Gift OS : Had It Been Like This..GIFT 5 page 15 - Page 5

Perfect one dear...

Anu is copy of Rawte & rathod... dono ke sare gun bhare hai us mai...



first Arjun se hate ka relation & then love ka...


keys scene is tooo cute...


and love the way she called Roshni...


each & every wrd shows different emotion...

Awwwsssmmm OS
Loved it Very much...
Beautifully written...
Loved Captain Spark n Climinal friendship... sooo cute...
Lovely...
Thanks for the PM

di darun darun.
Ki sundor likhecho os ta.annu & arjun r chemisty ta darun.annu arjun r care nicche.abar voy pele arjun r kache gia bosche.
Eto valo likhecho di j besi kichu comment korar jonno bhasha khuje pachina.
Thank u di 4 this mindblowing OS & PM

Awesome update
Loved it
Loved the bonding between Climinal and Captain Spark
Finally Arjun found some peace
just loved it

Awesome
superb
lovely
Annu is so cute [<3]
the way she speaks,its so beautifully written👏
her relationship with Sameer in first part and then with Arjun in the second part
beautifully described
Hope to read more on this one😉

Thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: Angel_Arya

Awesome
superb
lovely
Annu is so cute [<3]
the way she speaks,its so beautifully written👏
her relationship with Sameer in first part and then with Arjun in the second part
beautifully described
Hope to read more on this one😉

Thanks for the pm

oh no again captain spark and climinal!
my little annu ...meri cute devil
subha subha mood kharab karr dia! dress kii saath fighting scene was awesome!
thtn papa dost ne help kii...aur kaam khatam hote hisam ko room se bahar nikal dia! it's only possible by annu!
then arjun's first expession on annu's appearence...hawa nikal gaya tha bechare kii... but the day was awesomely desceibed. that little thing just win over that hardcore man...pulled out the cute little boy reside inside...her first question doubting if arjun has teeth or the way she replaces 'R's with 'L's...was a treat to read.
and then her little promise of finding arjun's home and become his friend...sam indeed returned arjun his best friend i guess.

lovwly piece of writing rimi ... our little heroine is thr best character you ever created.
thanks for this awesome sequel.
and thank for pm.

Both the os were speechless.
Each n every emotions r beatifuly potrayed.
1 loved sam annu bond n their masti.
2 after years arjun found solace with annu.
Loved their nokjhok which turns in frndship.

HI Guys I am back to irritate you all but I am innocent 😳 I only helped my friend . Dear Rimi as promised here is the OS for you & all MWBS 😊 hope you all will like it 😳