Memphis ~ Abode of the Good - Thread II // ~*[Pt 24 Pg 34]*~Completed! - Page 21

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sushie166

res

unres... Oh! m so fast.. 😳
Kritii 😉 Sush!!
That flowers were for Dr.Ananya 😲😲 Yo!
haww...tumne budhu bna dia?? Haha! Successfully :D 😎
🤣🤣
This was so nice, i liked it.. Thank you! I'm Glad (:
Parth is so phunnie here! 🤣🤣 I know right :D
I wish they had shown this type of "Paran" bonding in the show.. *sighs* Moi Too :(
Aww he ruffled his hair, while saying that. OMG so cute 😳 Hehe, Thanks!
But last mein yeh kaun sa bomb pheka...
i hope it is a small bomb and not atom bomb 🤣🤣 Let's hope together :D
Lovely update... Thank you so much !!
Update soon! Updating ...

Love
-Sush 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SWA1992

What??? is she cheating rd???



You'll Know Soon ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Tsuchi

sorry fr replying late kriti.. Kesi baate karto ho, Suchi di, SMH !


i LOVED ur update a lot dear ..both parts are so beautiful!!😳 Thank you sooo much :D
they confessed each other..this story is so sweet..simple...n fascinating!!!..main to hamesha kho jati hun tumahri updates read krte krte...i feel so good yr.😳..n ye kya next update mein vardhu n ananya..not bad!!😆.love i more for this...! Aw, didi! I'm honoured! :') I love you too!
ab parth n vid ka number hai .hehe..😆 Haha, Maybe!
but what a cliffhanger yr?..😲what does she mean? ..waise i think she will say in favour of their relation😉..u created a suspense in it..i liked it too.. 😃Thank you! You'll know soon!

but isse bhi jayda to mujhe tumahra note padhkr maza aya...u mentioned my name too.🤣.how sweet yr...😆..jiyo!! Aw, LOL, Thanks!

thanks fr updating dear😊 My pleasure!

love u..🤗 Love you too!

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Posted: 11 years ago


Aw, Thank you so much!! :')

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: cooltinu

Tooo Goood... Waiting eagerly for the next part!!! you will end it????????? Oh god!!! Sorry couldn't reply you from sooo long. Was not in town due to work!! But other parts were also Awesome :) 😃



Thank you so much!! That's no problem. I'm just glad that you read :D
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pari1995

wow nice 😊update but what was that at last 😲

waiting eagerly for next part update soon



Thank you so much! You'll know soon. Updating!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: FLOREY

vardhan n romantic.?🤣

n i think the last line.. in nex update .. it wont b so serious.. my guess.. lets c



Let's see! ;) Updating today!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter - 24 (Finale)

"Wait guys! What are you saying Randhir? That's not true!" Sanyukta said, shocking the hell out of me.

"What do you mean Sanyukta?" I asked.

"We're not together, Randhir."

"What?" I and Parth shouted together.

Sanyukta simply shrugged. I walked to her. "What do you mean we are not together?"

"Well, you never officially proposed me," she murmured, blushing slightly. I didn't know what to do. Should I shout at her or laugh with her? I shook my head, instead. I love an idiot. I love loving this idiot.

"Oh, that? That's no problem, let's do it right now," I said and pulled her towards me with force. Her hands now rested on my chest while I put mine around her waist. She looked at me - eyes big with shock.

"Uh, should we close our eyes?" Parth asked making the girls blush and the boys giggle. I rolled my eyes but didn't reply.

I looked Sanyukta in the eyes. "If you spend a night with me, it could be heaven," I said and winked, shamelessly at her.

Sanyukta's mouth fell open. "What a perv!"

I couldn't help but giggle. Finally, I took a breath and said it. "I love you. I need you. I need you here to stay. So will you be with me forever, by being my girlfriend first and then, later as wife?"

"You sure you would want me as your wife too?" she asked, innocently.

Yes, of course! "Nope, I'll find another," I said, rather, winking.

She frowned. "I'll be your wife," she announced.

"Be my girlfriend first, at least."

"Done. I love you, too!" she said and joined her forehead with mine.

I love you. Need you. Need you here to stay.

Girl, you're on my mind like 24 x 7

Every single time that I'm not with you

If you spend a night

Baby, it could be heaven

Hit me on the line

If you're tryna come through

I feel my heartbeat pumping to the bass

She gives me butterflies and they won't go away

Under the stars she took my hand and said,

"I love you. I need you. I need you here to stay."

I'd like to give you what you need

I try but you're making it hard for me

How do I make you BeLi3Ve?

That, I love you. I need you. I need you here to stay.

~ Several Months Later ~

A lot changed. Nearly everything changed. Vardhan sir and Dr. Ananya married. We all were invited. It wasn't anything big, just few necessary customs. I remember, Sanyukta had danced the whole night that evening. She even dragged me on the stage. I ran away after few minutes though. I and mom have a better relationship now. We talk and we laugh. Maybe, the bonds are getting uncomplicated. Jignesh and Kaustuki are doing well. Well, with few fights now and then. Yoyo is even more mastikhor now. Once, he even locked me and Sanyukta in a store till we didn't promise him free drinks. Parth accepted Vidhushi's proposal. I like them together. He brings the good side in her and she takes out his shyness with girls.

