Love me or Hate me,A Kriyansh Story(update on Thread 2) - Page 14

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
Loved it so much
Kriya hate him and he is like her
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
Class room scane
And
Kriya ne kya kalyan kiya hai
Hahahaha
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Blackheart-

Awesome update
Class room scane
And
Kriya ne kya kalyan kiya hai
Hahahaha

thaank uu for the lovely comment,yaa kriya ne rey ko upar kuch zyada hi kalyan kar diya😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
AHA SO NYC UPDATE LUVD IT PLS DO UPDATE SOON
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey meghna,mujhe tumhara ye comment dekh ke bohot achha laga😆 (tum mujhe pagal mat samaj na abhi😳) neways,mein sunday tak update kar dungi hopefully,actually i have a exam on friday so time nehi mil raha hai zyada😊😊
Edited by pia.raha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Kiarawinget16

AHA SO NYC UPDATE LUVD IT PLS DO UPDATE SOON

thaank uu soo mucchhh fr the lovely comment!! yaa will update by sunday,hopefully😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

PHASE SIX OF THEIR LIVES: (TRUTH OR DARE)

Next morning,Rey and Vicky were sitting in the classroom,kriya entered the class,kriya was passing rey's bench to seat in her bench,when rey stood in front of kriya.

Rey(with his charming smile): Apne partner ko good morning wish nehi karogi,miss.kriya ghai😉

Kriya (with a fake smile): mr.reyansh singhania,sorry to disappoint u,but mein good morning sirf apne doston ko wish karti hu,and then he turned to Vicky,and with a sweet smile,wished Vicky a good morning.😊

Vicky: hey kriya,good morning to u too😊

Rey (his smile still on): aahaa,this is not fair😛

Kriya: everything is fair in (kriya stopped a bit and said "war" skipping the love part)😳

Rey: WAR ke sath LOVE bhi hota hai jaaneman,uus bechare ko kyun bhul rahi ho😉

Kriya's eyes got widened 😲,and she opened her mouth to say something,but kya kahe kuch dimag mein hi nehi aa raha tha,and the professor entered the class,kriya pushed rey out of her way,and finally got seated!!

Swayam: kriya tumhara daily routine ho gaya?

Kriya(in an innocent tone): kaise routine swayam?

Swayam: rey ke sath jhagda,tum dono ka digestion mein problem hota hai na,jab tak ek dusre ki baat na kato

Kriya: mein kya karoon swayam,wo humesha mujhe itna irritate karta hai,ke mera dimag kharab ho jaata hai

Swayam: jo cheez pehle se bigri hui hai...😆

Kriya: swayam,tu pitega mujhse😡

Swayam: okay okay,chill,par tumhe agar itne problem ho rahi hai,then mere dusre side mein baith sakti ho

Kriya: nehi re baba,waha to shivam hai,wo bohot irritating hai

Swayam: kriya tumhe kya sab irritate karte hai???

Kriya: nehi I mean,wo alag type ka irritating hai,matlab reyansh bhi irritate karta hai,par wo us tarah ka bura nehi hai,par shivam,the way he looks at me,it feels so disgusting,and the way he is always trying to make frandshp with me,arrghhh shivam never ever!!!😡

Swayam: Finally shivam ke waje se hi sahi tumharein muh se rey ke liye kuch achha nikla to,aj to bhagvan bhi khush ho gaye honge

Kriya: swayaaamm,shut up!!!

And they both laughed😃😃

Later that day,the guys team were having a match with the seniors,it was almost going to be a tie,but at the last moment,rey scored a basket and they won against the seniors.

But the seniors couldn't digest the fact that they have lost against juniors,so they thought of insulting the captain of the juniors team i.e reyansh.

The gang changed into their casuals, took their belongings and were walking out of the boys locker room ,suddenly rey remember that he forgot to take his locket which he has placed in front of the mirror.

Rey: Vicky mein apna locket leke aata hu

Rey took his chain and turned around,and he saw the seniors facing him.

Seniors- congrats rey,for winning the match,enjoy this day bcoz aj ke baad ye din aur nehi aayega,afterall tum apna hobby jo change kar rahe ho

Rey was puzzled about what they were talking: what are u guys talking about

Seniors: are reyansh,samjhe nehi,to hum samjha dete hai,ab to tumhari hobby singing ho gayi hai,aur suna hai ek ladki tumhe attitude dikhati hai,kya din aa gaye hai reyansh ek ladki se haar gaya,ladkiyan to tumhein ghiri rehti kahi,un ladkiyon ke beech mein rehte rehte tum bhi to ladkiii,nehi nehi tum kitna bhi ek ladki se haaron,kitna bhi ek ladki ko kaabu mein na kar sako,tum ball ko to kaabu kar sako ge na? waise kaun sa gaana gaa rahe ho,zara hume bhi suna na,,and the seniors were laughing among them,dekhna ladkiyon ka shauk palte -palte kahiii tu bhiii...

Rey: don't worry guys,reyansh singhania is a multitasker,aisa talent sab ke pass nehi hoti

By saying this he dashed out of the locker room and met Vicky in the way

Vicky: kya hua,tu kis soch mein hai??

Rey: kuch nehi (although he gave those seniors a kadak jawab,but whatever they said was disturbing his mind)

The guys entered the classroom,where the girls were playing truth or dare,the guys also joined them.

