Sandhir TS ~Yeh Hai Aashiqui~ Part 2, Pg 12 - Page 11

Originally posted by: bewakoofLadki

Very nyc os

Originally posted by: anyania

This is a reality..can't help..
"If I am remembering correctly, which I am, don't you all have some work to do?"
this is what every victim fails to do..answer back..
people are staring at u, u become the latest gossip for the ladies at the kitty party..is this what a victim has to go through! A Victim..??
and the way she answered back shows that she is not a role model for sympathy but for her courage and her determination.
next, the way she wrote her visiting reason in the form at the hospital, clearly states that she is not embarrassed for what happened to her, it was not her fault, which normally victims fear to disclose.

Lemme just hug you! When writing about such an issue I really didn't want to write down explicit feelings and emotions. So left subtle hints here and there... And let me just say, not many people pick up on these! So let me just hug you for picking up on them and making me feel like my efforts were not wasted! So don't squirm and let me just hug you😆🤗

"What is the point? I don't have the time to go to the police station every day for no results Randhir. What will they do? To find those urr things amongst billions odd people! Do you really think I will have the energy to go and face those men when I am sixty years old when the case would have just reached the court proceedings? There are 2 women who get raped every hour in India and I will just add to that number, nothing more!"
a reality..which we can't deny..but later it is seen that whatever n however it is, we nd people have faith in the system which is the most important thing..we have to accept this in the way it is..

There really is nothing we can do about the reality! I thought after the Delhi rape case it would change! But it has increased since then! That was a major blow to me!🤢

and that tattoo is the symbol of never ending faith, confidence and a fightback..
i loved the whole concept..

Thank You! Tattoos really appeal to me for some reason! And unlike others, some people do get it for a meaning... So me included that!

and Randhir being wid her in her most difficult phases is worth reading.
He not only helped her in being herself in the journey who she is but also helped her to pull back after the incident and start afresh..

Again let me just hug you! I felt like showing how different the two males are! Sameer and Randhir! Because I would like to believe that there exist such guys like Randhir in this TS😳

u took a sensitive topic..hats off and the way u wrote nd presented it is commendable Pari..
and most important, Love is accepting the way u r..and the rest of the gyaan about luv, i dnt knw...

The gyaan about love? I read it in novels, otherwise my brain can never come up with such profound statements!😆... All those novels and movies I watch reflect in that statement😆

do write more Pari, waiting eagerly for another one.

Next one?! Me will write happy next! Otherwise everyone will think moi to be a depressing girl😆

Originally posted by: sandra22

amazing... very well penned... was touched... u struck the chords pretty well...

do pm me ur other works..

love

samyuktha😳

Originally posted by: BeyondWords

#Part 1

I have not yet read the next part and so the first thing that came to my mind was how are you gonna end it within just two chapters? But then as a proud YHA viewer I am just too sure you will handle it just as beautifully as the first part has been penned down.

That's why I said it became really hard for me to end it in two-shots... So the next part is really "jumpy" and the two shot still turned in to a three-shot *facepalm*

I am listening to Awari For the first time as I am typing this. This song is so different, just like this fiction of yours. Well the issue, I just can't comment on it as the pain is something I can't imagine, and honestly speaking I don not really want to imagine as I don't want any woman to feel it. But I can do nothing but pity my own city which is known more its Crime record than being the capital of this country.

I know exactly what you mean! And I can't add anything more!

That issue reminds me of another episode of YHA where the brother of the hero refused to marry the heroine for the same.

Yes! Yes! Where the older brother denies to marry the girl and the younger brother marries her instead! That epi too was brilliant! We need more guys like that in this world!😳

But this one definitely much original and what makes my heart twinge more is how Mr. Mittal could let an incident (When he should be her shoulder) wipe all those memories they shared for three years, three long years. The first thing that came to my mind after this was..."Agar Sanyukta ke saath shaadi ke baad hota toh Kya tu use chhor deta Sameer, ya nahi, shayad tu sabko bolta ki woh teri patni nahi hai"

The cruel reality that we shouldn't shudder away from anymore! If all sorts of rape can happen, who says this can't! I know the double standards to which the Indian society lives by! I can say without a doubt that such things are just swept under the carpet!

Haye teri hooh saari ki saari mai...

...Par tere liye bazaari mai.

I know her falling in love will give her all she lost back, by that I mean confidence and faith in the world back. I so wish these brutality could be wiped away from the world, but then the mindset of most of us is pitiable. We are hypocrites ourselves, praying Maa Durga on one hand and I don't even know how to say it, as the though tears the woman in me. The sole thought is just so very tingly and creepy and scary and...I can't define it. You know the moment I step on the streets alone, I am like one simti hui bacchii...You never know whose intention is what. You can't be safe in metros even, forget Buses and streets. Here the condition is much worse what they show on those news channels. In fact this is not barred to the age of those inhuman men as even students of my age are too tainted.

Girls should always carry like a pepper spray or something when on public transport or streets! It is sad when you have to fear your own safety in a democratic world. And you baba, carry a pepper spray with you... Or give something dangerous at hand, likee a metal drink bottle! Those hurt let me tell you!

I can't stop myself when I think about crimes, be it tearing a woman's identity and self esteem, or be it the human trafficking factors, or terrorism, or even physical assault. So I better stop commenting about the issue or else everyone might think this to be an extended version of the TS as already people know about you and me so you know maybe...*Attempting to lighten up the mood*

You too are a social activist! Don't worry! Remember the dabbas?! (see baba, that is how you lighten people's moods!😆)

This is not as beautiful as your others works have been as this one has just elevated the standards you had set for not just you as a writer but every second writer of the forum.

Eee!!!!!!! Am actually jumping up and down on my bed right now! Don't worry it's quite sturdy and won't break😆

The emotions and pain and the incident explained through her voice, yet in third person is commendable.

I won't say I am proud to be your friend for writing thinking and spreading awareness regarding this as I am already much proud to have you much more than just a friend.

Bongs are just tooo sweet for life! *mimics baba's baby voice* "I loveee you baba" *epic-ally fails*

I am not reading the next part immediately as I want to feel the depth, the disgust and...how do I say? Feel the shot?

No problem! The next part is not too good anyways! Written in a hurry and proof reading toh you know!

P.S.-I find Awari better than every other song of the film right now, you may BLAME the shot for this.

Awari is one of the best songs from Ek Villain! The composition is brilliant!

Teri Teri

Baba...Ipti(sha) Amma😳

Originally posted by: sumana.shesha

Amazing TS :)

Originally posted by: aleena.1884

wow... simply Wow...
reading something lyk this for the 1st tym n trust me i loved it to bits... just amazing... very heart touching... painful at times but this is reality... m short of words after reading this dear... but many many many hugs to u for writing something like this... superb.. 👍🏼