And Sanyukta? Well, that girl hasn't replied yet to the text message I sent her an hour ago. Time to buzz her, again!

Hi Farzi!, I texted her, the second time.

What? Was her reply.

Meet me in the canteen, no. Or we could go out for a date. It's been so long. And today is a holiday anyway.

No.

I dare you!

No, I'm busy.

Huh! How rude! I shouldn't have proposed to her. At least she used to hang out with me before. But see her now? Busy and all! Like I mean nothing! Let's see who is my Sautan, who keeps her soo busy!

I got into my shoes and left my room. Silently walking to the girls hostel, I climbed her pipe. I peeped in. She was on her bed - on her stomach. I tiptoed to her side.

"What the hell, Sanyukta?" I shouted.

"Damn! You're spying on me now!" she shouted back.

"How could you do that to me?" I cried at her.

She looked down at her bed and then back at me. "I'm sorry, Randhir. I didn't mean to -"

"You've hurt me so much!"

"Hurt you? Randhir, you're just over reacting, now," she said, as she tried to hide it. I snatched it away from her.

"Over reacting? God, girl! This is how I look! Your drawing sucks! My nose isn't that fat." I said as I held her drawing. She was drawing me. My drawing was My Sautan. And, by the way, she was drawing me very bad.

"Oh, please! I'm no expert. It's my first time. Plus, it does look likes you. I mean, a little bit," she complained.

"Looks like me? Ew! I'm so handsome and it looks like it needs Plastic Surgery! You need to have drawing lessons from nursery kids!"

"Haw, Randhir," she said as she took a pillow from her bed and threw it on me. I caught it, effortlessly.

"You really shouldn't have done that," I grinned and ran after her. "Aakraman!"

"No, Randhir, sorry!" she shouted as she climbed on her bed. But then she jumped down as I climbed it too. Then, she climbed on Kaustuki's bed and threw her pillow on me. I threw the pillow I had on her. She dodged and went toward Vidhushi's bed and we ended up having a pillow fight.

So, yeah, as I was telling. Sanyukta. She's the same girl with love for mechanics. The only thing that has changed is that she loves me more than ever, now. She isn't depressed anymore. I'm not alone anymore. Life isn't so normal anymore. We're happy, in this little world of ours. We are happy in this Memphis of ours.

~ The End ~

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Author's Note: So, that's it. I hope you liked the story. Thank you so much everyone for giving Memphis so much love that I had to open a new thread for it. It was my first FanFic here and you showered it with love. I'll always be Thankful!

I heart you all so much!

Keep BeLi3Ve-ing! 😉

Loads of Love

Kriti

Edited by BeLi3Ve - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
RES!!

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UNRES

So, yeah, as I was telling. Sanyukta. She's the same girl with love for mechanics. The only thing that has changed is that she loves me more than ever, now. She isn't depressed anymore. I'm not alone anymore. Life isn't so normal anymore. We're happy, in this little world of ours. We are happy in this Memphis of ours.

THese lines were the cutest you know!! Sad that this wonderful peice of writing has come to an end! Khair koi baat nahi !!

Lovely peice of fiction! Loved it!!

PS - I was first!!


Love
Aisha😳
Edited by RandhirHolic - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
RES 🤣 SHit 🤣 i gotta unres last wala 🤣 shit 🤣 why did i tell that to u 🤣 🤣
UNRES 😎
Sabse pehle 🤣 Purane wale res ko bhool ja 🤣 🤣

Ok. Time to be serious 😆
Man, i remember, you had said u'll be giving only 3-4 chapters, cuz tere exams the.. and look, its the 2nd thread and 24th chapter with the 19th one having 3 parts 😆
Isi ka naam hai tarakki 🤣 🤣
This is one of that light hearted stuff that makes you smile.
And i actually got attached to it. I realised that now 😆
Whenever a FF ends, i feel so miserable, I feel like crying. As if. Its the end of the world.
Yea I do.
And this was such a sweet story.
It will always be in my heart.
The last two chapters, were SO good.
Oh- Toh Mr. Vardhaan Ms. (now Mrs 🤣) Ananya se pyaar karte the? 🤣
Hum sab ne bechare pe kitte sangeen jurm ke ilzaam lagaye 🤣 Aur tum unhe defend karti reh gai 🤣
And, it was SO cute.
The last chapter, i tell you, was so damn fabulously written gal, I loved it.
That "several months later" wala SanDhir relationship was so adorable!
And right now, I had actually come to send some wishes for that RD bday🤣
But I ended up typing all this.
Love you kriti.
Do write more.
And keep writing those drabbles at least if you get busy with college.

Will SO miss this FF.
Mane, Now I'm gonna cry.
Byee :-*

Edited by angel_anisha - 11 years ago

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