MY LIFE IS INCOMPLETE WITHOUT YOU [ PART 37 ( A ) UPDATED ]

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Nain5000

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: SWA1992
sid-- fevicol?😆😆😆its soo funny to watch rd being j...

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Nain5000

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: k.kalyani
Beautifully written..
Superb update!!!👏
Ur work is fabulous..
keep it up...
plzzz update asap..

thnk u 4 appretiatn dear... Gd bless... 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

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So guys... Here I gi 4 nxt... Hope u all like it...

PART 31b - JEALOUS RD II

My heart got a small kick when I saw them hugging.

"why did not you inform me that you are coming", she queried.

"look someone is questioning, who herself forgot to inform. Huh", he taunted.
"heck. Why is talking to her in my style using SOMEONE", my mind rowfled.

They giggled and I scremed. After meeting she called me.

"rd look I was saying about him. My best friend, sid. I mean siddhant. Lovingly we call him sid", she said crossing her palms near her thies, almost jumping.

"what just she said LOVING. Hah loving my foot. Such a cheap he is", my mind punched again when I looked him in an evil eye.

"rd what happened", she said and I came into sense.

"aa..nothing. I must say, you are really friendly with your BEST FRIEND, who talks less and FLIRTS more", I said giving more stress on best friend and flirt.

"oh actually, he is like this from childhood. Always joking types. Never in a serious mood", she pouted.

He forwarded his hand to shake and I had to do that because he was her best friend as I did not want to hurt her.

"i wish thousand pins were mounted in my palms, so that this fevicol got pinched and always remained fixed to it", my mind cursed him.

"randhir, RD", I said in proud.
"sidhant. Wow I am a big fan of yours. You are really very cool. Dude", he said widening his eyes.

I withdrew my hand and again hid it inside my pocket.

"no buddy, you are wrong, he is actually very hot. May not be from clothes but from mind he is fired", said sanyu and giggled.

I faked a smile and said "aaa..should we go, we need to take rest and have to wake up early in the morning for shoot. You also must go siddant, you too have conference".

She bid a bye to him. I screamed and again dragged her from her wrist.

Next Morning...
I reached set. Thank god she was alone not with that fevicol. She was in a grass green backless top with jeans capri with complementing 1 inch thick bangle on only one wrist and hairs half curled. Again I lost in her and marched towards her. Everytime I forget myself infront of her but this time, I knew her reaction. As always I stood infront of her open mouthed and my mouth uttered BEAUTIFUL. I saw first time blushing on my complement. She dug her head down and raised after a few seconds.

"thank you", she lipped out shyfully.

I came into sense and left removing my vision.

"what has happened to me? I am so attracted towards her. But what can I do? Her magical soot-coloured lampblack eyes calls me. Whenever I go infont of her, I forget myself. Oh no what I am thinking. I can never keep her happy", I.was struggling with my mind.

At the break, when I went to her for lunch, she was again with that fevicol. She was laughing with her idiotic friend.

"she always fights with me but laughing with this bee. Huh. No no housefly. Most cheap", my mind cursed him again.

Within this she gazed and called me "heyy rd, come na. See his meeting is finised, so he is here".

My mind cursed again "her eyes still have strength to put on a glance at me. Huh".

"you know what he was doing, how frogs jump he was showing from his hands. Haha", she said still laughing.

"i wish I could really make him a live frog. Idiot people idiot task", I struggled again.

"what happened? Are you fine?", she asked.
"aaa.. I am hungry", I pouted.

"oh I am sorry I forgot", she apologized.

"its ok", I faked a smile.

We had lunch and completed out shoot. It was evening time and I made way towards sea shore where we usually met. I reached there and not to my surprized she was with that fevicol housefly. I fumed in anger and hiding it I went to them.

To be continued...

Thank you 4 reading... Lv u all... Plz try 2 cmnt... N senior members plz me wat is ds res unres... N y ppl do dese n hw...

Smiti...

Edited by Nain5000 - 11 years ago

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Anushka Mukherjee

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Posted: 11 years ago

#214

its auperb awesome lovely fab updet asap.😃

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don girls

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Posted: 11 years ago

#215

awesome update

rd getting jealous of sid

nice

update soon

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Archana Kannan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#216

ha ha fevicol Sid 🤣 my bechara RD ... he is so j of Sid ... ha ha i really loved this part...Eagerly waiting for next part..pls update asap dear...

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Karishma Sewani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#217

hey, this update was awesome! Totally it defined that randhir is in love with her, and he is not ready to accept it, maybe because he feels he won't keep her happy!

Res- people will comment 'res' when they are a bit busy to comment about things at the time. It means reserved. They reserve their comments so that they can come back at their free time, and edit and comment on it about the views of a particular thread. Matlab agar kisi ko comment karna hai, lekin he wants to first reserve a comment, so that baadme he can comment about the post in a detailed way.

unres - unres means unreserved, Jo log apna comment reserve karte hai, woh log thodi der baad unreserve karte hai, by editing their ressed comment, so that they can bring their detailed views about the post! I hope this helps! I am not good at making people understand things! :p

thanks a tonne for pm'ing! Continue soon, lots of love! Keep writing, always. <3

Edited by karishmagsewani - 11 years ago