Jigsie meri jaan, you are on a roll sister! You know exactly how to capture your audience's attention, make them get attached to your characters, get them glued to their screens and finally get them to sit on the edge of their seats with your lovely cliff hangers!😆👏 Mind you, this is the only instance where I would say I don't mind this cliff hanger because it makes me look forward to the next chapter even more now. After all, a little bit of mystery adds to the fun of unraveling this story with you.
Since I have already told you how much I love your Khushi. Let me tell you how much I liked your Anjali here too, she is someone who will get her way with the people she loves. We already witnessed her persuasion skills in this little lunch rendezvous which turned out to be quite enlightening and entertaining at the same time. Let us just say that in this instance, Anjali getting her way was fantastic. Specially when it involved Khushi and Arnav being in each other's company for longer periods! On a serious note, Anjali sounds like a real sweetheart and a great friend, she was there for Khushi in the past and she will be there for her again in the present. The mention of Khushi's past with a certain Samir was quite a surprise?! I am sure you will reveal more when the time is right!
Let me move on to Arnav now, is the guy hot property or what?! The not so subtle flirting, his need to be close to Khushi already, him being very gentlemanly and helpful when it came to rescuing her when she didn't want to talk about her ex, the easy charm oh what the heck everything about him screams perfection! So maybe as a boss he is taking certain liberties but hey his flirtatious remarks are put in a very classy way, it just feels right even if it increases Khushi's dhak dhaks.😉 It doesn't feel sleazy in anyway and I can only credit you for it my Jigsie! Take the compliment about her Jeans and the way he put it, it made me grin like there is no tomorrow. Khushi only wants a cordial/professional relationship with her boss and quite understandably so as well considering her strong attraction towards this boss fellow and her past but something tells me this super attractive boss man is not going to have any of it and I couldn't be happier!😃
I am so proud of Jigs because it is only your first story and your story telling style is on the same standard as Juhi's! ILY..bas!
PS. I hope you have had a blast in Italy, you surely made me crave Gnocchi and what not! (Note to self - Must have Italian soon)
PPS. Loved all the pictures as well and the descriptions about NYC. ( Note to self - Must visit New York)
PPPS. Now what is the text all about eh?! A response to Khushi's email or is it something scandalous?! ( Ofcourse I am assuming and hoping that it is from Arnav)
Anupamaa
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