#2 Arshi SS: The Last Place On Earth Ch 11 pg100 7/22 *Completed*

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mahrusweety

@mahrusweety

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Posted: 11 years ago

#711

Marvellous update
super fab ending
u brought Shayam as such an impressive and honest man
loved it
arnav mon was really very cool
loved reading this awesome update

can we have an epilogue 😉
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meghnas

@meghnas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#712

Beautiful story...amazing setting!

All the characters were fabulous

Arnav Khushi were adorable together. ..loved how arnav teased Khushi :) :)

Great collab...hope to read more stories :)

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kajal511

@kajal511

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Posted: 11 years ago

#713

awesome update
loved it
finally arshi r together
thanks for lovely ending

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MeenuCrazyPanda

@MeenuCrazyPanda

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#714

a beautiful story set in a very natural backdrop.. Oh how i loved that Tiger scene.. in dikhala right?

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YaSha0512

@YaSha0512

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#715

Wow that story was brilliant
It completely drew me in
The passion n tension that was oozing between Arnav n khushi felt so strong n real
As for ending it was so touching with Arnav reconnecting with his father whilst refusing to let khushi slip away from him again
His confession to her about why in past he left her with no answer why had reduced me to tears
Was shame Aman died but it was either him or Arnav I guess
Coulent help but smile at Arnavs persistance to not back down in winning back his khushi it was almost like he was challenging himself to woo her back into his life forever
Thanks for pm n plz keep em comin my way

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hydsri

@hydsri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#716

very nice. I read it the first time quickly when you posted it. I wanted to re read slowly before commenting. Looks like Arnav had a close call with the tiger. I am glad arnav's father realised how much Arnav loved his job and how good he was at it. The hug between father and son was really good.
Arnav's mom is also one astute lady. I am sure Arnav and Khushi would have eventually confessed their feelings but it was good to see them get a push from Aruna.

Lovely ending. waiting for more from you.