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Posted: 11 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: nilusoni

Awesome update
thanx for pm


Thanku so much..!
tc..!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: dershika

Hey dear read all parts in one go u r a very gud writer

But can u plz tell me this ff is on ar or arsh I feel really very bad for shilpa and what will happen when arman and ridz would come to know any his 2 years which he forgot where he was going to get married to shilpa and what will happen when poor shilpa would come to know all abt arman and ridz do continue soon
Plz do tell me know this is a ar ff or arsh


thanku..! but this ff is written by my frnd anika..!! m posting on her behalf..!! and this is an kajen ARff ..!! and if u want ARFF you are only mine is ARsh ff written by her..!! and also i m writing my own fanfic on kash...ARFF a tale of two strangers.,,!! if u like give it a try..!! thanku..!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: sakshiksg

very nice story

already read on blog...
love the way you describe AR and Shilpa's emotions...
but pls tell me...is this an AR or Arsh's ff...because I'm a big AR fan...
can't see them separate...
thanks for pm...

its an ARFF...!!
nd Thanku..!! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: ksgandjsg21

awesome part... I jst loved it... I hope ab kuch galat nai ho ar ke saath... u r superb writer...
Eagerly wating for next part... Continue soon... N do pm me

Thanku..!!
will update soon..!
tc..!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: tv05

awesome part...thnks fr pm...

Thanx...!!
tc..!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
Amazing one dear...!!!

Thanks for the pm... N soory for late coment...!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: little_angle

Amazing one dear...!!!

Thanks for the pm... N soory for late coment...!!!


Thanku so much..:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
AWesome update!!
I just hope it all remains fine now!!
*fingers crossed*😛
Update soon!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: radhikakapoor

AWesome update!!
I just hope it all remains fine now!!
*fingers crossed*😛
Update soon!!

