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Posted: 18 years ago
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part 9

someone:wats ur problem??y r u shouting(said rudly)
he is non other then angad...he memorized her with in second but ignore it
k:(felt for second that his voice is so similer to her)but it takes a second to came in reality...she is geting even more mad abt wat guy just asked...
K:tumhey abb bhi dikhai nahi deta.....just look at ourselves ,tumhari waja se hamari kya halat huwi hai...
a:thats not my fault(rudly)
k: 😡 wat???humsey maafi mangney k bajaye tum ye keh rahe ho k tumney koi galati he nahi ki
a:maafi!!!!forget it sweety(said sarcastically)....then he take out some money n said i think u want this
k:geting even more mad....we dnt want ur money mr??
a:then??
then kripa take some mud n smashed it on angad clothes n on angad car
K:now u dnt want to apoligize coz im do the same thing that wat did u do with us......hisaab barabar(smiles sarcastically)
by this act of kripa angad was stunned n then he looked kripa with lots of anger n madness n hold her wrist pulled her close to him n said:i wil teach u a lesson....u just wait n watch....




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Posted: 18 years ago
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part 10

angad:(thinking)wat the hell she think herself....how dare she !!!!getting more n more mad 😡
then his cell rings......
j:kaha hai tu...we all r waiting for u
a:madly 😡 im not coming ....
j:wat
A:i said im not coming....cant u hear me(said madly again)
j:ok 😡 as ur wish but u shud think abt rohit....he was been ur good frnd...
a:cut the phone
.....after half an hour
angad reach at rohit place to attend his engagement party...
j:wat happened to u
a:tells josh the whole story
j:(smiling)mujhey yakken nahi ata.....kisi larki mai itna dum bhi hai jo angad khanna ko challenge kar sakey..impressive
a:i will kill u josh
j:just chill yaar
a:no josh i cant bear this
j:acha relax ....just dnt think abt her
a:it is impossible.....
J:wat???u r saying that its impossible for anagd khanna to forget that girl......ab to ussey dekhna he parega..
a:-------
😡

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Posted: 18 years ago
#23
haha wow the way josh talks to angad cracks me up 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#24
just read all the parts there really good
hope kripa and angad dont fight for to long and instead should become friends
your fanfic is really intresting
cant wait for the next part
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Posted: 18 years ago
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part 11

kripa(thinking herself)y im feeling so strange??y i feel that i knew him y his voice is soundz similer to me...yyyyy???kripa feels helpless thinking abt him....she doesnt get any clue that how she knew him....she is getting tired n then she fell sleep
.........................next morning
K:tannu mai jogging k liye ja rahi hoo..r u coming??
t:(sleepy voice)no di!!
k:ok then im going
t:ok
then she went out frm room n go for jogging
while jogging she lost in her thoughts when she hears ....angad angad
she pointed her eyes where a group of girl n angad r stands.....she sees that all girl r going crazy for anagad....n angad r doing openly flirt with them
kripa:(oh god give some sence to these girls)she starts jogging again...when she hit the electric poll n she screams loudly(ouch)
all ppl r thr start giggling
then just angad comes thr....n said.....aksar larkiya mujhey dekh kar aisey he kho jaati hai(said arogently)
k:(thinking)how wud he knw that im looking at him
a:heran honey ki aroorat nahi hai......mainey tumhey dhek liya tha k tum mujhey ghoor rahi hoo
K:haa mai tumhey he dekh rahi thi or ye bhi dekh rahi thi k tum kya kar rahe the
a:ohohooo so u r get jealous
k:jealous n me??nevr
tum ho kya.....jo larkiyo ko izzat dena nahi jaanta.....aisey larkey se mai dor rehna he pasand karongi............n then she went bak..
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wonderful story plz cont soon 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#27
i will continue soon.....
thnx for liking my ff
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Posted: 18 years ago
#28
the last 3 parts were awesome continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#29
part 12

