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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
Chapter-3
Recap:KRIA LOOKS UP AND
SHOUTS
SWAAYAMM
SAM:DOLL WHAT HAPPENED (WHILE GULPING )MAINE AISA KYA KIYA JO TU MERA PURA NAAM LE RAHI HAI
AUR KISE KOSTE HUE JA RAHI HAI(WHILE STANDING UP)
SWAYAM OFFERES HIS HAND TO KRIA FOR STANDING UP BUT SHE DECLINES
KRIA:THANKYOU SO MUCH PAR MAIN APNA DHTAN KHUD RAKH LUNGI
WAISE BHI ITNE SARE ANJAN LOGO KE BEECH MEIN TOH MUJHE AKELA CHOD DIYA AB KYU HELP OFFER KAR RAHA THA
(SHE SAYS THIS WHILE STANDING UP AND WITHOUT A BREAK)
SAM(TRYING TO HOLD HIS LAUGH):KYA HUA AISE RANI LAXMI BAI MODE MEIN KYU AAYI HUI HAI.NAYA SAAL START HUA AT LEAST WISH TOH KARDETI PHIR LADTI
KAHI AISA NA HO AB HUM SAARA SAAL HI LADTE RAHE
DOLL:PLZ SAM DON'T CHANGE THE TOPIC AUR HUM DONO KO PATA HUM ZADA DER TAK EK DUSRE SE NAHI LAD SAKTE(WHILE CALMING DOWN A LITTLE AND FORWARDING TO HUG HIM )
THEY HUG AND KRIA SAYS HAPPY NEW YEAR SAM BGAGWAN KARE TUJHE ISS SAAL TERI DREAM GIRL MILJAYE AUR MUJHE TUJHE KARNE ME KOI COMPANY DENE WALI(WHILE GIGGING)
SAM:HAHAHA THAT'S NIT FUNNY
KRIA:NO IT IS FUNNY
JUST IMAGINE THE SWAYAM SHEKHAWAT JISKE PE LADKIYAN MARTI WOH AB TAK APNI DREAM GIRL KO IMPRESS NAHI KARPAYA
SAM:OH PLZ WOH ISLIYE KYONKI WOH MERI DREAM GIRL HAI
"SHE IS WAY TO SPECIAL"
SHE IS THE SHARON RAI PRAKASH AND FUTURE WILL BE SHARON SWAYAM SHEKHAWAT.(HE SAID WITH FULL CONFIDENCE)

KRIA:ITNA CONFIDENCE
TOH AB KYO NAHI MAANI
SAM:KYONKI MAINE AB TAK USE NAHI BATAYA KI MAIN...(HE SUDDENLY STOPS REALISING WHAT HE WAS GOING TO SAY)
KRIA:TUNE KYA SAM
SAM:...
KRIA:(SIGHING) TUNE USSE AB TAK NAHI BATSYA KI TU KON HAI TERE REAL IDENTITY KYA HAI
SAM:PHIR WAHI BAAT DOLL MAINR TUJHE KAHA THA NAA MAIN CHAHTA HU KI WOH MUJHSE PYAAR MERE STATUS SE NAHI AUR JUS DIN WOH MUJHSE ITNA PYAAR KARNE LAGEGI KI USSE MERE STATUS SE FARK NAA PADE MAIN USSE SAB KUCH BATA DUNGA .
KRIA:BUT SAM TUJHE NAHI LAGTA KI YE GALAT HAI
I MEAN YOU WANT HER TO FALL IN LOVE WITH YOU WITHOUT KNOWING WHO YOU ARE.
SAM:LOOK KRIA I KNOW KI TU KYA KEHNA CHAHTI HAI BUT MAIN CHAHTA HOON KI WOH APNE STATUS YA DOOSRO KE BAARE ME NAHI KHUD KE BAARE ME SOCHE.
KRIA:ACHA CHAL CHOD TU BATA KAHA THA ITNI DERTAK
MUJHE PARTY ME AAYE ITNA WAQT HOGAYA AUR TUJHSE AB MIL RAHI HOON
SAM:ARRE BAS GUESTS KO SAMHAL RAHA THA(SAYS WITH A YOU-KNOW -NA-HOW-IT-IS-SMILE KE SAATH)
KRIA:HAAN PATA HAI PATA HAI AB JAHA ITNI SAARI LADKIYAN KHUD KO TUJH PAR PHANK RAHI HO TOH AKHI NAA KAHI CHUPNA HI PADTA HAI
(AFTER A PAUSE)
WAISE SAM MAIN SOCH RAHI JAB TERI DREAM GIRL DEKHIGI KI
YOU HAVE SO MANY GIRLS THROWING THEMSELVES ON YOU TAB USSE KAISA LAGEGA ...
I MEAN JEALOUSY KE MAARE BECHARI TOH MAR JAYEGI(AND SHE STARTS LAUGHING)
SAM:AB KON WOH BAAT SHURU KAR RAHA HAI
SAM:ACCHA CHAL BATA COLLEGE KA KYA PLAN HAI
KRIA:COLLEGE KA KYA JAYENGE TOH DEKHA JAAYEGA
SAM:OH HELLO ALREADY TU LATE ADMISSION HAI BOHUT KUCH HAI TERE COVERUP KARNE KE LIYE SO TAKE IT SERIOUSLY
KRIA:FINE I WILL(AND AYAWN ESCAPED HER MOUTH)
SAM:OOW SOMEONE IS SLEEPY(WITH A CHUCKLE)
KRIA:SHUT UP AND DROP ME HOME
SAM:FINE WAISE BHI AAJ KE LIYE BOHUT BAATE HOGAYI
BAAKI KAL KARENGE (AN OTHER YAWN ESCAPED KRIA'S MOUTH)

