ManVeer FF: Soul-Mate Sab Mera Tu. Precap of Chap 3 updated pg. 5

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@-SilverAngel-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Hi guys,

This is separate from the story but if I had to give a face to suave and dashing Karan Rajyavardhan Singh's body. Then this is the first face that came to my mind. This is Karan in my story, but if you don't like him you could imagine whoever you like in this capacity.

KARAN RAJYAVARDHAN SINGH

These are the kind of looks Monia adores in my FF in her daily life at home and at college. She is taller here. Her height is 5 ft 8 inch:

Edited by -AquaMermaiden- - 11 years ago

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saakhi01

@saakhi01

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Yr ur karan n our arnav😉 is soo HOT, yeh second lead nahi total HERO hai,pls don't call him cheap n third grade... 😔

This characterization dosen't suits him...

He is meant to be handsome,suave, charming, successful,hot sexy n drool-worthy... Though can be a flirt n arrogant bt pls don't make him 3rd grade n cheap... Pls pls...

N if he imp to the story, pls add khushi as his partner 😳

The update was awesome, bt u made us wait for so long...

Update the next chappy soon...

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@-SilverAngel-

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: saakhi01
Yr ur karan n our arnav😉 is soo HOT, yeh second lead nahi total HERO hai,pls don't call him cheap n third grade... 😔
This characterization dosen't suits him...
He is meant to be handsome,suave, charming, successful,hot sexy n drool-worthy... Though can be a flirt n arrogant bt pls don't make him 3rd grade n cheap... Pls pls...
N if he imp to the story, pls add khushi as his partner 😳

The update was awesome, bt u made us wait for so long...
Update the next chappy soon...

He is not cheap and 3rd grade but Uday is going to think like that because Uday is very arrogant and is a royal while Karan is rich, decent, suave, charming BUT just an ordinary guy/ a commoner. Since he is ordinary, his wealth doesn't mean much to Uday. Karan mingles with common folk easily since he does not believe in class difference while Uday has to maintain class difference between a royal and a commoner. This thinking has been instilled in him because of his royal upbringing hence he used these kind of words but don't worry Uday can't say his thoughts in front of Karan's face because Karan has power too.

If I add Khushi to the story, it will be VERY VERY later on in the story not anytime soon as I have something different planned for him but for now there is no place for a another girl for Karan as per my storyline, but he might get one later on... lets see! 😉

Will try to update the next chap soon, thanks so much for reading and commenting

Edited by -AquaMermaiden- - 11 years ago

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sakshi1rani2

@sakshi1rani2

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

hey! wow amazing reply yaar...😃😃😃

it"s just so explainable, over here we get to know each and every thing about monia, and its quite amusing too😆...loved the manveer scene and hope to have a lot of it in forth coming updates...👏...and i wish ki iss bar thoda jaldi update hoga...😃

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saakhi01

@saakhi01

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

My guess is that, u r planning a Love Triangle here 😉 😆

Bt pls haan, mere arnav n apne karan ka dil mat todna 😉

Thanks for the reply, Arrogant Uday ke liye takkar ka banda choose kiya h aapne... 😆

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SHANA

@ShanUlas

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

mahi u r still writing it !!

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@-SilverAngel-

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: sakshi1rani2
hey! wow amazing reply yaar...😃😃😃
it"s just so explainable, over here we get to know each and every thing about monia, and its quite amusing too😆...loved the manveer scene and hope to have a lot of it in forth coming updates...👏...and i wish ki iss bar thoda jaldi update hoga...😃

The way I have shaped the first two chapters is that I have shown Uday doing bad and Manyata doing good and standing up for what she feels is right instead of getting intimidated. I wanted to show stark contrast between the leads, their thinking and their lifestyles. Yup you'll get a lot of ManVeer in the upcoming updates.

Okay dear, will try to update soon!

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sakshi1rani2

@sakshi1rani2

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

hey! when r u going to update chap 3, u know na ki all of us r waiting for ur next🥱 update...so, the final question is when r u going to update💔❓

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@-SilverAngel-

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: saakhi01
My guess is that, u r planning a Love Triangle here 😉 😆
Bt pls haan, mere arnav n apne karan ka dil mat todna 😉
Thanks for the reply, Arrogant Uday ke liye takkar ka banda choose kiya h aapne... 😆

Kisi na kisi ka dil toh tote ga hi but lets see. Akash is too thanda in comparison to Uday but who knows maybe he will tapak paro in the story too... who knows 😆