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ragvir92

@ragvir92

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#761

Wow That was such a sweet os yaar

They are one adorable family

Aru's antics are also so so so cute

She is really a sweetheart

She loves both Dad and Mom .

Very nice os of AR with their princess👏

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DMGThings

@DMGThings

Rocker

+ 9

Posted: 8 years ago

#762

OH MY GOOODDD!

SO GOOOD!

Ek toh itna bada! Thank you so much! Aadha ghanta laga mujhe padhne mein!

But it was so amazingly, awesomely good. Like DMG ke 700 episodes mein jitne emotions the woh sab itne words mein daal diye the!

Armaan ke pranks the, Riddhima ki jealousy, accusations, pain, tears aur Happy Ending! Sab kuch tha! Awesome! I LOVED IT SO MUCH!

Bohot hasi lekin end mein bohot royi bhi. Riddhima I can handle, lekin jab Armaan rota haina, jaan nikalti hai meri (yes, so much like melodramatic Riddhima. But I seriously hate to see him cry. He's my baby na!)

And the whole roller coaster of emotions you just took us through was so breathtaking. I loved it. I mean, I don't have enough words to express how much I loved this. I really, really did! It was amazing! The best.

I mean it was beautiful, gorgeous, amazing, breathtaking, heart stopping aur kya adjectives use karu samajh nahi aa raha! But I LOVED IT!!! <3 <3

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Seeta

@IshaniDeep

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#763

beautiful really aisa laga Dill Mill Gaye ke last episode ke bad ka part dekh rhi hu too good bahut beautifully describe kiya hai apne

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scorpiofazy

@scorpiofazy

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#764

Such an awesome update it was(though there was lot of spelling mistakes 😆 but it happens as you did not re-check it)
Totally outstanding
Im in love with your stories
I really want an epilouge 😛 if possible
This part was hearttouching
Keep writing beautiful stories like these
Stay blessed

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Priyanka

@Prizi

Achiever

+ 29

Posted: 8 years ago

#765

wowww such an awesummm update
totally luvd it
and i luvvv this longgg update
luv how armaan knws ridhima sooo well..
ridhima is little bit slow.. samajh ne bahut der karti hai.

haha luvd ridhima's back up plan to manofying armaan fr marriage :p
shanky papa k na kar de itni himmat armaan me nhi hai :p

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TaniDMGlover

@TaniDMGlover

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#766

Let me start with one word..."AMAZING"
From the start to the end this OS was so beautifully described Na that one can't help but fall in love with both AR all over again!
Matlab even a non-DMG fan would start liking them because of this OS. The emotions and the scenes were so beautifully described Na <3 now coming to this part! First the length...I love you so much for that :p
And now te scenes I already told u this but still..the cafe scene was my fav fav when he says Na "ki Armaan Ke hote basket kabhi har Nahi sakti " was like...WOW!
Then ofcourse when her zip opens up and she accuses him and feels guilty later and the way he says ki why do u say thing that hurt u only...can he get any better ?
And last but definitely not the least the confrontation, the way he blasts on her and everything that follows was amazingly described"as always :p"
And finally they live happily ever after...the perfect ending!
Beautiful OS! Love the title and the song (have heard it on loop after this part :p) and loved the entire story! Write many many many more such stories! <3

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nilusoni

@nilusoni

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#767

superb loved it

armaan's prank to make things normal and ridhima's rudeness and stubborn nature

lots of happening and ar moments in between wow

soo dramatical and lovely ending wow

plz give us epilouge plz plz

thanx for pm

plz pm me for other work

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Aayushi

@..Phoenix..

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#768

i totally agree with tani that "even a non-DMG fan would start liking them because of this OS".
u have made it so soo perfect that i have no words to say anything still i am here to speak i mean to comment even when i am speechless.

there were so many instances that stole my heart and made me take a screen shot to put it somewhere if i can as they make it things more beautiful like never before... and to let me read it again to feel the love that exists or not i dont know.

what i loved the most is that "mein jita toh dono jitenga nahi toh sab har jayenga dono" that instant was like... he is begging her to accept the truth and him inwardly still challenging her according to his words that came out.

than "Mein tumhare dimag par itna havi hun " mann another one.. i took screenshoot of... sahi toh kha armaan ne... armaan ko kya pata ridhima sorry tym wahan aayegi... comic bhi lakhon log padhte hain.. and even that scent.. ridhima ko yaad hai itna saal mein simple means she still loved him that can't forget anything about him. not even his fragrance.

ridhima's confession to keerti.. that remind me of the scene when armaan return and ridhima cried in FE and keerti console her in serial.. and what she spoke was way too senti.. she is dying to run back to him but want him to have better life with happiness.. as she know ki armaan uske samne aapne baare mein sochta hi nahi hain..

final showdown was the convo at armaan home... i wanted to laugh at ridhima's innocence she accused armaan so much even for zip thing i mean even said he want to he close physically that really hurt but even after that she came slap him saying how can he say that she want him to die... one side i wanted to laugh on her inoccent love and other side i was like what the hell khud kuch bhi bolo karo par armaan ne bola toh itna ghussa... but i loved everything that followed every single word that they spoke to convey love and being back together...

and then last ridhima ka reply.."mujhe laga toh mujhe na bologe toh papa bana lenga tumhe tum unhe mana nahi karte" ahhahaha she is so adorable mann.. too cute with this one line hahaha

osome one gal...
now i want such thing for my bday tooo...
so deep. senti. emotional, and over all master piece for my bday too...
set to work from now only... :P

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KJLuv

@KJLuv

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#769

Loved loved loved the whole OS. AR are the best and you make us fall in love with them even more with your writing.😊 It was true to their characters, Armaan the prankster yet lovable and Riddhima stubborn and jealous. Pain, Love , fun ,pranks, anger, in all a rollercoster of emotions in one OS.

I absolutely loved Ridz dialougue abt how she needed Shashank as backup incase he said no to her 😆. Lekin Armaan bahot jaldi maan gaya.. thoda aur bhav khana chahiye tha ridz ki tarah.😉

Even I would love to have an epilogue for this OS.

Keep writing more.. 😊

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anin29

@Girlwithcurls

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#770

God, this was lovely. This has everything in it. And everything has been written so well. And the effort that you have put in that's commendable. Thank you for taking out so much time and writing such wonderful wonderful stuff for us. Lots of love

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