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Posted: 18 years ago
#31
wow i just read your ff it's fabulous 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#32
part 14

kripa;lesson??(shocked n crying)
then she come in front of him n said(teary voice)wat did u think haa...... 😡 😡
kripa: 😡 catch his kolar...how dare u angad khanna ,how dare u(she cant speaks more n her breaks down)tears r falling frm her eyes
angad cant see her like this(he never thought abt that she will react like this)
angad:(trying to say someting)
kripa:dnt dare to come near me... (scream)i hate u ,i hate u more then any thing in this world angad khanna....
angad:(he is hurt to hear this frm kripa)
kripa:mere saath zabar dasti kar k tum mujhey kamzor sabit karna chahtey the naa......u knw wat angad....ek larki ki kamzori kya hoti hai..... k wo kisi k ghar ki izzat hoti hai,chahey wo kisi ki beti,behn,biwi ya maa he kyu na hoo....or tumney meri isi kamzoori ka faida uthaya mujhey lesson sikhaney k liye.....i hate u,just get out frm here 😡
for the firs time he feels ashaimed for himself....he feels that he did something very wrong 😔
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Posted: 18 years ago
#33
awesome part
continue soon n plz make it long
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Posted: 18 years ago
#34
great part
hope kripa forgives angad
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Posted: 18 years ago
#35
part 15

they both were restless whole night
.....next day...
kripa lost in her thoughts n not feeling well n as she cudnt tell anything to tannu
t:di,kya baat hai aap theek to hai ,kal raat bhi aap theek se soi nahi
k:hardly smiles ya tannu im fine
t: 😊 ok then she talking abt last night in disco that how she tease rahul all the time n all
k:(she is not even istening to tannu)
t:di! mujhey lagta hai mai aap ko bore kar rahi hoo
k: 😊 no not all tannu....then she ask y not go for a shopping(she want to b a change)
t:great
.......in the mall
3 of them having nice time in mall but then she saw angad n he also saw her
kripa trying to avoid him
but he came in front of her n said:i want to talk to u
k: but i dnt want to talk n she walk away
angad just stare her.....
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Posted: 18 years ago
#36
KOOOLL PLZ continuee wut a gr88 story!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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part 16
in the evening.....
kripa,tannu n raul in some resturant which is near to thr hotel(15 min walk)....after having lunch
t:di!kitna acha mausam hai.....lets go for a walk
r:winks 😉 to tannu....ya good idea
k:no..im very tired now...i cant come
t:pllz di
k:well u guyz carry on....im not comming
then tannu n rahul go for a walk n kripa going to hotel,while going to hotel she lost in her thoughts(thinking angad)she even not realize that she is walking in the middle of the road(just in ekta syle)
angad was standing near telephone booth as his cell phone battery was low n he had to make some importnat phone call....he saw kripa passing frm thr n she walikng in the middle of road then suddenly a truck comes behind her....she still not realizing
angad try to call her name but he stunned to realize that he doesnt knew her name(he never call her by name when ever they meet)
truck getting close n closer to her....angad runs to save her then suddenly she saw angad coming toward her...n then she look bak where angad is pointing n yelling(move....hurry up)kripa get puzzled n then just anagd reach thr u pull her toward him n truck paasing by them....
they both r quit scared coz of this incident...they hugging each other tightly
kripa feels very protective in angad arms..n angad felt that he is not save her life but his life(they thought for a moment)
after few min....they get apart
a:(scolding kripa)r u mad....itna bara truck nazar nahi ata??
k:(look into his eyes she saw,anger,concern n something else(hidden love which they both yet not realize)
a:wat a crap were u thikng in the middle of the road
k:im thinking abt u(teary n scary voice)
a:wat(confused)
k:(confused too)but said:thnx any ways
a:it ok
kripa going away frm him when he holds her wrist(softly)
a:i knw i did wrong...last night
k:-----(just give a glance to him)

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Posted: 18 years ago
#38
part 17

kripa look at him in dis belief(as she never accept this frm him)
angad comes closer to her
k:i dnt knw angad......(said in confusion)
a:smiles
k:can u leave my hand(said polietly)
angad leave her hand n she abt to going when angad screams
a:hey i dnt knw ur name....can u tell me??
k:turns bak...n said kripa
a:kripa???
k:ya
a:kripa means blessing....right??
k:smiles to herself but didnt reply him n went away
a:smiels to himself
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Posted: 18 years ago
#39
part 18...

tannu:di papa ka phone hai
k:hello papa
s:hi beta,how r u
k:mai theek hoo papa...app kaisey ho
s:waisey to mai theek hoo but i missing my daughters...
k:oh papa....we also missing u so much.....aisa kartey hai hum kal he aajatey hai
s:no beta u enjoy urself....
K:no papa we will come tommorow
s:u r the best daughter in world....
k:n u r the best papa....,,ok bye papa
s:bye beta
then kripa putt the phone down n happily smiles
..................next morning
angad reach the hill top where he saw kripa first time n he saw kripa again,she wear a white short,sleevlees kameez with pajama along with net duppatta(she is looking sweet n simple as beauty needs no ornaments)
angad;(thinking himself)kya ye sach mai yaha par khari hai ya it just my imagenation..
angad lost in staring here
when kripa comes near him
kripa:ahm ahm
a: oh..(came bak on earth) r u actually here
k:matlab
a:oh no nothing
angad n kripa gives a frndly smiles to each other....then thr is a long silent btw them..they continuesly giving glance to each other.....both r feeling quite uncomfortabel
then finally kripa broke the silense
k:aap india pehli baar aye hai??(she want to confirm abt how she feel that she knw him before they met in simla)
a:ya
k:(disapoint)oh k
then again a long silent btw them
n now angad speaks
a:ye jaga bohot khubsurat hai
k:ya...it is beautiful
they both stare each other n lost in each other eyes
angad comes near to kriiipa
a:tumhey baby goats k saath khelna bohot acha laga hai kya(asking innocently like a 6,7 years old kid)
K: 😆 😆 😆


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Posted: 18 years ago
#40
plz contuine soon it was such good parts plz write longer parts I love this story a lot.

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