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Posted: 11 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: chowanisha

RES

UNRES

HEY SORRY I CUDNT COMMNT BFRE!!!!!

BTH THE PROLOGUE AND CS WS EYECATCHNG!!!!😊

WILL B WAITNG FR THE UPDATE!!!



Its absolutely fine and i am glad that you replied and commented😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: Zyra

You've already mentioned a college name in the prologue. -.-




Hey thanks for commenting😃. I am glad that u read😊 but the college name is funny😕 and i want a new name 😉Will update the next chapter tomorrow😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
Oh LOL!
I'll be waiting for the Update.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 1

She was about to whack him when he turned and said, 'Ladkiyon ko ladkon ke piche hi rehna chachiye.''

One glance at his face and her mouth formed a perfect O'

Sanyu: You? How come you are here and what the hell did you mean by that?

Meanwhile the guy started laughing hysterically.

Boy: Kya karu, tujhe chidane mein bahut maza aata hain.

She got up and gave him a detesting look.

Sanyu: Raj! I will kill u now. Tumhari problem kya hain, idiot. Yaha bhi aa gaye mujhe pareshaan karne. Huh

Raj: Arrey yaar tum jaha hum waha. Aur tujhe aise akele thodi naa chodta. Waise tuje pareshaan karna koi badi baat nahin hain. Bas tere andar ki dayan ko jaga do jo ke tu bahar se bhi hain

Sanyukta was pissed off by his behavior. She showed him her tounge and submitted her form.

Raj: Chal ab canteen jate hain

Sanyu: Haan chal chal

CANTEEN

They were standing near the counter and she was reading the menu

Sanyu: One veg. cheese burger, one frankie, one samosa...

Raj: Oye khaadod moti kitna khayegi aur kya akelike liye hi manga rahi hain

Sanyu: Excuse me Ladkiyon se tameez se baat karte hain aur mota tu hain FATSO

Raj: O hello Miss you are a fatso

The giggled and chatted for a log time. Then they decided to move towards their respective hostels

They were chatting on their way when she turned towards her hostel and bumped into someone. The person was about to fall but she left her luggage and held him by his hand. They were lost in each others eyes when...

Authors Note : Hey I know everyone expected the stranger to be randhir. And I know that I didn't mention about him in the cs but then there would be no surprises😃. I will update the next chapter tomorrow do leave your comments😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Me first? :O
Nyc Update!
Raj... Ummm...
And Tell me the guy who fell in the end is Randhirrr
Update soon!
By The Way, thanks for the PM.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Zyra

Me first? :O

Nyc Update!
Raj... Ummm...
And Tell me the guy who fell in the end is Randhirrr
Update soon!
By The Way, thanks for the PM.




Thanks for commenting
Glad that you've replied
I will update the next chapter tomorrow
And the guy who fell.. I'll surely tell you tomorrow😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey that was cute.. do continue... n pm me too
love
samyuktha😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sandra22

hey that was cute.. do continue... n pm me too

love
samyuktha😳



Hey thanks for reading i will be updating the next chapter tomorrow 😃
Don't worry i will PM you😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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CHAPTER2

RECAP
They were chatting on their way when she turned towards her hostel and bumped into someone. The person was about to fall but she left her luggage and held him by his hand. They were lost in each others eyes when...

They shared an eye lock
Sanyu was first to come out of the long eye lock as Raj coughed

Raj: Are u all right Sanyu?

This made the stranger come out of her hazel orbs and he stood up straight on his legs.

Sanyu: Yeah (feeling too uncomfortable)

Boy: Yeah sure. Why wouldn't she be fine? Every girl wants to demonstrate herself the best in front of Randhir Singh Shekhawat THE RANK NO. 1

Sanyu: Excuse me. What do you mean?

Randhir: That you are a desperate.

Sanyu:What? I'm desperate.YOU FOOL And what if you are Rank no. 1? Who do you think you are? A sophisticated, well cultured and pre eminent personality. For whom all the girls of the town are dying. Then you are wrong mister. Because you are a stupid, arrogant, egoistic, nasty, loathsome, obnoxious, pathetic, jerk!

Randhir: Hello. Miss thesaurus, from where have you learned so many expressions that are synonymous to you. I suppose people refer to you using the same words, right?

Sanyu: Why don't you mind your own business. And please take your disgusting face away.

Randhir: I always mind my own business and don't push others as some stupid, arrogant, egoistic, nasty, loathsome, obnoxious, pathetic and jerks do. Did you get that Miss Thesaurus

Sanyu: Listen my name is Sanyukta Aggarwal and if you can not call me by my name please don't call me at all.

Randhir: Who is interested in calling you?

Sanyu: Then why are you?

Randhir: I'm not.

Sanyu: Then get lost.

Randhir: Why shall I? Who the hell are you to tell me that.

Sanyu: Exactly. Why are you giving me a lecture.

Blah blah blah

They continued their fight and Raj got agitated.

Raj: Just shut up both of you.

Randhir: Tell her not me

And randhir left from there.

Sanyu: Kyoun jaane diya usko. Mujhe usse sabak sikhana tha

Raj: Shut up and go to your room we will meet tommrow.

Sanyu: (Looking at his frustrated face) OK bye. We will meet tomorrow at the canteen

Raj: Sure

And they parted their way towards their dorm.

Boys Dorm

Raj entered the hostel and looked at his key. It read room no. 6. He reached his room with the help of some seniors and as he opened the door he got the worst surprise

Raj: Tum? Yahan. Aur tum bhi. Oh no

Girls Dorm

Sanyu too found her room after being bullied by the seniors. As she opened the door she got the best surprise she could get. She almost screamed

Sanyu: Tu yaha! Yeah...Yippee

Girl: Sanyu? Tum . YES YES YES. I can't believe it. I can't tell you I am so happy.

She said as she ran and engulfed Sanyu in a bone crushing hug

Both Sanyu and Raj thought that they might be dreaming. But one wanted to remain dreaming and other wanted to come out of the night mare.

Authors Note: I am done writing. Phew. I know its not that interesting but surely guess who the roomies would be. Do leave your precious comments.


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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
read both d chapters
awsome updates
nice going
xcited to know about d dream nd nigtmare situations of d hostel rooms
continue soon
nd thnx 4r pm

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