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Posted: 11 years ago

Yaar, I didn't expect such a long reply back! It made me feel super amazing! I love ya sooo much girl! it's crazy! hahaha! we have to talk everyday otherwise it feels weird and I love that! hahaha! okay! okay! I want to review chapter 10! sooo... I am gonna go!

AND AND AND! and to the girl with the username gujjupari, I read your comment! thanks so much! I thought my message must be hard to follow because it was covering sooo much. But thanks! I read your review and when it mentioned me... I was on cloud 9! you're adorbs! thanks!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ilovepyaar

There is a wonderful girl named Kri (Kri1) who reviews my chapters. A few posts up on this page, I have replied to a really nice (and lengthy) comment by her... it talks about this fanfic (and what's coming up), so if you want to give her comment and my response a read, then you can do so and leave your thoughts about it! =D


I love you... loads. Nuff said! haha! I mean... gosh. You mentioned me yaar... I have this wide smile that won't leave now! hahaha! i get it all the time now when I get on IF! hahaha! I am gonna have wrinkles pretty soon!!!🤣 OKAYYY! LET'S REVIEW!!!!

Day Four: Part I

Sanyukta stared at her reflection in the mirror, the same smile from last night still haunting her face. She adjusted her dupatta around her neck to hide the red mark that was situated there.
Ahh! He gave her a hickey! hahahaha!

"Kaustuuu," Sanyukta whined, "I don't want to see him!"

There were butterflies floating in her stomach... the thought of seeing him again was exhilarating, nerve-wracking and something she wanted to run away from.

She never believed in lust... but she didn't hate Randhir either anymore. She wanted to be with him. It couldn't be love... no way! She wasn't in love. She was attracted... or in other words, lust. Randhir made her believe in something she thought didn't even exist!
She is in disbelief that she actually loves him... haha! poor thing yaar! heheh!

"Just go Sanyu!" Kaustuki replied, with a smile on her face.

"I don't even look good! I don't have any decent clothing!" she complained.

"You look nice Sanyu... okay wait," Kaustuki said, making her way over to Sanyukta and started to french-braid her hair.

Sanyukta had already finished applying pink nail polish on her fingers and had put on makeup... a lot of makeup to look nice for Randhir.
Silly girl! *WHAT UP RANDHIR REFERENCE! ... gosh I love Randhir too much.. it's unhealthy* but... silly girl... he loves you how you are.. he's not gonna treasure the make-up!?

She was wearing a salwar kameez.

"Sanyu, wear something nicer, more modern," Kaustuki suggested.

"No... Kaustu, I have to hide my neck," she muttered, blushing.

"Why?"

"He... he gave me a hickey," she whispered, completely embarrassed.
HAHAHAHAHA! gosh... my heart fluttered at that comment.

Kaustuki's jaw dropped open.

"You two have been making out?" she asked, her eyes widening. "Sanyu why didn't you tell me?"

Sanyukta blushed and hid her face behind her hands.

Kaustuki shook her head.

"Wear skinny jeans and a nice shirt... then wear a scarf as a design," she suggested.

Sanyukta nodded and obeyed Kaustuki. She always knew how to look good. When she came out wearing dark blue skinny jeans and a v-neck blouse that clung to her body, a scarf around her neck, Kaustuki grinned.

"Much better," she said. "Now go... you're getting late!"

Sanyukta shook her head nervously. "I - I can't face him!"

"Why not?"

"I just can't!" she said, blushing deeply.

"Aww Sanyu, you have a crush," Kaustuki said brightly. "Go and work on your project first, think about him second!"
AWH! I love how Sanyu is shyyy! THAT'S JUST TOO! SWEET!

She nodded slowly, still wondering how she would get him off her mind, especially since she was working with him.
ahhh! ADORBS!
She made her way to the mechanical lab slowly. It was nine in the morning and she was on time for once.

Once inside, she noticed that he wasn't there. Sighing with relief, she placed her bag down on the desk.

She got a text as soon as she sat down from Randhir.

Won't be there today... you handle it. I know you can.
Kya... WHY! HE NEEDS TO BE THERE! 😳😃

What
? She felt herself get angry. She tried to look presentable for him and he wasn't even going to show up?

She called him right away. He didn't pick up.

Where are you?
she sent, hoping that he would at least have the decency to tell her where he was.

Just tied down.

She gritted her teeth angrily. She didn't ask why, she asked where. She was about to send him another text when he replied.

I'm in my room. Don't come here. You need to finish the project.
hmmm. does he want her with him... lol.?!

