#2 Arshi SS: The Last Place On Earth Ch 11 pg100 7/22 *Completed*

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divya_divs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#231

Lovely story 😛 thnks fr the pm 😃

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Polkadots78

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Posted: 11 years ago

#232

This story is getting interesting...I love the detailed research that has gone into each chapter...youl ladies are bringing alive corbett for us.

one observation though...may be it will make it more cohesive to start connecting some dots..I know you all must have a plot and a plan..just a thought:)

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amita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#233

Awesome update !!!!!!!!!!!!!

Loved first part where Arnav and Khushi had light talk with tea and pakoras

But its not live long and spoiled by Shyam

Khushi thought Arnav is involved on Smuggling How can she ?

She know him very well its nice that she wet to talk to him for clearing her doubt

But her doubt on Arnav's intention hurt him very badly

Arnav is hiding thing but i think its for betterment of all

Lets who is the real culprit and smuggler

Arnav is not going with Khushi for her tour its made her sad i think she cant doubt on him for this also

Very beautiful and well written

Loved the whole story too much

Eagerly waiting for next update

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#234

waiting for the next update eagerly...

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kondhili

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Posted: 11 years ago

#235

Sorry Ana darling i got around to reading the update only now. But i am sure you will be alright with me being so late 😆

Your writing is always like the breath of fresh air...the humor in your updates is always the icing on the cake. Loved the banter between arnav & khushi in the library each giving back to the other in style 😆

I am sure Arnav is the good guy here but currently he is doing a very good job of making himself the suspect number one in khushi's eyes.

Arnav is definitely on to something big and he doesn't want khushi to be caught in the midst of that. Hence he is trying to keep khushi away from all the action zones but in the process digging a deeper grave for himself.

In the end i couldn't help but feel sorry for Arnav...he must have been shattered to know that khushi didn't trust him. But at the same time one can't blame khushi completely, can you?

Great update pretty girl, looking forward to reading the next installment from Anu now...

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Posted: 11 years ago

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bridgeofdreams

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Posted: 11 years ago

#237

Res for the comment!

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I'm glad that Khushi thought over the happenings and put two and two together. Her reflections made her realize how wrong she had been and how deep she had hurt him unintentionally.

Had it not been for Arnav's warning, maybe I would have never doubted Aman.

How To Rescue Your Sherlock Girl I did not see this coming after what happened between Arnav and Khushi last night. He must have thought a lot after the call he made to Khushi when he asked about the file and realized he was being unnecessarily rude and he should not hurt her back. But, Arnav cannot be really blamed for what he said in the call. The file has everything he wanted to prove and all his efforts. By the way, it must be a very lovely book!

Of course, Arnav has a plan after all the silent work and the determination to get his jungle free of every harm. I want to know his plan.

The title is lovely. It's amusing just as Khushi is.

Coming to my favourite line:

Whatever differences they have, it surely can't be bigger than this chance life has again offered to them at happiness at definitely the first and only place on Earth that she could have hoped for. That's a lovely, welcomed change.

Fabulous update 👏

PS: Sorry for unres'ing so late.

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J P

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Posted: 11 years ago

#238

Taken

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Aman?? Like seriously?? But why did the file have ASR's pic in it? Or did it have Aman's a lil confused here!! But I know for sure its Aman who is the culprit so I'm assuming its his picture!!

And lol shyam he's one useless piece here! So I'm going to skip his part!!

And lol that walkie talkie convo poor Khushi!!

And lol twice as hard as the one she got? I don't think so!! Joy was crying?? :D lmao!!

And what's the plan!! Jaldi jaldi!!

Cheers

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anjs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#239

for some reason, i was expecting aman to be the culprit...mayb cause the needle was pointing towards shyam

khushi monologue bt the accusation was very good, gave a good insight into her thoughts, cleared all the questions that i had...

i was anticipating some kind of captivity sequence with a little more drama, but the way u wrote it was just too good n logical, widout the unnecessary dramatic effects...also, me thought that it will be prolonged a bit, n arnav wud probably come to the rescue in the next update...thank god that didnt happen though...

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archmink

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Posted: 11 years ago

#240

Waiting

My six mons old sleeping now I can coment and reread it ...

Omg I'm shocked .. Aman!!!
But how did Arnav found them ?? Or knew what was going on there ?? Gosh one can never know what is going on in this jungle .. There is lots of action happening all around .. And almost everyone is under the scrutiny ...

When I started reading this for the first few chapters I had thought that Khushi might be working under cover from the government to solve the teak wood smuggling mistrey .. I mean the way she was sniffing around it gave me the idea ...

That was a good chapter

Edited by archmink - 11 years ago