~Where Loyalties Lie~ llA Collab Sandhir FFll *Chp4 updated pg 27!* - Page 19

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: gujjupari

As I read this chapter, the title of the FF made soo much more sense, "Where Loyalties Lie!"

Sure, the title of the chapter was pretty accurate as well...

But you both have decided on such an apt title!!! The way you both showcased the fundamental conflict in an individual, whether to choose right or wrong over human relations, is extremely commendable!👏

Continue Soon!


Pari. as writers, m sure u know what amount of satisfaction it brings u to know that the readers have understood every detail of the ff...

That is exactly how the title came up, n i love u for this comment of urs. It means alot u knw.
Alot!
So thank u! 🤗
Yes, will continue soon! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
4. When life cheats u!


He looked at her, to assure himself that she was just lying, that all of this was nothing but a nightmare! For a moment, he actually saw pain and love in her eyes, though, the very next moment, she blinked, and all of it was gone...He again tried searching for some emotions in her tired eyes, nothing was visible though.

"U r kidding right?" It escaped his mouth, even without him realising what he was going to say.
"No I am not...I will be a witness on behalf of Sonia Kundra.." She said with a straight face, her eyes not once meeting his. She feared her decision would falter, if she glanced into those emotion filled eyes of his.
He looked at her numb, his eyes to tired to cry.
"Well then, the first hearing of the case shall be in a week. Till then, u would be kept in jail, but since ur mother Miss.Sanyal, has made
arrangements for ur bail, u may leave aftr some formalities." The officer incharge said, bringing all the documents which required Randhir's
signature, while everyone continued looking at Sanyukta in disgust. Vardhan's blood boiled on realising what she had just done,
Parth couldn't help but give her a filthy look! Even he knew Randhir would never do something so cheap! How come she did not?

"Its ok Randhir, hum sab tumhaare saath hai...kisi ek insaan k jaane se, tumhaara defence weak nahi ho jaega." Parth glanced at Sanyukta, and
uttered, his tone filled with venom. He placed his hand on Randhir's shoulder, assuring him, they would stand by him, come what may. But Randhir was too shocked to react, his brain had yet not processed Sanyukta's words. He had loved her, trusted her, lived her!
May be she was doing it on purpose, as Randhir fought the best only against her! Yeah, may be she wanted him to emerge victorious,
which happened everytime he was placed against her, and not with her!
His heart felt relaxed, as he tried convincing himself, but Sanyukta's next sentence, shattered all his hopes, which were as it is false,

"Kitne log Randhir ko support karte hai , usse koi farak nahi padhta...End main jeet Sach ki hoti hai!"
Her taunting tone, made Randhir cringe. He looked at her with hope and desperation...His farzi did not trust him? What was the use of fighting the battle, when she did not trust him? He felt disgusted at himself for not being able to win her trust! He was at fault for not being able to make her trust him...

"Yeah, u r right Sanyukta..." He whispered, a fresh set of tears escaping his blood shot eyes, and finally, she looked into his eyes, only to see, hurt, pain and disappointment...While all he saw in hers was the one thing he hated the most- Sympathy. His blood boiled on realising she only sympathised with him, and did not trust him! Yes, this unfortunate turn of events had made him discover the fact that, there were alot of people who cared for him, who loved him. But that care and love, felt meaningless, as the person whom he loved and cared for the most, did not give a damn about him, when he needed her the most! This fight was pointless without having his farzi on his side, the friends around him were pointless, as without his farzi, he felt as lonely as ever. All of a sudden, his fighting spirit disappeared, along with Sanyukta's support! He had this sudden urge of walking out of everyone's life, he as it is was not needed by anyone, he thought.
His parents had no time for him, his friends appreciated him only for his intelligence, and the one peron he has expected love from, to had back stabbed him!
He walked out of the police station, mentally taking the emotional decision to leave everyone's life forever...


Well, i hope u liked this part!! Do not forget to leave ur views! :)
Edited by winchesters - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
res
unres

yayyy me first
loved the title iffu
randhir ki life ne use cheat jo kiya
ye sanyukta kar kya rhi h😕😕
she didn't trust randhir
she will be against him...how can she do that😡😡😡
and when she taunted randhir, i wanted to slap her🤢
but happy to see that everyone else is on randhir side😊
parth ne sanyukya ko sunakr acha kiya
poor randhir...he is so broken😭😭
he wants his farzi to be on his side and trust him 🥺
but she is sympathizing him
when will she understand that randhir can't do anything else
someone should give her a nice piece of mind
but the update was so short...shuru hote hi khtm ho gya😛
plz iffu next time thoda lambu update dena😊

love
Gunjan🤗
Edited by shona25 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Is Sanyukta really against him as it does look like or is it her way of supporting him as Randhir is predicting that he emerged as victorious whenever he was placed against her..
I am sure Sanyukta is blackmailed into this.. but everyone at FITE is upset with her even her best friend Parth.. Lets see what is stored in future for them.
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Posted: 11 years ago
I m crying by seeing rd's condition.
continue soon
nice update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey! Iffu
lovely, nicely and beautifully written dear👏⭐️
Love it😳
Keep it up👍🏼
But RD condition😭
Do continue soon eagerly waiting
Thanks for pm
Love
Bushra
🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
i really felt like crying for randhir😭 ...very well written about randhir's emotion, his helplessness...pls update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
You are writing other Fic...?? 😲 Just found it out now and read all the 4 chapters...Wow...An amazing concept...My heart broke for Randhir so many times...!!! Hope you will update soon...😳
Edited by A.Hajnal - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
M so latee T_T
Res T_T

Wasn't this too very long Iffu? -_____-
Itna chotusa update?!
Isse bada toh bandar k FFpe mera comment hai! x(
But the chappy was marvellous!
U have potrayed his emotions just so well!!
N sanyu? What has happened to her?!
How can she be so insensitive 2wards her MCP?
She believed that gal n nt him?
She jus left him hanging so much so that he decides to leave evry1s life?
I jus did not expect this from her x(
N mahan ho ha tumlog!
Ab tak reveal nai kia sonia ne kya bola!
Cliffhangers!! T_T
Update soon plshhh!
N next time thoda size ka dhyaan rakha kar🤣

Loads of love<3
Rosh
Edited by panchan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow. That was a long update. -__-
And I don't remember getting a PM. -__-
Liked it, anyway. :P :D

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