LOVE HATE REVENGE AND LOVE PART 11 UPDATED ON PAGE 17 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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part:-8

S:what the hell chodo mjhe Randhir..
He pined her to wall and came closer to her...sanyukta was breathing heavily..
S:randhirrr...
Move more closer to her...
R:I know you are hot but plz don't show off tumhe acha lgta h jb boys tumh cmnta pass krte hai nhi na...
S:what the hell are you saying...
R:why the hell you don't understand...
S:what.i don't understand...??? Giving a questioned look to him
He punch the wall and left...

R:why don't you understand me my problem when you will understand me...and a tear comes out from his eyes...
S:ajib ldka hai ..jerk...


In room Randhir was angry and all his anger was facing his punching bag...


R:what the hell Randhir tjhe Ho kya raha hai us sanyukta Ki har chiz se tjhe frk q pd raha hai dam jaha dlho waha sanyukta sanyukta or bus sanyukta dimag me gusa chuki hai Vo tere you haveto chose randhir etheir sanyukta or ...(before he could say)
V.sir:all dream team members are requested to be in my cabin withing 10 min...
R:ab kya kam hai sir ko...
In cabin...
Randhir eyes were searching for sanyu
R:kaha gae sir ka announcement nhi suna kya usne ...
V:sab a gae so me..
R:sir..
V.sir:ha Randhir bolo..
R:sanyukta yaha nhi hai sir..
V.sir:interesting very interesting so tumh pya h Vo kaha hai
R:no sir..
V.sir:you fool apne bare me socho dusro Ki tension mat lo mene sanyukta KO Kisi kam se beja hai...
S:may I come in sir (other then parth Arpita and raghav no body knows tha v.sir is sanyukta brother)
V.sir:come in ..
S:sir Vo log a gae hai...
V:send them in.
4 hot and handsome boy enter one bye one..
And vidhushi's mouth was opened in perfect O shape..
V:not bad at all...hot hai sab Ki sab...
V.sir:so guys meet them they are the team of LITS they will be our opponents ...sanyukta tum Jake en sbko enke too dikha do..
Shhe show them their room and move from there
One of the boy named dharm said..
D:boss yeh to meri hai ese to me pta ke rahunga...
And someone was hearing them ..that was non other than Randhir..
R:eski to me how dare he bloody ... Chodunga nhi ise.. me...
Next day..
Sanyu was wearing short top and was taking book from bookshelf due to which her top move up and her skin is visible...
Randhir was noticing it..
R:yeh ldki sch me etni hot hai Ki me apne ap pe se control loose Kr raha Hu urggghhh Randhir what the hell are you saying yeh farzi Vo bhi hot...
Sanyu was now also struggling in taking book..
Randhir move closer to her he stand just behind her she can feel his warm breath on her neck and move his hand form her shoulder to finger and take the book
And wispered in her ears help chahiyae Ho to mang liya karo




precap:-

R: rurkti to Mumbai bus accident no one is alive...isme rone wale kya bthai wait a min. yeh to vohi bus hai jisme arpita and raghav



#shivi


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Posted: 11 years ago
#42

done...😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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done
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: kamyaka

Hey read both parts in a go its awsome update soon and pm me when u update next



plz buddy me for pm...
thnq for liking it..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
nice update
precap seems interesting
thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Hey! Dear
Really sry, sry, sry 4 late rply

Well lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely,
lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely,
lovely, lovely, lovely update dear😳😳
Love it to the core❤️
lovely, nicely and beautifully written👏⭐️
love it😳
keep it up 👍🏼
Update soon plz
eagerly waiting
Thanks for pm
Love
Bushra
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tulip.

Nice dear. Do pm me when u update next.



thnq and okay i'll surely PM you.😊😊😊😊😊😊.

😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved it... superb.. pls update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
loved it ❤️ update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part:-9

Vidhusi taking with lts boys

B:hey vo sanyukta ka no mil jaega kya..???

V:are tum bhi kya sanyukta ke piche pde ho use to pehle hi randhir ne use and throw bna diya hai..

And she laugh

Parth come there and slap her hard and she fall on ground and everyone laugh on her...

P: (angryly) don't you dare to say a word for sanyu otherwise I'll show you what use and throw means...

And he move

In hostel room

Parth throw his bag and start hiting the wall...

P(in mind) : q kiya randhir tumne esa sanyukta kitna puar krti thi tumnse tumne use kya bna diya hai I'll not forgive you I will never...

R:mjhe gali de raha hai to muh pe de...

P:randhir plz ...

R:kya ...sahi hai mjhe pta hai tu mere bare me hi ulta siddha bol raha hai ..

Parth push randhir ..

P:ha bol raha hu to kya kar lega tu..

Randhir come forward...

