SwaRon FF:Ishq hota nahi sabhi ke liye *Last Chp@110* - Page 13

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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful FF..Shini and Chitra.
I absolutely loved the plot. Aww..poor Sharon I feel bad for her but seeing Swayam besides her I know he will change her that too for the better. He will introduce her to the new feeling of love.
The Yaadein sequence that you mentioned here brought so many fond memories back.
Beautifully written.
Can't wait to see the story move forward.
Update soon and thanks for the pm :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
it was simply beautiful and really a relief in sharon's pain
i really the like the smile dialogue "Smile is like a bird Sharon.Make your lips be their nest. . .because this smile really suits on you. . .You look beautiful when you smile" its beautiful
do update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
I just loved this..
Best dialogue...Smile is like a bird...God itta accha kaisey socte ho tum dono...wonder girls Chitra and Shini...hats off 😆
Keep writing such fab updates..
SwaRon convo was truely magical 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Here is the next chapter hope you guys like it.. thank you for your likes and comments.

Chapter#7

banner credit goes to -Koeli_Appy- thank u soo much


It was 12.45 a.m. when Swayam entered his home. . .He went straight to the dining table and sat on the chair. . .It had been a long day for him emotionally.Swayam closed his eyes when he realized someone's hand careesing his head. . .He smiled.
"Mumma?"Swayam opened his eyes and saw his mother standing beside him smiling.
"Tired?"
Swayam nodded in positive like a small child.His mother started pouring his food in his plate and sat on the front chair with him.
"Here. . ."She offered the plate to Swayam.
Swayam gave a hearty smile to his mother and started eating.After a while he started juggling with food.
What happened Swayam?Is there anything bothering you?"
Swayam shot his head up at his mother's words and thought how does she always come to know whenever I am tensed and as always couldn't find the answer.
"Yes Mumma. . .Can I ask you something?"
"Go ahead. . ."
"Mom there is a girl. . .Her name is Sharon. . .She is rich,successful and has got everything in life. . .But she does not have a family. . .Her parents died when she was twelve and since then she is alone. . ."And swayam told everything about Sharon from his first meet till what happened two hours ago.
"Swayam you know even my parents died when I was a small kid.My grandmother brought me up. . .She cared for me,loved me and did everything she could do for me. . .I loved her to death but still there were many atimes when I used to miss my parents. . .When during vacations everybody used to plan to meet their mom and dad I used to sit in my room alone,when I went outside with my granny and used to see a kid in his father's arms it hurt me because I knew I can never be in that position. . .I can never make my friends meet my parents. . .On my wedding day I missed them like hell. . .There are times Swayam when No one can be the substitue for your parents. . .I had my grandmother with me so the pain was still less but Sharon has No one with her. . .That one hour in her house in that silence made you feel so uncomfortable. ..Imagine she is living in that silence for years. . .there is no one with she can share her happiness or pain."Swayam's mom explained to Swayam teary-eyed.
Swayam was lying on his bed. . .He never knew his mom has faced so much in her childhood. . .No wonder his dad tries to give her mom all the happiness. . .And both of them shower so much love on him and Taani.His thoughts drifted to Sharon. . .He didn't know why her pain effected himso much?Why he cant stand those tears in her eyes?What was the connection between them?But he did know one thing She deserved Happiness and care and Love and he will try to fill the void in her life anyhow.He finally thought of something and drifted to sleep.
NEXT DAY
Swayam went straight to kitchen after getting ready. . .It was time to take the fisrt step to make Sharon happy.He entered kitchen and saw his mom making breakfast for the family.It was a ritual in his home that his mother made the breakfast every day.There were so many workers for that but she loved to feed her family the first meal of the day.
"Mom I was thinking of calling Sharon on dinner. . . I mean I was. . ."
Sharon's mom looked at her son and his concern for the girl he just met some weeks ago.She realized there was something changing in Swayam. . .He has always been Kind-Hearted but this. . .Maybe he was falling. . .
"Mom?"
"Yeah. . .yes you can beta. ..She will also feel happy."Smriti said coming out of her thoughts.
"Thanks Mom. . .Thank you so much"
Swayam told Taani about the dinner tonight and asked to bring Sharon home with her as she has never come to home before.
Taani was a little surprised but then after listening to Swayam's reason for organising the dinner she got convinced.

IN THE OFFICE
"Sharon. . .this deal is big for both of us. . .So I have organised a dinner party tonight and I wanted to invite you. . ."
"But Swayam. . .Dinner. . .Achanak. . .I don't. . ."
"Sharon,please. . .come on now apart from being my client we share another relation and that is Freindship. . .So consider it atreat to our new freiindship"
Sharon smiled and agreed. "OK,Swayam"
Sharon was a little nervous. . .She was wearing a White Anaarkali salwar suit paired with a silver pair of earings.She had a bracelet in her one hand and that was it.She was checking herself repeatedly in the mirror. . .She has never been to any such family dinner before.
"Chalein?"Taani came from behind and asked her.
"Haan. . .Taani I am very nervous. . .What if I make a mistake?Gosh!"
"Sharon its just a dinner. . .Why are you taking so much stress?And my parents are very cool. . .you will love them."Taani said trying to calm her down.
"U sure?"
"Yes. . .Very Sure!Ab chalein?"
Hmmm. . .Sharon nodded and they both drove off.
In a few minutes Sharon found herself standing in front of a huge mansion. . .Her heart suddenly started beating fast. . .Afterall she was going to have a FAMILY dinner after so so lomg time. . .

p.s do read the note below

love

chitra and shini


Edited by ..MiStLeToE.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

NOTE

Hey Friends Here is the update.Hope you all will like it.Guys comments are really important to us and we expect comments in return for our hardwork so please ppl comment.We arent raising bars for likes but but we do expect more comnents.


Thank you
Shini and chitra 😊
Edited by ..MiStLeToE.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow really nice update, lovd swayam n his mom's convo.swayam's confusd feelings 4 sharon n she's gonna have dinner with swayam's family really lukin 4 ward to it<3.
Edited by athi_vrushan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sharon In white suits..sounds intresting..
Nicely penned..
Waiting fr the family dinner^_^
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Posted: 11 years ago
Finally, I can make myself drag to this point. Well I am really amazed the way the emotions are been handled. In depth, yet so apt, so crisp..
I am really liking the way Swayam is concerned about her.. That reflects ample of emotions..

And above all a CHANGE!

This reminds me of the saying, "Behind every SUCCESSFUL man there's a WOMAN."

I just relate this to " Behind Every change in Swayam, there's Sharon" :P

Don't hit me after that. I keep doing such odd things, at times.

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Posted: 11 years ago
Cool update Shini and Chitra.
Emotions were beautifully conveyed and your writing is perfectly balanced. It has consistency, every emotion you want to express just comes up beautifully.
Wow. i mean You guys are really good.
Swayam is changing because of Sharon and is worrying for her. How good is that. :D
Thanks for the PM. :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
wowiee👏
nice update👍🏼
swayam's n his mom convo was emotional😊
dinner😃
looking forward fr next update😊
update soon😊

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