Vicky: chal rey truth or dare khelte hai

Rey: tu ja,mera maan nehi hai

Vicky: rey ka mood to humesha on rehta hai,aur aj to hum logo ne match bhi jeeta,to phir tu kis soch ke duniya mein hai

Rey: Vicky tu ja na,mera maan nehi hai,mein kuch der akela rehna chahta hu

Sharon called them to join.

Vicky: coming Sharon !!!

Rey sitted beside a wondow and was engroosedd in his thoughts "kya mein ek ladki se haar sakta hu,kya hoga mere reputation ka,cummon rey aise baat nehi hai,wo sab ek game hai bas,aur us game mein tu har raha hai!!!"😕

Meanwhile in the truth or dare game,the bottle pointed towards swayam and swayam chose dare.

Neel: swayam propose sharon in a filmy way

Swayam recollected all the filmy lines he could gather and proposed Sharon "Sharon tune maari entry aur dil mein baaji ghanti,tumhe dekh ke kuch kuch hota hai,kya tum is yuvraj ki queen banogi?? "😉

Sharoon: nehiii ye tumne kya keh diya,aur kuch na kaho,hum sath sath hai😆

And everyone was laughing on the floor by hearing this proposal😆

(mind u guys,they were just playing game,no one had any crushes on each other,and Sharon was a fun loving girl,so they were giving each other all types of dares)

The bottle was spinned again and this time it pointed to kriya!!!

Kriya: ohh noo😳

The gang: ohh yesss😃

Kriya: I will choose truth

Sharon: sorry kriya u already chose truth the earlier time,u have to choose dare now,this is the new mended rulee

Kriyaa: okkkayy fine then dare

Swayam: okay so tumhara dare hoga ke tum rey ke pass jayoo aurrr

Kriya: noways I am proposing rey

Vicky: okay kriya madam,agar tum propose nehi kar sakti to uuse ek thappar marke is game mein le aayo,kab se bula raha hu aata hi nehi,but mind it haan,thappar halke se hi marna,zor se nehi

Kriya: I will kill u guys!!!!!😡

Kriya finally hesitantly went to rey.

Rey (in his mind): ye kya soch raha hai tu,tu kab se itna soch ne laaga,par wo log bhi to thi thik hi bol rahe the,kriya has shown me a lot of attitude,and I have always ignored that,she is an arrogant girl!!! Or am i thinking too much,am I right or am i

Rey couldn't complte his thought bcoz kriya has just slapped him !!!!

Rey stood up in an instant and literally shouted on kriya: what the hell!!! What do u think of urself!!! Tumne mujhe thappar mara,tumme itni himmat ke tum mujhe thappa maro!!!! What do u think,every guy will fall ur pretty face,then get it in ur mind,I am not like other guys!!! Behind this pretty face,there is the cold hearted arrogant person!!! And I very well know how to teach ur type of girls a lesson!!!!😡😡

(kriya didn't slap him hard,but rey was already in an angry state,amdst all his confusions,and this slap acted as a catalyst)

Kriya eyes were filled with tears,aj tak kisi ne bhi use aise uchi awaz mein baat nehi ki thi!!!

Vicky: rey shut up kya bol raha hai

Rey: chup kar Vicky,I very well know this type of girls!!!

Kriya couldn't hold her tears more and she left the classroom crying. The girls followed kriya to console her.

swayam: rey tera dimag kya kharab ho gaya hai,kriya aisi nehi hai,uski koi galti nehi hai,humne hi

Rey: o plzz swayam tu to uski side le ga hi,mujhe kuch nehi sunna!!! And he also left the classroom in a rage

Swayam: Vicky,rey ko samjhana hoga

Vicky: haan swayam,ek kaam kar aj tu aa mere ghar,eksath rey ke ghar jayenge aur uuse samjhayenge,I am sure koi cheez rey ko dsturb kar raha hai,warna wo aise react nehi karta.

And the chapter ends here,ab dekh te hai,kya rey apni galti samjhega,kya wo kriya ko sorry bolega,aur kya kriya uuse forgive karegi?? The qstion which was there in my intro i.e can a slap be then beginning of a frndshp or it will be the end of the road??

NOTE: GUYS,i know FRIENDSHIP DAY ke din maine rey ko thappar laga diya kriya se,infact i was also gettng hesitant about whetehr i should update also today or not,phir kar hi diya😳 and as a compensation,itna bada update likhi huu,so that u guys dont beat me😆 but in a way this update will show how vicky is also concerned for kriya,so friendship part is full there!!!!!😊😊

aramya,monika,sanchita,meghna,hina,akansha,pooja,rajeshwari, blackheart a veryy big thhaank uu too every1 of uu who commented soo sweetlyy and i lovee long commentss,so thaank uu fr giving lone commentss,i hope is baar bhi long comments mile😊😊 md,tumhe to thank uu bolna mana hai,so a hug for u🤗 sana,my new reader i hope u continue reading!!! and ria,i have given here every1's scenes,hope u also like it!!!!!😊😊

p.s- happy friendship dayy!!!!!

Edited by pia.raha - 11 years ago
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pia even mere b xams chal rahe hai
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awesum part...
pia abhi k liye chotu se comment se kaam chala lo bada vala kal karungi
happy frndship day!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update...

loved it..

really interesting...

kriYam's convo was amazing..

bloody seniors..
how dare they?? 😡

SLAP!
is dare ne to aag mein aur ghee daal diya :P
damn interesting..

d3 ke purane din yaad gye..

update the next part soon.. :)

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