then she went bak but angad catch her wrist n turn her a round...
a: 😡 -----
k: leave me 😲 😡 ....i said leave me
a: (just abt to say somthing but his cell phone rings)
k:i said leave me(tear in her eyes coz angad hold her wrist very tightly)
a: 😡 uuuu??cell phone is still ringing....looking at cell phone he smiles himself n then he leave kripa
kripa runs frm thr
then angad attending the call
a:hi mom,how r u??
n:im fine beta...tum kaisey ho??
a:im fine mom
n:or rohit ki shahdi kaisey chal rahi hai??
a:great mom 🤔
n:angadddd!!
a:yes mom
n:mai ye keh rahi thi k tum bhi larki pasand kar he lo...apni zindagi k liye
a:wat??mai or shadi wo bhi india girl!!!!wat a joke
n: no angad im serious
a:mom plzzz
n:(unhappy to hear this frm angad)ye lo apney dad se baat karo
d:hey how r u my son??
a:great dad
d:tumhari meeting kab hai mr mehra k saath(indian softwere company's m.d)
A:after 2 weeks dad
d:ohh
a:dnt worry dad i'll manage
d:i knw u will 😊
a:ok dad bye
d:bye
.......................................................in evening
angad is busy in his project work then josh came in ask
j:hey angad rohit is throughing a bachlors party tonight
r u comming??
a:no ....im not....i hav some work to do
j: 😕 ok
then josh left for the party n angad is keep busy himself but cant concentrate in his work coz of kripa...he is trying hard to ignor her but her behaviour n bueaty boths interrupt in during his work...
anagd feels restless
.........................................
on other side
tannu:di!!lets go disco tonight
k:no i dnt want to come
t:but y
k:coz mera mood nahi hai
t:mai jao???rahul k saath(requesting)
k:😊 ok..but come bak soon....
t:thnx di 😃
then tannu gets ready n then tannu n rahul went for disco
t:oh i forgot my bag in room
then she going bak to her room ....she is abt to enter in hotels coridor(2nd flr) n then suddenly lights gone(loadsheding)
t:oh god....ab kya karo???chalo yaha tak a gayi hoo to bag ley he leti hoo
...........
someone one knocking at angad door...he open the door but due to loadshedding....he cant see the face of the person.......
tannu:oh di thank god aap ney door khol liya...mai apna bag bhool gayi.....
she just complete her sentance n light comes n she is shock to c angad...she recoginize him in second after that car incident
on other hand angad is also recogonize her that she is the one who was with kripa
tannu:oh im soory....i thought this is our room
angad:its ok..never mind
tann:went bak n knocking at her room
angad saw this that she is knocking the room just next to him
a:(thinking to himself)that means.....she(kripa) is staying just next door
a:(smiles sarcasticaly)
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Posted: 18 years ago
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part 13

kripa is lying on bed n reading a novel..after a while someone knock the door
k:ab kon hai(thinking herself)
she opens the door n shocked to c angad
k: 😕 tum??
angad enters in her room n shut the door behind
K:(she is afraid but trying to look confident)tum yaha kyu aye ho??
angad:(coming close n closer n closer to her)but said nothing
kripa looking in his eyes...his eyes is filling with anger,passion n thr is some thing else she saw in his eyes which she cant understand(love 😳 )(the love which they will both realize after a long long time)
she is getting afriad
then angad put his hand around her waist n pull her toward him....
kripa is getting more more scared n said leave me(teary voice)
angad:oh come on!!!ye he to chati thi na tum k angad khanna khud tumharey paas aye....mujhey impress karna chati thi na apney behaveoiur se
kripa:leave me plzz
anagd:no i want darling then he touch her eye,cheeks, n lips by other hand
by touching angad kripa feels somehting very strange ,feels somthing very beautyful .....but she controls her emotions n she just trying to yell but angad locked her lips to put his lips on it
kripa: 😲 😡 trying to push him bak very hard...but she cudnt make him to move away...(as angad is rough n tough body)
then she start hitting him ...n after a 5 min kiss angad go away frm her n see her n starts laughing(sarcastically)
angad to kripa: look at ur self.....bohot bahadur samajhti ho na khud ko
kripa:look at him with teary eyes
a:well dnt worry im not going to do any thing....i jsut came here to teach u lesson
k:lesson??(shocked,crying)

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