Just then Parth entered with Vidhushi. He gave Sanyukta a disgusted look before he walked to his workstation. Sanyukta felt like snapping, but she held herself back and ran out of the mechanical lab towards the boy's dormitories.

Typical Sanyuuu! SHe was told not to come... and... now she is going! lol. Love herrr

She knew that Jiggy was with Kaustuki, so that meant that Randhir was alone in the room. What was he doing?
Alone in his room? hmmm? is it a part of his plan?

Glad to see that the coast was clear, she entered the boys dormitories with ease and knocked on Randhir's door. When he opened it, her heart sank. His eyes were bloodshot red, as if he hadn't slept last night.
Was he troubled about her?!

"Randhir," she said, reaching out to touch his cheek.

She was sure that this had to do with his parent's divorce.
Uh oh. nooo!

She couldn't see him like this. She wanted to hug him and tell him that she was going to be there for him everytime he needed someone.
SHE LOVES HIM ... this. this. is the biggest proof.

He stopped her hand in midair, looked in both directions, and then pulled her in, locking the door behind her.

Just like she had guessed, his room was empty.

"What happened?" she asked, concerned for him.

"I told you to work on the project didn't I?" he asked angrily. "What will happen to that now?"

She didn't know why he was acting like the old Randhir. She wasn't nobody anymore, she was his girlfriend, she had the right to know what was happening in his life.

"Randhir, please tell me what's going on," she said softly, reaching out to touch his shoulder comfortingly.

"Sanyukta, go away!" Randhir yelled out of frustration.
Gosh... I can so see this... I am speechless. you're amazing yaar. thank you for this.

She felt like crying - not because Randhir told her to go away, because that was his natural reaction... he never let anyone into his life if he could help it, but because she couldn't see him like this.

"Randhir, I didn't get with you to leave you!" she yelled back, feeling her eyes sting with tears.
I LOVE THIS! SHE FINALLY SPOKE IT.

Why couldn't he understand that fact? Noticing her tears, he stepped forward, held on to her shoulders gently and seated her on his bed, falling to his knees in front of her. She felt the tears fall from her eyes.

He wiped her tears with his fingers and took her hands in his.
oh gosh... this is too emotional... my stomach is hurting because I don't even know how to react... kya yaar! you're just super great at this...

"I'm sorry," he muttered, "I shouldn't have said that."

She shook her head, her lips trembling, and took his face in her hands.

"What happened Randhir?" she asked again.

He placed his head on her lap and suddenly started to sob.

"They postponed the court date again for next month," he choked. "I found out last night... and dad wants me there or he won't talk to me."

So it is about his parent's divorce! I think this is the first step for them as a couple to really talk about things serious... up until now.. their attraction for each other was making them happy... but the moment they step outside... they are seeing the hardships.. and I hope this is the first hardship they will tackle. Together.

Sanyukta felt tears fall out of her own eyes seeing Randhir in this condition. She stroked his hair softly.

"It's okay Randhir," she said, wiping her own eyes.

He looked up at her like a little child who was lost and needed to find someone desperately. Sanyukta reached out and wiped his tears with her fingers before cupping his face.

"I'm here for you Randhir," she said genuinely.

He wrapped his arms around her and pressed his face against her stomach, closing his eyes.

"You won't be Sanyukta, you'll leave me just like the rest of them," he said hoarsely.
gosh! ... he ... I am speechless.

"No Randhir... I promise I won't," she said honestly, stroking his hair again. "You must be so tired. You haven't slept all night have you?"

Randhir stood up and Sanyukta followed his lead. He shook his head.

"I'm sorry... let's go work on the project, that comes first," he said, turning around, but Sanyukta caught his hand.

"Randhir, rest," she commanded.

"But the project," he argued, "We need to complete it today. Tomorrow we're going to have to go to the venue and then the day after is the presentation."

She shook her head and dragged him to his bed. Sitting down, she tugged at his hand to indicate that she wanted him on his bed too. He sat down next to her.

She crossed her legs and gently brought Randhir's head to her lap. He stretched his legs and closed his eyes as she stroked his head.

"I'll be fine when I wake up, I promise," he mumbled.
... I am seriously too stunned.

"Shhh," she said, stroking his hair. "Be quiet and sleep!"

"You look very nice by the way," he said into her lap. "Sorry I couldn't appreciate you more."

"You can appreciate me when you wake up," she said, blushing.

She watched his lips curve upwards to form a smile and she immediately felt her heart fill with warmth.

"I promise I will," he replied.

