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rk2127

@rk2127

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Hey there, sorry don't know your pen name

So your dear friend whose stories I follow religiously shared you story link. And as I read the little synopsis, I had to read the prologue and hence forth follow this story.

Reason is that I was disappointed that after showing the budding romance the best romantic period at payash's wedding between arshi and to top it with Anjali and naniji's conspiracies they just let go such a great part with Shyam's disruption and misunderstanding.

So here I'm following the story.

Chapter one was good, Anjali continued with 'aag me ghee' theory with NK and Khushi in front of Arnav.

Oh, are you talking about the dress Arnav chose for Khushi which Khushi accepted over NK's choice. Well hell IPK never should us that, glad you are going to bring it up.

P.S. I send you a buddy request. Please accept it.

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WanieA

@WanieA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

interesting and funny start...do continue...

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BroknAngel

@BroknAngel

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Nice one. Its gng to be fun..missing those ipk days..phew...

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YellowyHolmes

@YellowyHolmes

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Interesting concept. Looking forward. Please continue writing.👏😊

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Arshisarunfan

@Arshisarunfan

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Chapter 1 was too good clearly indicating how good the rest of the story would be 😃 in fact I have always been fond of ur writing style Aisha! The inherent wit & humour shaping up each line helps us to visualise the fun moments of the scenes so vividly! Arnav's description of Khushi & NK & his comment on Anjali's proposed matchmaking '"Everything is wrong Di! Khushi is crazy, she's a lunatic who stumbles and trips over things and feeds pattals to cow and she... she's freakin crazy and NK! Well it would be like two idiots under one roof"' just cracked me up 😆 🤣 And now it's Khushi's turn to make the scores even after she heard the not-so-flattering compliments from the 'akdu' Laad Governor! And judging by the precap, she's gonna play the right cards this time to show ASR his place 😆 We are already on board to get washed over by sessions of rollicking fun, masti & a subtle battle of wit to wade us through the love tensions of Arshi! Way to go Aisha 👍🏼 Wish u all the best as u start ur journey as a writer in IF! 👏

P.S.: I have read SOL too where u had collaborated with Kiran :D

Edited by Arshisarunfan - 11 years ago

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Vrinda

@vrindagupta

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

wow

amazing story

well nice concept...

even i thought once how would have things gone

if shyam was a positive charachter

loved how anjali got arnav to loose his temper

n he got both khushi n anjali upset

wonder what khushi is planning for arnavbut one thing is sure that it would be fantastic

want to see a jealous arnav of NK

can't wait to read more

update soon

n kiran thanks for the PM

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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

This is the best thing I've yet read.

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a4aarsh

@a4aarsh

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#48

WOW..., thank u 4 this beautiful work,no shyam no other worries,only arshi.they will create problems 4 themselves and they will solve it,i always wanted something like this,nobody in b/w just them and thier love and passion 4 each other...,plz update soon👏