#2 Arshi SS: The Last Place On Earth Ch 11 pg100 7/22 *Completed*

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Kishmish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Aha ... finally IF has started behaving ...

What a lovely banner Geeta ... off to read ...

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pinkly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Superb chapter Sami. Liked it very much. Looks like Arnav does not trust Aman and Shyam, that is why he is withholding info. Hope Khushi does not mistrust him blurt out this info someone. Conversations about Virgin forest and heartbeats were nice :-).

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mahrusweety

@mahrusweety

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Super awesome chapter SAMI
loved and enjoyed it a lot
the naughtiness of arnav is shown very beautifully
virgins and heartbeat explanation was adorable
end is a mystery
hope khushi is misunderstanding arnav regarding teakwood smuggling
thanks for a wonderfull update

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ranogill

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

brilliant update...i hope khushi do not accuse arnav

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rk2127

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Awesome update.

Starting from title, to virgin forests, to heartbeat, to picnic, to doubting her on self for being harsh on Arnav, to return of familiar anger and finally suspense too.

One update and so many emotions for characters as well as readers to experience. Along with the fear of story completion in just 5 more chapters.

All I wanna say is, I thoroughly enjoyed this update. With a beautiful comparison of waterfall with heartbeat. Could imagine how beautiful that sight could have been and too that Arnav's need for some intimacy with Khushi at such a serene sight.

But than the twist of Arnav acting out of character and hiding things add a doubt to his intention but when Khushi heart is willingly providing all the justification to defend Arnav's action, who am I to raise an eyebrow.

Can't wait for the mystery and suspense of teak wood smugglers and there helpers in staff to revealed.

Also, will Khushi act on her recent doubts of her being harsh and finally give Arnav chance to explain?

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akankha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Really curious to know what happens next. And wonderful update, thank u for the pm Sami. :-)

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chavvi16

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

am sure he wouldnt
not arnav not this
he would never do that
not to his forest
but why did he lie
unless of course there is more to it
and there is more to it
hope she keeps it within herself
it will be best for them all
and with the smugglers among them safer too
well i can just imagine the falls
that would be beautiful view for sure
hmm so they had healthy convo
which for arhi is hard given their past
but glad nothing to awkward
except of course in the end
what is he hiding and why
he is naughty teasing her about virgin forest and all
but that was funny
well there is more to this forest than meet the eye we knew that
but more to arnav too i guess
what a chapter though
cheers for pm

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@addicted25

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Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Sami lovely story. The details of the park are enthralling. Arnav naughty boy teasing the poor girl. Then he talks of heartbeats while he is still holding her.. of course he meant the waterfall, but I'm sure he felt the dhak-dhak as much as she did.

Ladies I'm impressed that your writing is so seemless. Greag going. Thanks for the pm

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nagina

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Posted: 11 years ago

#69

Super update

Loved it

Thanks for pm me

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mpuhan

@mpuhan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#70

i loved the description of a roaring waterfall at Corbett fall and a budding romance among the flora and the faunas😆
I like the mature way with which Arnav decided to deal with Khushi. But alas, the girl is more interested in poking her nose where it doesn't belong. Arnav has his job cut out for him. A forest officer, investigating a case all by himself while handling another lady sherlock holmes all along ... sigh.