much
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Nain5000

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Posted: 11 years ago

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So guys headed 2wards nxt part... Here I go...

PART 25

Our eyes locked for a long time.

Her warm tear drop escaped and touched my cheek due to wind. Our eyelock broke and I raised my palm. I wiped her tears through my thumbs.

"i dont think we are here for sheding tears. Right", I teased.
"rule also applied for you YAM", she grinned.

We both wiped out out tears and I continued.

"20th august 2004, how can I forget this date. This took me everything from me", I said looking towards sea.
"it was the date which gave a beautiful gift for lifetime", she replied being a bit unmindful.

"what??", I asked with a surprizing face.
"Aaa... I mean it was the same date we met for the first time and you saved me from that devil", she replied coming into sence.

"yes, that day when we introduced ourselves and I got a call", I said playing with my toes.
"ofcourse how can I forget that. I was still in my position for a long time", she replied.

"it was the call from chachu. He notified me that GM got a heart attack due to my parents fight. I was blank after listening to that, I was not in a position to hear or say anything. I became restless and rushed to hospital. I observed GM in stretcher moving towards ICU. Blood was oozing from her nose badly. I ceased the way of doctor and queried about her condition. He said it was a heart attack and blood was oozing due to high BP. He stated that there was no hope left. I was emotionless, breathless and speechless. I fell on ground leaning on the wall. There was no one with me to make ne stand and I knew that but I had no sense to think anything. I was weeping, sitting on ground, my nose was watering; I was not aware of anything. I was just thinking one thing GM. I was imagining life with her and without her. After examining GM, the doctor came out.

'mr. shekhawat. Your grandmother is in sense now. She may take her last breath at any moment. Go and meet her. She is chanting your name', he stated his last words and left.

I gethered some strength, stood up and entered the ICU wiping out my tears. GM called to her just by signalling her fingers. I rushed to her and crushed her with a tight hug. I cried my heart out and GM caressed my back.

'GM you dont care of me. You are going leaving me alone. How could you? How could you think I can live without you. Take me alongwith you. I dont wanna live. Take me with you', I yelled with a sea of endless tears flowing from my eyes.
'get up baba, get up. Look at me', she,raised me from my shoulders.

I sat on the bed beside her. She clutched my palms and said stroking my chin, 'you know how much I love you. I can't see you with tears. I will not be in peace if you will cry like this. Do you want me to be in pain?'

I nodded in a no. She continued.
'you know that I dont to go anywhere away from you'
'then dont go'

She smiled and replied, 'baba this body may be away from you but my soul will always follow you. Promise me you will never break down in any tuff situation'

'i promise GM, I will fulfill all your wishes not because I am strong but for the reason that I love you. I love you GM', I said kissing her hands.

She did not reply this time. I shaked her but it vein. When I left her palm, it fell on bed like a dry leaf. I shouted GM, GM.. But her were open without any motion. I hugged her and weeped hard loud. After a long time I left lied her on bed and shut her eyes with my palms"..

When I was weeping, a soft palms wiped my tears out. When I observed, it was sanyu. I found her wiping my tears with lots of tears and care in her eyes. I came out of my thoughts and hugged her tightly.

"she died sanyu. She died. In my arms. I was looking, shouting, crying but could not do anything. I was finished that day sanyu I was finished. I wanted to kill myself but I could not because of her promise. I had no shoulder to shed my tears. I was broken, scattered, destroyed and alone too", I cried my heart out with thousands of drops flowing continuosly from my eyes.

"cry randhir.. These tears were making you suffer. Let it all out. These have no capacity of subsistance in your eyes. Through them out. No need give them much importance. Go on randhir, go on", she asked me stroking my back from one palm and other arm clutching me tightly.

To be continued...

Done guys... Thank you 4 reading... Ok I know I literally made u cry but nxt part u wl get a kissing sequence... I will update positively on monday... 4 ds part, I hope u ppl lkd n cried too.. Sry 4 that... Lv u guys.. Keep supporting..

Edited by Nain5000 - 11 years ago