Sandhir TS ~Yeh Hai Aashiqui~ Part 2, Pg 12 - Page 12

Originally posted by: sniggybabes

Pari my darling...

I lived it...

Yes it was a feel good type and i lived rd and his support fr ger...

Sanyu is really a fighter...

Proud of her :3

Amazing ts...

Keep.writing

Thnx fr pm

Muah

Love

snigdha.

Originally posted by: k.kalyani

Nice!!!!
loved it...

Originally posted by: sonakshimehta29

Lovely update..loved it!!
😆

Originally posted by: SWA1992

its sooo touching... continue soon

Originally posted by: azina

amazing story loved it

Originally posted by: remindmeiforgot

crime in india...bt loved ur post...

Originally posted by: SanDhiraddict

I wanted to quote some lines to appreciate but then found each and every word should be praised even the feelings and thoughts between the words.

Naaaw!!! You are sooo sweet duhling! Thank You sooo much! I am soo overwhelmed that you found it soo😳🤗

So for your effort just a word - heart-touching.

I was relieved when I saw this is not exactly a two-shot but three...as two shots could not justify the theme and that could be too much hurried.

I still feel like it should be longer! To me (and I know a lot others) it feels a little rushed, since it is! But me really needed to finish it! It was about 13 pages in word🤣

Take a bow👏

*humbly bows*

and then *giggles uncontrollably*😳

PM me when you write again.

I surely will!

Thank You SOOO much again!

BTW, what is your name??😃

Originally posted by: SamC

Loved it a lott!!!

Hoping to see more of ur works!!!
U write sooo awesome!! Nd dat Gratitude wala part was the best!!!

Keep writing nd smiling!

Love,
Sam!

Originally posted by: missreddy7

Where do I start??

Randhir was the doctor !!!!! Yup! I unabashedly day dreamed about him in a white doctors coat looking all good. We are besharms pari trulyyy !!

Besharmi ki height Vinu🤣 Hi-5!🤗 (cos there was no Hi-5 emoticon😆)

I loved the part when you specifically said that his eyes had care not sympathy, that really took my heart. I think for someone in that situation that truly means a lot. 'Twas beautiful my dear.

Naaw! Thank Youuu! I would like to believe that such guys exist in this world and I am sure they do!! So yeah, felt like including that!😳

And coming to the tattoo bit I thought you weren't going to say what it was about and I was going to pester you about it in the comments but you did, lemme give you a hug for that sisterrr, cause the gratitude tattoo part was one of the best things you wrote, truly amazing. And Greek just looks soo pretty.

Bwahahaha! I knew if I hadn't said it people were going to kill me... So it was impromptu but people seem to like it in the TS! So Yaaay!! Me has always wanted something in Greek tattooed near my navel (I am slightly rebellious😎), so that is why the tattoo is actually included in this TS in the first place! Random things that my mind does!

The glass shard bit was really good as well, I can keep going. You are tooo good girl! I can't stop gushing about this. But you know when she comes back into the house and the old Sanyu's back and she lights up her surroundings? I thought that ending couldn't have been better and then you go ahead and put this!

That glass shard bit too was impromptu... Since I had mentioned her "memory table" in the first part, I thought she needed to add something to that table after this... So yeah?! 😳

Love carries the capacity to look beyond all! All you need is a pure heart! Always give love a chance, it is an unexplainable emotion which can only be felt and expressed. Those who don't know love is, have either never been in love or are so deeply entangled, that they don't know it is Love.

I absolutely have no words to compliment you on this part!! You were too too too too good! Keep it up, seriously ! I'm inspired ! 👏

Naaaw!!! When an amazing writer like you says this to an amateur! Mayn the feels in my body right now!!! Thank You SOOO much neighbour!

Take a bow ladyy!

*humbly bows* and then giggles like no tomr😆

Yours truly thy neighbour !

Vinu x

I love you neighbour🤗❤️

Originally posted by: SwetaRocking

Pari.

Swetaaa!!!!!!!! Hi😆

Wait. Lemme Cry First.

Okay *Sniff Sniff* .

Arre baby! Don't cry... Now I am going to cry! I hate tears Pu--, I mean I hate tears Sweta😆 (You better know what I am talking about... Otherwise my entire joke just went down the drain😆)

This is Ah-Mhaaa-Zing. When I realised what the topic was, I was like

And Then I saw Who the writer was , and i was like f**k Yeah! I KNEW You will Nail It and you did!

Thank You SOOO Much Swetaaa❤️🤗

This is one of the most bootiphool work onthe forum. And is on my favourites list.

Ajedj!!! Whaaattt tthhheee Fff***ccckkk!!!! What?!?!?!??!?!?!

*rubs her eyes constantly*

*re-reads*

*goes to heaven*

You are tooo kind Sweta! Tooo kind! Thank You SOOO much!!!! Me hearts you😳

The way you described her pain. I could almost feel the suffocation. And was actually relieved when he came by her side. Each and every note was portrayed perfectly. It was sad and beautiful.

Keep Writing Pari. Its always an absolute pleasure to read your works.

Naaw! You bongs are literally going to make me die of diabetes! Thank You sooo much Sweta!!! *wipes tears of happiness*

Love. More Love

Sweta <3 Conphused Eespherm🤗