She leaned forward and planted a kiss on the top of his head and leaned back against his bedframe until his breathing got heavier and he fell asleep. She watched him sleep, holding on to her legs like he needed her, and she couldn't help but wonder what she was thinking when she told herself that she wanted to break his heart.

She wouldn't break his heart.

She would make sure he fell in love with her by the end of the week, but that didn't mean that she would break his heart afterwards. She would keep her promise, she wouldn't leave him. She would stay with him. Smiling happily to herself, she kissed the top of his head one more time.

this realization is so beautiful... I can't believe you wrote this so quickly..

A few hours later, Parth entered the room and looked at them, disgusted.

"Sanyukta, Randhir isn't the only one who lives in this room," he said loudly.

Randhir stirred in his sleep and Sanyukta angrily placed a finger on her lips indicating for Parth to be quiet.

"Shhh," she hissed, stroking Randhir's hair softly. "He's sleeping!"

Parth rolled his eyes and left the room, closing the door loudly behind him. Randhir woke up with a start.

"Go back to sleep Randhir," Sanyukta said softly.

He rubbed his eyes and looked at the time.

"Oh no Sanyukta, it's one!" he yelled, getting off the bed.

"So?" she asked.

"You should've worked on the task!" he snapped.

She got up too, stretching her legs.

"I care more about you than the damn task!" she yelled, feeling a blush creep up her cheeks.

She saw his face soften as he took a step towards her, holding her arms and pulling her close, seemingly lost in her eyes. Time seemed to stand still for a moment as they looked at each other.

That... is so beautiful.

"Too much makeup farzi," he finally said with a smirk, letting go of her.

I KNEW IT! I KNEW MY RD! 😃

She furrowed her eyebrows angrily. She spent all this time getting dressed for him, and he was here criticizing her?

"And why are you wearing that tasteless scarf?" he asked, wrapping his arms around her waist and pulling her close.

"T- t - tasteless?" she spluttered angrily. "I knew you were still an MCP. Argh!"

She shook his arms off her and stormed towards the mechanical lab. A few minutes later, he joined her there too.

I love how he is... this is so him... he bounces back to regular life because that's how he's had to deal with his problems... more analysis below.

They were alone, and he was was walking closer to her. She felt her breath hitch in her throat.

"Take off the scarf," he ordered.

She felt her face burn. "No!"

HAHAHAHA! does he want to see ...shhh... I am blushing noww... ahhh.

He walked even closer to her, her walking backwards with each step he took, until she hit the wall.

"Take it off," he whispered into her ear, making her feel weak in the knees.

"N - no!" she replied feebly.

He brought his fingers up, gently carressing the skin over her neck, making her shudder, before taking off the scarf and letting it fall to the ground.

She gasped as he smirked seeing the hickey.

"Who gave this to you farzi?" he teased.

HAHAHA! I love him. hahaha!

"Shut up MCP," she said, trying to push him off, but he pressed her body back with his.

His lips made their way over the red mark, making her shudder again. Instinctively, she tangled her fingers in his hair as he kissed it softly.

"Don't worry, next time I'll give them in places nobody will see," he said with a wink and backed off, picking up the scarf and wrapping it around her neck again.
HAHAHA! oh my god. oh myyy... imma faint.

Why was she blushing so hard? Why did she want him so close to her? Surely... this was just lust's effect.

Smirking, he walked back to the model.

"No matter what we do, we have to finish everything today," he explained. "Vardhaan sir already informed me that he'll take care of transporting the model. Tomorrow afternoon we're going to leave for the venue. It's a five hour ride. We'll get there in the evening. Next morning is the competition."

Why didn't Vardhaan sir tell her this? She frowned.

"He told me the day you slept until one," he said with a smirk, reading her thoughts again. "I just remembered."

"Fine," she said through gritted teeth. "Presentation's almost done anyways."

"Good," he said simply, and began to work on the machine.

She glanced at Randhir who was so into his work... he looked so good that she kept on staring. She didn't know why she didn't want to take her eyes off him. She felt a dreamy smile take over her features as she continued to watch him.

When he turned around to look at her, she still didn't snap out of her reverie. He walked towards her and gripped her wrist tightly, which caused her to look up sharply, her breath catching in her throat again.

"What were you looking at?" he asked with a raised eyebrow.

Then, without thinking, her hormones taking over her senses, she pressed her lips against his. He dragged his hands up her cheek and into her hair as he responded, causing her to shudder. He grabbed her back and held her close so she wouldn't fall backwards.

She took a step back and smiled, her cheeks flushed, feeling content. He took a step towards her and held her waist again, pulling her close.

"Randhir... task," she muttered, "Focus!"

