MY LIFE IS INCOMPLETE WITHOUT YOU [ PART 37 ( A ) UPDATED ] - Page 24

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Posted: 10 years ago
A big big big sry.. My sincere apologies 4 late update... Some browser prblm.. So here I go 4 nxt chspter.. Happy reading...

PART 32 - THE SECRET

I went to the sea shore and fumed in anger when I saw them both sitting together once again. I bruddled my ire and decorated them with an artificial smile covering my lips.

"hi sanyukta", I said my hands in pocket making tight fists.

"heyy bro, you here. Why dont you join us", he said raising his head towards me.

"wdh.. My place, my sparetime, my sanyu, my... My? What my friend? Bt she is more friendly with him even more longer time than me. Then why I have a problem? Whatever it may be but its my time to be here. What is he doing here?", I mind struggled.

"oh rd. I said na he is very funny, come and sit. You is it necessary to make fun always", she said first facing me and then to him with a hit on his arm with her fist.

"hmm so called friend. My foot", my mind cursed him and I widened my smile even more.

"aaa..sanyukta can I hv a small convo with you ALONE?", I said giving more stress on alone and popping my eyes out.

"yeah come", she first stared him and then she stood for and we came away from her so called close friend.

"what is your problem", I queried.
"my problem? What do you mean?", he confused words.

"you know this is a place where only you and me come together. They why did you bring him here. You know this is our private place", I pouted.

"when did it happen? I mean I dont think any name mensioned here. And he too is my friend like you", she said with her wide eyes.

"dont compare me with him. I am much better than him"
"but he is my best friend rd"

"and so you are for me"
"oh jelous"

"ww..why would be I jelous", I stambled.
"so I can spend time with you just like with you", she taunted.

"no", I raised my voice.
"hmm so", she eyed me.

"i mean yes but not like with me"
"then like with what"

"like friend"
"so as you are"

"no, I am not your friend"
"then, what are of mine?"

"aaa...ya special.. Special friend.. Ya"
"he too is"

"no I am more important than him"
"why for"

"you said"
"what"

"that when you were alone"
"i also said that when I was alone in jaipur, you were also not there, he was there"

"but"
"look give me a perfect reason that why should be I with you more than with him and why you are more important for me otherwise, I will again go"

"heyy you will not", I said clutching her wrist when he was in an urge to go.
"jelous", she again eyed me.

"no never"
"then join us"

"okey"
"lets go"

We both went and took our seats. Again their lovely dovly convo started which I really really hate. I got finally annoyed in not more than 10 min. I left that making an excuse that I need to sleep and wake up early for work.

I reached my room and took my position for sleep after turning off the lights. I wanted to take a nap but sleep was far away from my eyes. There were two reason behind it. First was she was with him not with me. I actually wanted to know why I so much affected when I saw both of them together. Secondly her condition was buzzing in my ears.

"what is happening is out of my mind? They both are friends. Even I am the same. But why am I so restless to see her with him? Why I always want her to be with me only? Why I have a problem when she talks or sits with that sid? Was she right? Was I really jelous? She challenged me. Is there really a strong reason that she should with me only? Why am I more important?", my mind was struglling with a chain of such questions.

The whole night I remained sleepless because I did not know what I had to do next morning.

All sanyukta(night at sea shore after rd's departure)...

"what you think", I questioned.
"i think he is very tuff", replied did hopelessly.

"not so much"
"he will. I dont think its gonna be easy"

"may be tuff but I am sure about result"
"last three days are there to leave this place"

"aah enough"
"and this man is enough stubborn"

"relax you know this worked on you"
"oh hello I am not angry young man type. I am cool you know darling"

"and he is hot. Really hot. You cant be because his six packs will hide you if he stands infront of you"
"so he is more mutual for you"

"no buddy ofcourse you are. Thats why you are my best friend"
"hah dont greece me. I came leaving all my work behind, even divya behind and your love is more important than your friend. Right?"

"stop taunting idiot. Can you never be serious?"
"you know me darling. Anyway next is what?"

"nothing continue what is happening. But remain as close as you can"
"as you say sweetheart", he said grabbing my shoulders.

"uff you how much you flirt yaar. Just pretend and that too infrnt of rd. Otherwise I will tell divya"
"say na. She knows how much I love you", he said.

We giggled.

"I never accept defeat mr.YAM. Now see how I make you admit that you love me", my mind played and I smirked.

Next morning...
In the set..

I was was taking my make up and I saw rd coming. I commanded sid to come and touch me face. He follwed me and moved the hairs of my face. We pretend to make an eyelock.

"he is coming. What you thing it will work?", he said without shifting his gaze from me and without moving his mouth.
"jelousy is the best weapon. Trust me. Continue this till he reaches here", I tightened my teeth and replied.

We were in out position and broke if when rd came and stood besides us eyeing us in full of rage.

To be continued...

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Edited by Nain5000 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update
Rd getting jealous part 2
Love the way that they made a plan to make him jealous
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update👏
Loved jealous rd😉
This is plan of sanyu & sid, it is showing effect😉
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: don girls

Amazing update
Rd getting jealous part 2
Love the way that they made a plan to make him jealous
Update soon

thnx dear.. I wl try 2 update asap...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: katheriene

Awesome update👏

Loved jealous rd😉
This is plan of sanyu & sid, it is showing effect😉
Update soon

lol 😆
more effects left 😉 ...
Haha 😆 ...
Thnk u so mch.. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh girl! Loved it jealousy therapy from sanyu and sid to randhri! So sanyu and sid are just good friends and are making randhir realize his love for sanyukta! Loved the idea! Thanks for pm'ing girl! Keep writing, continue soon, love you,
Karishma. :*
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Posted: 10 years ago
its awesome lovely amazine fab fab part.
updet asap.😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

amazinggg smiti👍🏼

superb

so he is helping sanyu

interesting very interesting

thanks for pm

lots of love

sakshi

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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey! Smiti
lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely,
lovely, lovely update dear
Lovely, nicely and beautifully written
love it to the core

Very well you've described the scenario
Randhir jealous
Sid is helping sanyu
keep it up
Update soon
Eagerly waiting
Thanks for pm
Love
Bushra
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update
hope sanyu jealosy ka natak success hogi n rd will confess his feelings to sanyu
eagarly waiting for next part continue asap
thanx for pm :)))

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