R:be in your limit me bahut kuch kr skta hu me trusties ka beta hu smjha ...

They start fighting...

But sanyu come in btwn...

S:parth chodo use parth...

P:sanyu tum yaha and kya hua why are you crying...

Sanyu hug him parth vo...vo parthh she cried loud...

P:shhh... sanyu plz kya hua btao mjhe me hu na tell me ...

She show him newspaper and parth looses his balance and fall on knees...

P:yeh kese...

Sanyu is crying and parth is just silent like a statue

R:ab yeh kya hua in dono ko why they behaving like this ...

He took the news paper...

R: rurkti to Mumbai bus accident no one is alive...isme rone wale kya bthai wait a min. yeh to vohi bus hai jisme arpita and raghav ...and look in room yeah parth or sanyu kaha gaye...

He search them...

Parth on terrace staing on the tip of it...

P:why me god pehle dad then my life love arpita use vapas le li q bahut ho gaya mjhsre ab nhi hoga kuch bhi plz give her back plz mene aj tk kuch galt nhi kiya fir q mere apno k sath esa kar rahe ho ap plz give her back plz...

S:parth listen to me come back...

P:no sanyu no I'll not...

S:plz parth tumhai meri kasam hai parth...

P:sanyu plz me arpita ke bina nhi reh skta ek bar ise kho chukka hub di mushkil se tumne mjhe smbhala tha and ab firse vo chali gae hamesha ke liyae...

S:parth plz jese mene tb sath diya tha ese aj bhi dungi ...or hamesha dungi best friends hote q hai keval tum hi to ho mere sath parth jise me apni life ki har bt share krti hue k bar dhoka kha chuki hu next time to me mar hi jaungi pzrth plz parth tumhai meri kasam hai come back...

V.sir: parth.. sanyu yeah kya kar raha hai...

S:bhai vo I mean sir ...plz stop him...

V.sir: parth listen to me keval tum hi ho jo sanyu ka khyal rkh skta hai and tumhare alawa I can't trust any one else plz parth kisi ki life pe kisi ka control nhi hota hai everyone have to die one day but that dosn'e mean ki hum abhi hi mar jae tum bche ho tumhare age bahut achi life hai fir bhi thk hai you wanna quit plz move on you hurted me parth I was mentoring a loser...saying this vardhan sir move..

Parth slowly come down and sanyu slap him and then hug him...

S:idiot... kitna dar gae thi me pta bhi hai tumhai...

P:I m sorry sanyu but arpita...

S:shhh...chalo ab...they move to canteen...

Sanyu was just looking at parth he was lost ,he was physicaly there but mentaly he is not .

S:kuch krna pdega mjhe jb bhi mjhe parth ki jarurt thi he is alwaz their for me now its my turn...

S:parth ..

P:hmm..

S:parth..

P:ha sanyu bolo...

S:parth...

P:are baba kya hua...

S:vo hena mjhe kuch mil nhi raha ...

P:kya hua...kya ghuma diya tumne ab...

S:are bahut imp chiz thi yar uske bina na life incomplete lgti hai tum dundho na plz vaha dekho table ke niche

He see their P:kaha hai n hai kya..??

S:are vaha nhi yaha are ni vaha...

P:sanyu ek bar me btao na kya dundh rahi ho tum..

She make smie with her hand on parths lips yeah ...

S:tumhari smile pta hai na me jb bhi tension me hoti hu to tumhari simle dekh kae sb kuch thik ho jata hai...

But he didn't smile...

S:are yar yeah kya hua mene dekha tha jerry ne bhi tom ko ese hi smile kiya tha par tum ne to nhi kiya..

P:what... tom and jerry tum ab bhi dekhti ho...

S: *puupy face* ha ...he smile and slap on sanyu's head

P:pagal M.E kar rhi ho tum and tom and jerry he smile and move to his room

S:haaa so finaly smile to kiya isne and bhai kya keh rahe the sanyu ko smbhlna and all hmm chalo unse hi jake puchti hu..

In hostel room...

P:yeh kya hai ye letter..

To parth, I know parth hum bahut strong ho and you have to be strong sanyu ko smbhalne ke liyae you are the only one whom I can trust mere jane ke bad plz sanyu ka dhyan rkhna...me kaha jar aha hu tumhai nhi bta skta even vapas aunga bhi ki nhi yeh bhi nhi pta promice me parth tum sanyu ka sath kbhi nhi chodoge kuch bhi ho gae use akela mt chodna usko uske bde bhai ki yad kbhi mt ane dena...

And ha is letter ke bare me use kuch mt btana plz...yeah letter pdne ke bd ise destroy kr dena and plz


PRECAP:- SOMEONE TRY KO HURT SANYU...


#shivi

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