KriYaansh FF ~ Secret Love! Updtd (Chap 5 Pg 14) - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
#71
Cute update...:)
Kriyaansh scenes was ssoo cute n adorable...:)
Update next part really soon...:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#72
Awww awww awww it was shoo cute 👏 I loved it
jealous kriya 😆
awwiiee kriyaansh
thanks for the PM ❤️
update jldi
nd do PM me 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73
Awesome Update...
Loved jealous kriyansh...

Plz do PM me next time...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74
Hey... super amazing update...

Loved Kriyaansh...

Now I hope they confess soon n all this Aliyan mess gets sorted out...

Continue soon n thanx for the pm 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75
Ooh such cute secret love story kriyansh are always cute and about this update I always like a jealous Rey he is cute in his jealous mode plz update next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
Very cute story..
kriya n rey's bonding is portrayed lovely.
Great job 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
Hi dear !!!
Read all the updates in one go!!! And wow must say I just loved it!!! All the chappies were truly awesome.
Wanted to read on and on and on and on and ...but the
updates just ended...
the chai wala scene was super cute.. n bechara aaliyan
jealous kriya is always a treat to read :)
n the reception scene ...so adorable,the way he says ..haq se
"Varsha ko sirf bol sakta hoon
per I know k tumhe force bhi kar sakta hoon "
update soon
will be waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78
Great update👏
KR bonding is very cute😊
loved the tea scene n the reception day scene😃
pls pls update soon this time😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79
Chapter 5

Heya Peeps, I'm back with an update and this time I'm updating very quickly so I should get lambe waale comments ;)
I can't believe that it has been an year since I started writing and posting this story. Well you all might think that it shows my laziness that it's been an year since I started this story and I'm only upto chapter 5. Hahaha you are free to think that but this one year completion of this story is somehow special to me because this story is really close to my heart. I might tell you the reason, why on the completion of this story ;)
Enjoy Reading!!
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The wedding finished and it was the last night Kriya and the whole family was to stay in Raipur. Rey had to help his family with the wind-up activities so he wasn't going to leave for Mumbai soon. No body was willing to sleep because this family reunion happened after a long time on Mahesh's wedding and they all were going to get apart again so they decided to stay awake for the night and spend all the moments left together. Jai came up with the idea of playing "Acting Challenge" game and everyone including all the elderly members agreed on it. The family members divided into two groups and KriYaansh happened to be in oppossing teams. Their older cousin Anjesh got selected by mutual understanding to give them the tasks they had to act out and be the judge as well. He wrote all the tasks on paper chits and shuffled them up to make it fair for everyone. Now every member of the group had to choose from the paper chits and act out whatever it said on the chit without speaking anything but just with gestures and body movements, and the rest of the group had to guess what it was.
Jai who suggested the game got forced by his group to take the first turn. He grabbed a chit and opened it. He grinned widely while reading it and then walked up to Piya. Everyone was observing closely to guess the acting. He pointed towards the world globe nearby and then moved his two hands as if people are fighting. Then he put his hands on his heart and then took Piya's hand in his hands. Everyone was very confused. Then he acted as if he stabbed himself with a knife and fell on the floor but then got up with his hands making a heart sign on his chest.
Misha: Kya bhai itni confusing acting ki hai, huh humari team pakka haare gi.
Piya: Uh wait, I think I got it..
Everyone: 'Kya' 'Bolo' 'Jaldi'
Piya: Umm is it that dialogue from the movie Mohabbatain:
"duniya me kitni hai nafratein phir bhi dilon me hain chahatein mar bhi jayein pyaar walemit bhi jayein yaar walezinda rehti hai unki mohhabbatein"
Anjesh started clapping and spoke: Waah Piya kya guess kiya
Jai showed a thumbs up to Piya and she smiled brightly. Kriya, Misha and Mano broke into an "Awww" and Rey spoke up "Ab do pyaar karne waale hee aik dusre ki bhaasha ko jaanain ge naa". Piya blushed on his comment and Jai gave a playful smack on his shoulder. Rey and Kriya's eyes locked for a few seconds but soon they were distracted by the voices of 'continue the game', 'next turn', and all so now it was the turn of the opposite meaning Rey's team to act and guess. They all forced Rey to do the acting first. He grabbed the chit and starting laughing on reading it.
Rey: Seriously yaar Anjesh Bhai, aap bhi naa..
Anjesh: Chal chal acting kar..
Rey grabbed his mobile and acted as if he's arguing with someone over the phone. He then threw the phone away in frustration and took out a piece of paper from his pocket and tore the paper apart in anger. Then he fell down on the floor on his knees and buried his head in his lap. His acting finished and his team was really confused. Someone said fight between a couple or break up and stuff like that but no one got to the right point. The rule of the game was, if the team couldn't guess what their member acted out in 2 minutes then they loose points and the opposing team can guess if they understood so Anjesh asked the oppsing team if they understood.
Kriya suddenly blurted out: Umm was it rejection, I mean rejection in love, umm like Nakaam Aashiq types..
Anjesh: Right on Point Kriya, chit mei yahi words thay "Nakaam Aashiq".
Everyone moved on with the game but Rey got lost in deep thoughts. His own words disturbed him "Ab do pyaar karne waale hee aik dusre ki bhaasha ko jaanain ge naa"
Finally, everyone decided to have some rest when it was 3 am in the morning because the Mumbai people had to leave at 5:00 in the morning for their train. When everyone was leaving for the station, Rey didn't wake up as he was not really an early riser and Kriya got a little upset that she wouldn't get to see him while leaving. Kriya, Misha, Sherry (Kriya'a and Misha's Cousin), Piya and Mano were in one car with Mahesh and the others in different cars on the way to the station. Suddenly their car was taken off by a Pick-up Van which zoomed off from their left and they all went into shock when they saw Rey hanging on to that Van's back. Soon they all started laughing but Misha kept teasing Kriya by her naughty looks and Sherry who was aware of Kriya's feeling whispered in her ear "Woh itni jaldi nahi uthte, sirf tere liye aaye hain." Kriya felt so contended and deep inside she knew everything was happening for good.
Their train arrived after a while when they got to the station. Mahesh's family was saying Goodbye to everyone from the train windows. Rey came to Kriya's window and ruffled Misha's hair and said a sweet "Good bye and Take Care"
Misha: Bhaiyya I'm gonna miss you so much
Rey: Aww sonu I'll miss you too but main bhi jaldi Mumbai aajaoon gaa and I'll come soon to visit you.
Then he turned towards Sherry and patted her head in a brotherly manner like he always used to
Rey: Take Care Sherry..
Sherry: You too Rey Bhai..
He then turned towards Kriya who was already looking at him. He didn't lock eyes with her, nor looked at her with the same affection he was showing through all the wedding days. He just gave a little tap on her shoulder and went away without even uttering a Bye.
The train started and their was a shocked, confused but on top of all a melancholic Kriya left. She didn't know what happened all of a sudden. She was completely oblivious of Rey's strange behaviour at the end. Soon Sherry and Misha who were sitting with her driffted to sleep due to the night activities but Kriya just couldn't go to sleep even if she wanted. She just didn't know what to feel, she threw her head back on the seat and little tears started to fall from her eyes.
Tujhse hi to mili hai rahat..Tu hi to meri hai chahat..Tujhse hi to judi zindagi..
I could be overthinking, I could be totally wrong but how do I explain that you are the one I have dreamt of, all along.
Teri yaaden hai kuch adhoori..Sans adhi hai kuch hai puri..Akhon mein hai kaisi ye nami..But I cannot be assuming everything.. All those moments, all those talks and that bond I felt to be developing couldn't be an assumption. What if he didn't mean any of those things in the way I thought they were..

