SwaRon SS:Valentine Love (Part 6 Updated)

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Diya

@diyaswaronholic

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Di,

Maar dala!!!!

It was soo brilliant and shantanu maheshwari 😆

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

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Posted: 11 years ago

#82

Reserved!

I am not used to reserve comments! But here when I get a chance, I will..

I will try to get this unreserved as soon as possible, But in case I forget you can always come yelling at me ;)

^Edited^

Kindly don't kill me for whatever I write, because it's going utter craziness. That's what this one left me like.

You know how beautifully the surroundings were described. His each and every word, as though a poet reciting one of his record breaking piece. And the confession. You made it so beautiful. Like nothing else could be thought of. It's only them, their love.

And the way Rebecca and her surprise were been revealed. Relly? You got Shantanu Maheshwari here? Man! That expression Sharon would have held while saying saying Shantanu Maheshwari,, I am damn sure he would be dead!

This was one sweet SS I would remember for long. And I do mean it.

Thanks for writing this one, Chitra. really thanks!

And keep such piece of works coming. Write more. :)

Love,

Shenz :)

Edited by -shenz- - 11 years ago

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

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Posted: 11 years ago

#83

omg omg omg.. chitra dear ds is PERFECT.. swaron confession was awesome. n what to say about surprise, this is damn awesome yar.. Shantanu ... you simply rock chitra... thanks 4 d pm yar

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shaaz23

@shaaz23

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Posted: 11 years ago

#84

Amazing update
The confession was magic
omg the surprise was the man himself shantanu maheshwari
Loved this as and will miss it

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athi_vrushan

@athi_vrushan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#85

"Shantanu Maheshwari"sharon said smiling innocently.
"Leave him. . .I am your Shantanu Maheshwari. . .Come on.🤣
i really liked this part ,i had goosebumps while reading your story, read all the parts, very well written,oh gal iam a fan of your works,do pm me when you write..

Edited by athi_vrushan - 11 years ago

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@Incorrect

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Posted: 11 years ago

#86

Heyya Meri Mr.India
Hayyeee Wat a confession too Gud loved it...
Everything ws portrayed beautiful..
Mirror unique n too Gud
Swayams confession loved it and u expressed it very well... d dialogues were
Too Gud n cute..
N d surprise... omg shantanu awww
I loved Swayams dialogue iam your shantanu maheshwari
M gonna miss this ss
Keep writing ua an amazing writer wid all d potential in u
Love u ma Mr.India keep rocking...

Love

Ur rajdhani express

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Mansi

@Mansi98

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Posted: 11 years ago

#87

Swaron confession ws jst magical

it ws jst out of this world

the shantanu wala part ws also nice

i loved this whole ss

Will miss this SS 😔

Hope u come up with some other concept soon😃

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meenal singh

@swaron_arshi_07

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Posted: 11 years ago

#88

gosh i am really surprised by ur surprise

shantanu maheshwari

that was a new one

by the way awesome chapter

beautiful confession

it was great and very emotinal

and espeicially "Leave him. . .I am your Shantanu Maheshwari."

that was fun

thanks for pm

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taqy-vsm

@taqy-vsm

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Posted: 11 years ago

#89

osm update..confession was so well written...

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

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Posted: 11 years ago

#90

finish read rest of your parts together... finally swaron confessed their love and
now have neter the valentine day party hall have a great and enjoy time...
do continue soon