ManVeer FF: Soul-Mate Sab Mera Tu. Precap of Chap 3 updated pg. 5 - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: sakshi1rani2

hey! when r u going to update chap 3, u know na ki all of us r waiting for ur next🥱 update...so, the final question is when r u going to update💔❓



Soon very soon. Within the next 3- 4 days. I've had a procedure done and am taking antibiotic and painkiller right now. Will get back to writing when things get normal.
Edited by -AquaMermaiden- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks, I wish tum like bhi kardeti meri updates ko!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Precap:

The Game of Love and Hate


"Vaari jawan sohniyo, aaj tuvada rang dhang kera kamal da hai." Monia piped.

"Hunnay tu vakiya hi nai hai kuch, aagay aagay tu vekh mere rang" the figure replied quoting Jab We Met and then the movie buffs hugged. He saw the back of the vermin like guy hugging Monia and he had no idea why but he if he had a pistol at the moment in his hand, he would've shot the pervert hugging Monia. He had no idea why but seeing her in the arms of some other guy so happy, so comfortable, so at ease, talking so casually/ so informally yet in a proper language set him on fire.


Why can't she talk to me like that? I mean okay she has dozens of names for me, and to be honest I kind of enjoy when she calls me those names and fights with me as if they are exclusively and specially made for me but still why can't she share the same comfort zone and fun with me that she shares with that moron?

"Why is she so comfortable with that moron?" Uday thought aloud.

"Cause they share a history together. They are inseparable as far as I've investigated them. Urrti urrti khabar hai kay shayad dono. shaadi main bhi interested hain. Kyun jalan ho rahi hai kya?" Jai asked viciously trying to aggravate the situation.


"Yuvraaj Udayveer Singh ko kisi say jalan nahin hoti. Logon kay boy friends ko Udayveer say jalan hoti hai jab Udayveer unki aankhon kay saamnay unki girlfriends ko urra kar lay jata hai apni bahon main" Uday replied confidently.


"Acha, Toh I dare you. Monia aur Karan ko alag kar kay dikhao toh manu gi kay tumhi alpha male ho jo koi bhi larki ko hasil kar sakta hai kuch hi dino main. In dono ki yeh tag team is so irritating to my eyes. Toh bolo lagi bet?"

"Haan, sure, the bet is on. Agar hum jeetay toh jo hum maang gain gay woh tum humain do gi aur agar tum jeeti jo hum honay nahin dain gay toh jo hum chahain gay woh tum hamain do gi. Understand?"


"Of course, after all hum Devgarh ki rajkumari Jai Nandini hain. Apnay takht (throne) ko chor kar tum jo maango gay woh dain gay. Agar tum jeetay toh. Aur agar hum jeetay toh tum say apni baat manwayein gay. Toh theek hai, you have 1 month, agar is ek mahinay main tum nay us chawl ki rani Monia Sharma ko apnay pyaar kay jaal main phansa liya toh hum tumharay in playboy claims ko maan jayen gay aur tumhari wish bhi poori karengay"


"Yeh takht tumhara nahin hai Jai Nandini, please get that into your head. Yeh raj gadi Rajkumari Manyata Kumari ki thi, hai aur rahegi ek din jab hum unhain dhoond lain gay toh is raj gadi pay woh hi baithain gi tum nahin. Itni bari hogai ho, ab toh din main sapnay dekhna chor do."


"We'll see" Jai replied sarcastically.

"Yes, we'll see."


Uday and Jai shook their hands and sealed the deal.


*****


"Halkat, vede, pichki hui naak walay bhainsay tu yahan bhi pahunch gaya aur apni bak bak bhi shuru kardi. Tu election laray ga meray against? Main jaanti hoon kay tu kisi hot shot ameer zaday ka beta hai aur isi ki wajah say itna akarta hai par election larnay kay liye ek plan ki zaroorat hoti hai jo ek viable candidate janta ko deta hai, jo meray paas hai aur teray paas nahin. Tujhe pata bhi hai yahan kay students kay problems kiya kiya hain?" Monia asked.


"First of all hum kisi hot shot ameer zaday ki aulaad nahin hain. Woh Jaigarh kay maharaj Giriraj Singh hain aur hum Jaigarh kay prince hain jo thousands of low income students ko every year scholarships detay hain, 8 orphanages ko support kartay hain, poverty reduce karnay kay liye small industries laga kar detay hain gareebon ko. Yahan scholarship problems hongi, tuition payment problems hongi, transportation problems hongi, tutoring problems hongi, bullying problems hongi.. do you want me go on or stop right here? Hum ek royal hain aur bachpan say humain doosron ki problems dekhna aur samajhna sikhaya gaya hai, is liye itnay kam dino main yahan ki problems ko samajhnay lagay hain aur unki fikr karnay lagay hain. This is the reason kay hum yahan khud chal kar aayen hain, apni ego bhula kar tumhari taraf dosti ka haath barhana chahtay hain so whether you get elected in the elections or I do its the college that gets the ultimate win and the best candidate. Main elections ko imaan-daari kay saath larna chahta hoon. Our personal problems should not affect the well being of this college."


Uday ended his mini speech and moved his hand forward to shake Monia's hand.
Edited by -AquaMermaiden- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
Awesome yr, now i am eagerly waiting for their cute fights n the revelation that moniya is manyata...
Thanks for this precap...
Pls yr updates a lil more frequently, i know this time its ur surgery bt from next time, pls pls try to give updates more frequently...

U know very late updates , make the story lose its essence n dampens interest of the readers... 😔
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
That was not a "precap"... that was a mini chapter 😆. Awesome promo, eagerly awaiting the chapter. BTW - after reading Uday's speech , I'd definitely vote for him 😉. Thanks 4 the PM.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
can't wait...chalo ab achhe bache ki tarah jaldi se reply karo😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
Awesome precap.
It was really great.
Love how the story is proceeding.
Cant wait to read the next chap
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
hi! it"s been so long that u have posted u told that u will be posting a chapter or atleast a promo in 1 week, then here it is 20 days and you have not even posted chapter 3...😭😭...hope everything is going good with u😊😊.
and yap. apun se ab aur intezar nhi ho raha hai to jaldi se 3 chappy update karo
samjhi kya😡😡😡


plzzz plzzz update soon na plzzz 😊


i just hope that u r not planning to leave this ff 🤢
no no no no u can't do this to me 😡
Edited by sakshi1rani2 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
Hey!😊😊 look for the very first time in this forum i am giving such a long appreciation post...😃...
Frankly speaking --- i liked your idea and FF to the roots👏👏 and now i am obsessed with it...🤢😭...hard to believe na ;; yup, for me too🤡
anyways, without wasting much of your time i would like to ASK where r u?😡😡 i check this site almost 15 times a day just to see a reply from ur side🤢

i hope everything is going well with u and i hope u will continue with this FF as soon as possible😃

talking about the FF i think i liked the first chapter most, it was all about the PLAYBOY YUVRAJ UDAYVEER SINGH😉😉
but u know i think u should potray his character a bit innocent ofcourse not in the matter of sleeping around with girls but still...uhggg u know na what i mean 😕😕😕
so it was just an advice from my side, i hope u like it😊😊


and manyata! my god she is really very well mannered over here and i like the way she handles the matter with JAY her very own sweet little devilish sister😛😛😛
i just hope that u would introduce all the other characters like unnati vijay bhai very soon...😃😃
just can"t wait and haan plz plz plz plz plz jaldi se ek double update kind of chapter de do na plz...😳...it's a request from all the sab mera tu viewers ⭐️⭐️⭐️
Edited by sakshi1rani2 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
WOW!! awesome update...plz add me

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