#2 Arshi SS: The Last Place On Earth Ch 11 pg100 7/22 *Completed* - Page 28

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Posted: 11 years ago

I never thought Aman being a traitor...but why did Shyam come to Arnav's cottage?? Is he involved too???? Good job done Arnav...Khushi did try playing a little detective but unfortunately she is known to get into trouble...glad that finally, Khushi is ready to talk and sought it out everything between them. And most importantly, our Arnav is out of culprit chart of Khushi. Simply amazing and brilliantly written.

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Posted: 11 years ago
once again that was a very interesting and intriguing update..the update had me completely hooked right from the start to the end...very well written.. Khushi's guilt was understandable and very well portrayed..so Aman is behind all the misdoings...but I somehow feel there is more to it.. maybe more than what meets the eye...anyway I am really glad Khushi's knight in shinning armor Arnav, has come to save Khushi and Joy..now it will be interesting to read about Arnav's plan..and I am eagerly waiting for Arnav and Khushi to talk and clear out their differences...good going..please do continue soon...waiting for the next update eagerly...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hawww...
I just can't believe it...

Aman is the traitor, he is the one who's doing all this...

This update was freaking awesome...
Edited by shipra.aqua - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh so its aaman the culprit...I guess shyam is with him too..its getting interesting now since aman knows that khushi n joy knows about him...
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing update !!! so aman is culprit well khushi most sort person with whom she was very pleased and thinking him of great help.. wow really a great one who hit her and made her unconscious and all tied up.. but what about shyam.. why was he surprise to see khushi.. what was he doing near arnav or khushi's lodge.. is it that both aman-shyam are together.. no.. but what is there which we are missing.. sochne ka padi.. but loved khushi's self talking... agree with her heart when it came upon her she is thinking of talking to arnav and also giving him a chance to talk.. wow that was best.. well here is our hero to rescue his Sherlock girl... still some mysteries are there but would love to see them unfolded by arnav singh raizada.. loved the update... 😃

thanks for pm 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

That was wonderful update...

Seems Arnav has so many secrets that no one know 😉... Glad to know that Kushi wanted to talk with Arnav and tell her side of story on how she didnt trust him...
Why is Shyam and Aman are behind Arnav, and Arnav has pics that contains Aman and him???
By the end of update, Arnav is back to his teasing mood 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow its awesome update...feeling positive after reading it...things seems moving in positive direction now...very nicely written dear...hmmm arnav finally in action :)...and not to forgot i loved the chap name :)...hehe...beautifully written ...awesome update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Anu, the like button is not working!
I'm so sorry I'm so late.
I am sorry for myself, not you!😕
I wanted to be on the first page!

What I'm thrilled about is that Aman is the villian in the tale.
I was sure that you guys will not make Shyam the villian here.
That would be too obvious.
And so I thought it has to be Aman or Joy.
So Shyam is dudh kaa dhula?
He is a good guy. Is he?
One good thing came out of this.
Atleast Khushi decided to talk it out with Arnav.
Now that he has rescued her, waiting to see how they take the investigztion forward.
Sherllock Girl and our own Sherlock Holmes.

You girls have done a commendable job by writing this.
One great read. A thriller and a romance.
Love reading it.
And as always a fan of your writing, Anu!

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update!!! Loved it 👏Omg Aman really I did not see that coming, please continue soon!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
I knew it! Yes yes I did, it was Aman! Wow, what a thrill the last three chapters have been. Extremely sorry for being unable to comment before, was too caught up. And then I read the last three at one go. So a big 👏👏👏 for you amazing guys. Building up a suspense and keeping it going while leaving the reader's mind vacillating between the suspects is a feat the writers of this FF have so successfully achieved. Must admit planting Shyam near Arnav's room in the morning for a moment did waver my suspicions from Aman. But then aha!
Currently I am going insane wondering how did Arnav come to know about the misadventure of Joy and Khushi and how did he end up at the place where they were being held hostage.

Good work, really great work.

Looking forward for the next update.

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