KRIYANSH FF MY LIFE IMPORTANT NOTE ON PG12 PLZ SEE - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
i just finish read your part 4 now... so swayan had a talk to rey if he want to know
about that girl and get ready and meet me soon... and chapter was fabulous...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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CHAPTER 5

After reaching kriya's home swayam was having a badheache bcoz all the way rey was asking him questions like what's her name ,how he found out that this was the girl from last nite and what was his relation with her

Sam:shut up kitne questions puchta hai tu rey chal rahe hai naa andar sar dard kardya hai tune mera

Ab toh aisa lag raha hai ki jo baat karne aaya tha who hi bhul chukka huun(he mumbeled the last part)

They went in

Swayam saw that kaka was going upstairs to wake up kriya

Swayam stopped kaka in his tracks and told him he will wake up kriya

Kaka:thk hai beta aap kriya bitya ko utha aayiye main nashte ki taiyar karta hun

All this time rey was just looking around the house and not paying attention to anything suddenly swayam shouted his name gainng hs attention

Rey:haan ...yaar chilla kyun raha hai yahi toh khada hun

Sam:khada yahi hai par dhyaan ahi aur hai

Rey:accha ek baat th bata ye ladki hai kaun

Sam(frustatedly):tu phir shuru hogaya thodi der wait nahi karsakta kab se mera dimag kha raha hai

Rey:yaar tu saari bato ko ek jaisa kyun leta hai

I just mean to say that ki ghar kaafi achha hai bahr se toh koi normal ghar hi lag raha tha but andar se dekh kar pata lag raha hai it has got some class

Sam:tu ye sab chod main upar jaa raha hunt u chal raha hai kya

Rey just motioned swayam to go on and he will follow him

THEY WENT IN A ROOM

A beautiful girl was sleeping with a smile on her face

Swayam came near the the girl and brushed bac the strands of hair falling on her face

Sam:good morning princess

Kriya:hmmm

Sam:good morning its time to wake up

All ths while rey was just looking at them

Bcoz it seemed that hey were very close and as much he knows swayam he doesn't get easily close to anyone

Finally kriya got up and opened her eyes saying good morning sam

She rubbed her eyes looked at rey and shouted TUM

Tum mere ghar me kya kar rahe ho andar kisne aane diya tumne

Rey:oh hello main bina bulaye kiske ghar par nahi jata main swayam ke saath aaya hun

Kriya shot a glare towards swayam and he gulped

Sam:what happened doll ye mera who cousin hai jiske bare men maine tujhe bataya tha

Kriya:sam ye wahi ARROGANT JERK hai jiske bare mei main kal raat baat kar rahi thi

Rey:oh hello miss mujhe arrogant bulane se pehle khud ko toh deklo MISS ATTITUDE

Kria:how dare u call me that

Rey:jaise tumne bulaya waise maine bhi

And they started fighting they were shouting at each other and kriya started throwing pillows at rey which directly hit rey's face he groned in pan and threw the pillow at kria's head

Finally swayam became FRUSTATED AND SHOUTED

SHUT UP ...SHUT UP BOTH OF BOTH OF AND STOP FGHTING LIKE KIDS

REY AND KRIYA MMEDIATELY PUTTED FINGER ON THEIR LIPS AND STARRED AT SWAYAM

SAM:YOU(POINTING AT REY)COME WITH ME

AND YOU(POINTING AT KRIYA)GET READY AND COME DOWNSTAIRS E NEED TO TALK

They both nodded and did what they was told

Edited by VAIBHAVIKR - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
Nice cappy 👏 👏
Rey ne paka dia swayam ko
🤣 🤣 🤣
Haha
Nd Kriyansh rolf
Great one thank u for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
Nice update
Kriyaansh fight was cute
Rey ne swayam ko kitna irritate kr diya

Thanks for pm

Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
update was awesome😊
loved it...
thanks for the pm 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
amazing update
wauh...
poor rey & kriya
luv there nok jok
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
wonderful update...

kriyaansh fight was superb... :P

loved it...

update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
Awsome update
Live how rey was pareshan karing sw
Rey was so desperate to meet kria
To knoe about her
That he pakaofing sw so muh
ki bchare ko headache hone laga
n kr nok jok was really amazing
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59

NOTE:

HELLO FRIENDS
I DON'T KNOW WHETHER I FEEL IT OR IT IS TRUE BUT
THERE ARE VERY LESS RESPONSE FOR THIS FF SO I HAVE DECIDED THAT I WILL POST NEXT CHAPTER WHEN THERE WILL BE SOME RESPONSE ALTHOUGH VAIBHAVI HAS ALREADY WRITTEN IT IF NOT THIS WILL BE DISCONTINUED BY THE END OF THIS MONTH
THANKS FOR READING
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
Plz dnt discontinue dis ff
M loving it
Each ff which I starts liking gets discontinue😭
The concept is awesome.
No need to say anything about kriyam
They always ROCKZZ

Kriyaansh
As usual fighting
Annoyed swayum is always a treat
"Aaj kya bumping day hai kya"

In short
It ws amazing👏

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