Mera mann.. Kehne laga..Pass ake na tu door jaa..Choone de.. Honth tere..Zara sanson mein apni basa..
I just want to end this internal fussing. I cannot keep up with this suffering. I just want some reassurance but everything seems to be crushing.
Mar mein jaun.. Mein reh na paun..Gam judai ka seh na paun..Hai tujhe pyaar ka vasta..Teri doori hai kuch adhoori..Sans adhi hai kuch hai puri..Akhon mein hai kaisi ye nami..
Now how do I go away from all this? When he is the only voice echoing in my ears and his face is the only face which comes in front of my eyes. In all these days I thought my heart got a language, my eyes got their dreams and my life obtained its purpose but now I'm just unsure if all that even exists or not..
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The next day Kriya was getting ready for her college when she recieved a call from Swayam.
Kri: Hey Swayu
Swa: Hi, hey ko chod yaar badi gadbad ho gayi hai..
Kri: Kyun aaisa kya hua
Swa: Yaar that idiot guy Harshad in our college, pata haina tujhe uska
Kri: Haan wohi jo Sharon ko like karta hai
Swa: Haan wohi, that idiot got a chance while I was at the wedding and usne Sharon ko propose kar diya
Kri: Oh Shit, tou what did Sharon say?
Swa: She asked for sometime to think about it
Kri: Damn tou mutlab she is interested as well?
Swa: Mujhe kuch nahi pata Kriya, jo bhi ho raha hai, its just confusing and I dunno what to do
Kri: Acha ruko mujhe kuch time do soch kar batati hoon
Swa: Please kuch jaldi karo warna..
Kriya ended the call without listening to him and sat on her bed dissappointedly.
(Self Talk) God aap aaise kyun karte ho? Kisi bhi pyaar karne waale ko mila nahi sakte kya? Kyun itni obstacles, itni museebatain hoti hain pyaar k raaste mei... Huh!!!
Suddenly an idea struck her mind and she ran towards Jai's room. She entered without knocking.
Jai: Kriyu kya yaar aaise koi aata hai kisi k room mei?
Kri: Bhai sunnain, aap kya karte agar aapko Piya Bhabi apni life mei naa milti..?
Jai: Kya mutlab hai?
Kri: Just answer my question Bro!
Jai: Ohkay ok Ican't imagine my life witout Piya, woh naa milti tou...
Kri: Excatly... ab aapko apna pyaar mil gaya, now its the time k kisi aur ko bhi uska pyaar dilao..
Jai: Kisko?
Kriya uttered the whole story to Jai. He denied to help at the start but then agreed on Kriya's insistance. The Rajput siblings throw a party at their place to help someone get the love of his life.
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Secret Love stories do seem to be facsinating but sometimes they become like black smoke choking you from inside. There's is no way to escape but just to extinguish the fire from inside and that is only possible if you let your feelings outside.
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Edited by fannism - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome part...
Loved the game scene...
And Rey's dialogue "Ab do pyaar karne waale hee aik dusre ki bhaasha ko jaanain ge naa" was just so fitted for Kriyansh ...

Congrats on completing 1 year of this FF...

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