THEN SWAYAM DROPPED KRIA HOME

DO REVIEW

I know it wasn't right place to leave but bear with it and plz buddy vaishnavi11 if you want pms next time.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
amazing update
next time only kr & barra walla update
then barra comment too
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
nyc one

loved the kriyam bond

update it soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
Amazing update...
Love kriyam's bond...
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
the chapter was fabulous ... really liked both friends conversation...
do continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
nice update...

loved it...

loved kriyam's bonding...

update soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
great yaar.

love the friendship and the dream girl part.

so true to the character of Swayam.

also love this Kria and can't wait to see what happens in college
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
It was intresting
kria n sw ki tlk
i was really nice
mujh starting to ahut hi fadu lagi
kria sw pe gussa kar rai thi
n then sw ki dreamgil pe discussion
really nice
love it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
Lovely update
Kriyam were cute

Continue soon

Thanks for update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
chapter 4

After kria left swayam was going inside the club to inform his friends that the party is over and they can go their home now.
He was just going inside as he bumped into a lost rey.
There head bumped into each other causing an ouch noise from both of them
Sam: aaj kya bumping day hai
Rey:what
Sam: what kya what kaha dhan de kar chal raha tha
Rey: tu meri chod aur yeh bata kit u itni der se tha kaha par chala gaya tha itni der wait ki maine teri andar.
You know I thought ki itne dino ke baad hum log saath me ml kar masti karenge waise bhi Mumbai me toh tere apni rep ko secret rakhne ke stupid decisions ki wajah se hum saath me masti kar nahi paate .
Sam: woh who...
Itna zyada gussa I mean tujhe hua kya itna kyu bol raha hai saans toh lele pehle.
Achha bata kya hua
Rey:kuch nahi bas aise hi who ladki (he suddenly stops saying realizing he has what will he say to swayam)
Sam: arre chup kyu hogaya bata naa
Rey: arre kuch nahi bas aise hi
Tu meri chod tu mujhe ye bata kit u kaise logo ko iss party mein bulata hai itna attitude
Sam: look who's saying
Rey:shut up yaar
Sam: accha bata kya hua
Rey:kuch nahi mera ek ladki se choti si fight hogayi phir uske baad maine use mere saath dance karne ki dare di aur...( he was about say something but he was cut in between by swayam)
Sam: phir toh tu definitely jit gaya hoga phir kyu muh latka rakha hai
Rey: tu pehle meri baat toh sunle pehle
(swayam gives him a look of go on)
Rey: hum dono mein se koi nahi jeeta
Sam: what aise kon si ladki ti jisne tujhe hara dia
Rey: haraya nah hum dono ke bich mein ty hua
Sam:haan phir bhi tu mujhe puri baat bata
Rey tells him the whole incident with telling him that he liked hr dance very much and also wanted to meet her
Sam: toh tu use mil na chahta hain
Rey:haan isliye toh main tujhe dhund raha tha
Sam:aur main isein teri kya help kar sakta hun
Rey;kyon who teri party mein aayi thi toh tu use janta hi hoga naa
Sam: haan par who toh main tujhe tab bataunga naa jab tu mujhe ye bataega ki who kaisi dikhti thi
Rey quickly tells him what he knew like the dress she was wearing her hairs but the thing in which he got lost while telling about was her eyes
Swayam knew about whom rey was talking about but he decided to tease rey for sometime so he decided he wouldn't mention about rey getting lost instead he just gained his attention and told hm that he would find out this girl and let him know
Rey said ok and after that they headed home

Next day
Sam:rey uth jaa mujhe kahin jaana hai and u r coming with me?( shouting)
Rey: kaam tujhe han mujhe nahin (groaning)
Sam: if u want to see your mistery girl you will get down your ass off that bed in10 minutes( shouting a little)
After 10 minutes rey came down running water dripping from his wet hairs
Sam on seeing rey: wow mujhe nahi pata tha ek ladki tujh par itna effect kar sakti hai
Rey: shut up koi effect nahi hai I just liked her dance ok
Sam: accha ab chalein
Rey: when did I holded ur hands
Edited by VAISHNAVI11 - 11 years ago

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