SS: The Mechanics of Murder (Chapter X - Updated/Page 27)

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Manu

@.scarlet.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#121

Lovely chapter !!

You write so well ...

This one was Sandhir all the while !!

M too excited for the next one !!

Update soon !!

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Na1na

@Na1na

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#122

Hey!
Im sorry for the late reply! I was hoping that i'll get y laptop back soon and i'll comment then.. but looks like it'll still be a couple of days... and i cant stand not comenting after reading this amazing update of yours!

I loved it! And the last update too! Now i want the next one!! So much that i want to hunt you down using some sort of tracking device and ask you face to face to give me the rest of the story so i can read it just now! Atleast the next chapter! Cant wait!! These updates business is so... lame. Why cant you just post the entire story in one go anyways?!

Okay, okay... i think im losing it...i know you cant do that! Besides, typing from my phone and all...annoys me!

Anyways... as everything you have written till date, i loved this! You make even normal conversations between two people so interesting! And i love how Randhir and Sanyukta's relationship is portrayed in your story! Very real and very like them. Love this!
And so damn excited for the next!!

I know im always late in updating... do me a favor... you please don't do that!

UPDATE SOON! :D

Love always!

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athi_vrushan

@athi_vrushan

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#123

The story's name itself grabs attention and so does your story,Read it in one go .Loved the element of mystery in it .thnx for the pm.

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Samyuktha Krishnan

@samyukthakrish

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#124

whoa.. that was awesome...

love

samyuktha😳

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Janani

@U-No-Who

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#125

So, I read the entire thing in one sitting. It's really good! It reminded me of Harry Potter fanfictions, with Sanyukta as Rose Weasley and Randhir as Scorpius Malfoy. I enjoy your style, I don't think I could do setting and action description as well as you do. One more thing, I don't see mysteries here, so this is nice.

Waiting for the next part,

U-No-Who

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CoffeeandInk

@CoffeeandInk

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: Sush94
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unres:

And maybe also because I know that if F.I.T.E is closed, you'll go away and never come back to me.

awww

Loved it like always.

Please update soon, I am enjoying this way too much to wait too long.

Love,
Sush🤗

Thanks! :D

I will, ASAP :)

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CoffeeandInk

@CoffeeandInk

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: BornAries
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uff its so enthralling ... loved this chapter...😃

amazing SS 👏

Do continue soon 😊

Thanks! I shall! :D

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CoffeeandInk

@CoffeeandInk

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: ritikaagrawal
nice 😉😉 amazing prt😉😉

Thank you! C:

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CoffeeandInk

@CoffeeandInk

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: Param_love
Hey! Ri
Lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely,
lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely,
lovely update dear⭐️
Love it to the core...❤️❤️

Seriously dear ur an amazing, fantastic,
fabulous, lovely, experience writer😳
Love all ur work😳
Keep it up👍🏼
Update soon
Thanks for pm
Love
Bushra
🤗

Thank you so much! :)

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CoffeeandInk

@CoffeeandInk

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: .scarlet.
Lovely chapter !!
You write so well ...
This one was Sandhir all the while !!
M too excited for the next one !!
Update soon !!

Thank you! :D

Yep, SanDhir shipper at heart - can't really help myself! 😉

I will! :D