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Posted: 11 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: scarletmalik

read both d chapters

awsome updates
nice going
xcited to know about d dream nd nigtmare situations of d hostel rooms
continue soon
nd thnx 4r pm



Thanks for your comment
I will update the next chapter till Monday
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
lol wat was that with their roomies... waiting for next update..
love
samyuktha😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: sandra22

lol wat was that with their roomies... waiting for next update..

love
samyuktha😳



Thanks for reading and replying too.😊
The idea just popped up in my mind to add some Friends and some villains to this FF šŸ˜†
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24

CHAPTER3

Recap
Both Sanyu and Raj thought that they might be dreaming. But one wanted to remain dreaming and other wanted to come out of the night mare.

Boys Dorm
Raj: Tum? Yahan. Aur tum bhi. Oh no

Randhir: Oh so here's the savior of Miss Thesaurus. How come you are here?

Raj: I am your roomie

Randhir : What? Fine. At least you would get some kind of common sense by living with me.

Raj: I am not seeking your permission. Get that and don't cross my way.

Randhir: The same is applicable for you. Don't cross my way.

Raj : Who do you think you are? Bloody flirt. I know you were trying to flirt with my friend. Didn't your parents teach you how to behave with girls and so you behave like a...

He was cut by an unexpected attack on his neck. Randhir's eyes were bloodshot red. He had listened enough. His anger had reached its peak.

The other guy who kept mum till now intervened between the two.

Boy : RD chood ussey. Pagal ho gaya hain kya tu. Chood

Randhir : How dare you speak a word against my family? How dare you?(Meanwhile the guy pulled him back) Tu chood mujhe Sameer. Iski toh main...

Sameer : RD tu chal yahan se

Randhir got agitated and he left the room

Sameer: (to raj) Dekh junior college mein teri bahut suni thi. Par yahan nahi. Dekha na. Do mahinon mein mujhe RD jaisa dost mila. Aur aaj toh maine tujhe bacha liya par agli bar ...

He walked towards the door and suddenly he turned back and said

Sameer : Waise SANYU kaisi hain? Kuch sudhri yaa phir...

With that he left the room. Raj stood there puzzled.

Raj's POV: Kuch bhi ho, main Sanyu ko iss bare mein nahi bata sakta. Jab tak ho sake yeh baat usse chupaani hogi.

Girls Dorm

Sanyu broke the hug and said

Sanyu: Kausto main tujhe bata nahin sakti main kitni khush hu aur tu jaanti hain...

Kausto : Nahin pehle meri baat sun tujhe pata hain kya humari dusri roomie kaun hain? Agar who acchi hui toh theek hain or else I will have to do something special for her aur kya tujhe...

Sanyu : Bas kar kausto. Kitna bolegi? Pehle jo mein keh rahi hu who sun. Phir dekh tere hosh kaise nahin udte. Ruk par main bataungi nahi warna phirse badbad karegi.

Kaustoki started shouting like a mad person when the warden came and scolded both the girls

Sanyu : Kya yaar pehle hi din daant padi teri wajah se. Ab toh tujhe surprise kal hi milega.

Even after too much coaxing from Kausto Sanyu didn't tell her about the surprise

Outside the Boys Dorm

RD was fuming with anger and Sameer was trying to pacify him.

Sameer : Dekh bhai aaj tu jaake so jaa hum kal hi authorities se jaake room change karwa lenge. Main hu naa tere saath.

RD hugged him and said : Thanks yaar, par mujhe akela chod de. Hum kal milte hain.

Sameer: Theek hain. Bye. Take care.

RD kept looking at the stars and wondered why was his life so complex.

Sameer's POV : Haan main tere saath tab tak hu jab tak tu mere kaam ka hain uske baad...

In this way everyone had made an image of the other in their minds and were ready to face their destiny.

Authors Note: Hey here's the next chapter. Do tell me how it was. Criticism is welcomed😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
Hey! Nice update. Though, it was really short.
Sameer is Randhir's friend??? :O
I found this so damn funny!
And our Randhir is always fuming with anger.And Sanyu's surprise. YaYaYaYa
Thanks for the PM. And update soon.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
wat???? sameer??? nononono... jaldi use picture se door kardo... aur yeh kya woh sanyu ko jaanta hai???// nahiii
waise kya twist laayi ho...

love
samyuktha😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
Read all the parts In a go. Can't wait for more.
I read the character sketch n I was like Vidushi with a mysterious past? Sandhir?
Count me in for the ride!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: Zyra

Hey! Nice update. Though, it was really short.

Sameer is Randhir's friend??? :O
I found this so damn funny!
And our Randhir is always fuming with anger.And Sanyu's surprise. YaYaYaYa
Thanks for the PM. And update soon.😊



Thanks for reading😊
I know it was too short. Sincere apologies😃
Yes but he is kind of same as in the show
It was funny But he will be a great reason for Sandhir unisionšŸ˜‰
And about Randhir's angeršŸ¤”...You will soon come to know about itšŸ˜†
And Sanyu's surprise is a secretšŸ˜†
Edited by RisingPhoenix - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: sandra22

wat???? sameer??? nononono... jaldi use picture se door kardo... aur yeh kya woh sanyu ko jaanta hai???// nahiii

waise kya twist laayi ho...

love
samyuktha😳




Thanks for reading And villain ko toh ek na ek din jaana hi padta hain
Aur ussey toh pitwa ke bhejenge🤣
TwistšŸ¤” Sochna padhega😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: infernofyre

Read all the parts In a go. Can't wait for more.
I read the character sketch n I was like Vidushi with a mysterious past? Sandhir?
Count me in for the ride!



Thanks for reading
And about the mystical pasts of the 3... The story will get a twist😃

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