"I have such a hot girlfriend," he replied with a smirk, inching closer to her, "She comes before everything else."

god... ahhh!

She felt herself blush and closed her eyes, anticipating a kiss, but she heard Randhir's footsteps only walking away from her.

Surprised, she opened her eyes to find Vidhushi at the doorway, her mouth open.

"You two are together?!" Vidhushi sputtered, her eyes wide, as if she couldn't believe it.

Shit. Now the whole school was going to find out.
HAHAHAHA!

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Leave your thoughts! ^_^


👏👏👏 This is the chapter... this is that chapter which I am desperately and hopelessly in love with! ahhh!

This chapter proves that Sandhir has an emotional connection. All this time, well.. at least in the fic... since they have become bf-gf, they have been pretty much physical.. Even though I love it... blush to where I am redder than a beet root, and get speechless because it's sooo hot... I love how they both cried and opened up to some extent.

In any relationship... it's very important to be about to let loose and share sorrows. And this is exactly what RD did.. he told her about the divorce and wasn't ashamed to cry in front of her... And I am really happy with the concern and pain that Sanyu felt when she saw RD like that. That beautiful realization that screamed how could she have even thought of breaking his heart made me so happy inside... it's pretty inexplicable... but yes...

Of course... there is physical intimacy again.. but that just makes me all happy and warm inside... I love how RD wanted the scarf off. THAT WAS THE BEST SEXY SCENE EVER! hahaha!

I love how RD just bounces back in life... and I think that's what makes him sooo good. It's his character to avoid problems with his parents...and to not let that interfere... LOVE IT! POST NEXT CHAPTER SOON! LOVE YAAA!

Kudos to your imagination! hahaha! I love ya! and I got to go! I HAVE TO WAKE UP EARLY! LOVE YAAA! sorry... I want to say more.. but I am yawning and it's hurting me... lol.

Okay! I am gonna go!!!! HAHA! LOVE YOU!

LOVE KRI! MUAAAHHH *HUG*

Sorry if I don't sound right... just remember that I was super tired.. and I am going to sleep now! LOVE YAAA! byeee!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Fab Update once again...⭐️
A great begining to another day...(i.e. day 4)
Loved the way u penned Randhir's sad heart,n Sanyu's genuine love n concern for Randhir can be felt at heart in this chapter...😊
N Omgeee the end..loved it😆
brilliantly penned once again Saffii...👏
Ur updates are the last thing that I read before sleeping(last thing,coz u know whn i sleep,its just the time whn u update😉)...or else the first thing I do after I wake up in the morning...n m glad u never disappoint me...rather u always delight me wid it...😃
Thnx a tonn for writing such a fabulous SS...🤗
I would love to see it turned into an FF indeed...
Edited by Piya1702 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update yaar...
too good...
you penned it beautifully...
n what the hell...
ye Vidushi kaha se aa gayi :P
now eagerly waiting for the next part...
plzz update soonish.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey dear
love the update
so emotional
Love the way Sayun is all set to be there for Randhir
that too forever
I hope wo khud hi Randhir ko bet ke baare mein bata de
But I am sure u will not do that😉😆
love SanDhir kiss as always
plz try to continue soon
Thanks for the PM
Take care

Lots of Love
Geet

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Posted: 11 years ago
Aaah i am just gonna die now !!!!
This was sooo amazing !!!!!!
Your chapters keep getting better and better
And this was a chapter which was definitely needed..
It was more of an emotional one !!!
Here we come to know that both of them feel something for each other other than attraction and lust..
So its good progress..
I feel bad that sanyu promised him she will never leave him.. i hope she doesn't !!!!
I loved the scene in his room.. Awww.
That was sooo cute..
He found comfort in her arms...
That's amazing progress !!!!!
And the mech lab scene..
She just can't get enough of him can she ??? :P
He is sooo romantic.. i am really loving randhir here..
He just takes you by surprise..
Oh god now vidushi knows.. what next !! Update soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing and beautiful update...😊
loved it
plzz update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
ooww...man i am soo sorry i haven't been able to review it properly... :"D

but this was sooo emotional !!

that sleeping part was AWWW!! :"(
I want that to happen...

\rd's parents :"(
RD :"((( </3 :""""(

IMMA CRY AGAIN :""(

BEAUTIFUL SAAFI! 🤗
astounding :")
enticing... xD

sorry for the delay! :*:*
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey nyc update she cares for him still.she thinks it is lust stupid girl nd vids know abut them sumthng intrstng gonna happen update next part asap 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
its was super amazing...update soon :)

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