thanku ...!!
tc..!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70

PART 10

(riddhima Ko 1 ghante baad hosh aata hai...doctor use dekhte hai..aur kehte..)
Doctor- aap thik hai na...
Riddhima- mm..ha..me thik hu..me..
Doctor- aap behosh ho gyi thi to ek ladka..shyad aapka husband hai...vo aapko yha liyaya...hai..
Riddhima- husband...??.kya me ab jaa sakti hu doctor...
Doctor- ha..par...ek baat puchni thi aapse..kya aapko pta tha ki aap pregnant hai..?
Riddhima- ha doctor mujhe pta tha...par aap kyu puch rhe.hai..mujhse. Kya hua..mera baccha thik hai..na?
Doctor- I am sorry...par aapka miscarriage ho gya hai...is halat me aapko apna pura dhyaan rakhna chahiye tha...par lagta hai..apne boht laparwaahi ki hai..apke zyada stress lene ki wajah se hi aap behosh huyi..aur isi wajha se aapka baccha..bhi...
Riddhima- Yeh aap kya.keh rhe hai..doctor..nhi aisa nhi ho sakta hai...mera baccha..(riddhima rone lagti hai...)mera baccha nhi mar sakta hai..doctor..nhiii..
Doctor- dekhiye me aapki halat samjh sakta hu...par smabhaliye apne aapko..abhi aapki body boht bade padaav se guzri hai..apne aapko itna stress mat dijiye...
(yeh kehkar dr vha se chale jaate hai...aur bahar unhe armaan milta hai..armaan ghabraya hua..doctor se puchta hai...)
Armaan- doctor..riddhima..kaisi hai vo...
Doctor- dekhiye..vo thik hai..but I am sorry hum aapke bacche ko nhi bacha. ..paye...unhone is.condition me kuch zyada hi stress le liya tha...is wajah se unka miscarriage ho gya tha...(yeh kehkar doctor chale jaate hai..par armaan vhi.shock me kahda reh.jaata hai..aur khud se kehta hai)
Armaan- misscarriage..?? Iska matlab hai riddhima pregnant thi...mera baccha riddhima ke pet me pal.rha.tha...mujhe riddhima se baat karni hogi..vo to kuch jaanti bhi nhi hai...
(armaan riddhima ke ward ki taraf jaata hai...gate kholta.hai..aur dekhta hai..riddhima bed par ek lifeless body ki tarah leti hai..uski eyes open hoti hai..par unme se aansoo beh rhe hote hai..armaan riddhima ki.taraf badhta hai..aur uske bed ke paas pohchkar uska naam pukarta hai..)
Armaan- riddhima...
(apna naam sunkar riddhima upar dekhti hai..aur armaan ko dekhkar use...armaan ki saari bate yaad aa jaati hai...vo uthti hai..aur apne haatho se glucose syringe nikalakar...ward se bahar.jaane lagti hai...par armaan confuse hokar..uska haath piche se pakad leta.hai..)
Armaan- riddhima..yeh kya kar rahi ho tum...abhi kuch.der pehle..tumne apna...(par vo kehte kehte ruk jaata hai...armaan ko puri baat na kehte huye sunkar riddhima rote rote sarcastic way me hasti.hai...aur armaan se haath chudaakar.uski.taraf mudkar kehti.hai..)
Riddhima- kya hua armaan...kyu ruk gaye...kho na..abhi kuch.der pehle..mene apna baccha khoya hai..
Armaan(yeh.sunkar surprise ho jaata hai..ki riddhima sab jaanti hai..)- tum jaanti thi ki tum pregnant ho..tumne mujhe btaya kyu nhi..?
Riddhima- tumhe btati armaan.. Mujhe to khud aaj pta chala.. Ki me pregnant hu..aur tumhe pta hai.yeh sunkar mujhe hasee ayi thi...kyuki mujhe pta tha...ki mene kabhi kisi ke saath vo.sb nhi kiya.hai... phir yeh kaise ho sakta.hai...isi confusion ko door karne me nikki ke paas jaa rahi thi...ki raaste me maine..tumhari aur.abhi ki.baate.sunli..varna mujhe to pta.hi nhi.chalta ki mujhhe to koi apne bistar par pehle hi use kar chuka hai...dekhona meri kismat..armaan mujhe aaj apne bacche ke baare me pta chala..aur aaj hi mene use kho.bhi.diya...
Armaan(yeh.sunkar boht shock.ho jaata.hai..)- tumhe.sab pta chal gya..par riddhima meri baat suno..vo sab..
Riddhima- tumhe bilkul afsos nhi hai na..armaan..abhi bhi..abhi bhi.tum safaai.de rhe.ho.?..mene boht log dekhe hai..kuch acche dekhe kuch bure dekhe... Par tumhare jaisa gira hua insaan mene aajtak nhi dekha.hai...tumne mera sab kuch cheen liya armaan...mera sab kuch cheen liya hai..tumne .sab kuch ..meri.izzat mera aatmsamman yha tak ki mera baccha bhi...kyu kiya armaan tumne aisa.. Sirf ek challenege ke kiye..sirf.ek challenge..ke liye..tumne..mujhe...chi..armaan..aaj pta hai..mujhe.kaisa feel ho rha.hai...today I am feeling like I am a prostitute...
(yeh word.sunkar hi armaam riddhima ke gaal par zor.se thappad marta hai..aur uski taraf ungli karkar usse gusse me kehta hai..)
Armaan- phir kabhi...kabhi yeh word apne liye use mat karna samjhi...
(riddhima apne gaal par haath rakhte huye...armaan ko shock ho kar dekhti hai...aur kehti.hai)
Riddhima- bas isi ki kami thi armaan..acha hua tumne mujhe apne saare roop aaj hi ek din me dikha diye..varna me..me to tumhe boht galat samajh bethi thi..me to tumse.pyaar hi kar bethi thi...par kal tak me jitna tumse pyaar karti thi na..aaj usse kahi zyada nafrat karti hu...suna tumne..i hate you...
(yeh kehkar riddhima jaane ke liye mud jaati hai par armaan ki awaaz sunkar vo ruk jaati hai..)
Armaan(hurt face se)- please riddhima.mujhse nafrat mat.karo..
(riddhima piche bina mude.huye hi kehti.hai)
Riddhima- ha.. Armaan me tumse nafrat kyu karu..? .TUM TO MERI NAFRAT BHI DESERVE NHI KARTE HO...
(yeh kehkar riddhima vha se chali.jaati.hai...hurt armaan ko vhi chodkar...armaan vhi zameen par ghutno me bethkar rota hai..aur kehta hai..)
Armaan- riddhima...i love you riddhima...mujhse itni nafrat mat karo...nhi sehen kar paunga tumhari nafrat...yeh kya.kar diya hai mene...mera..hamara baccha..is duniya me aane se pehle.hi.chala gya..aur me kuch nhi.kar saka..us ek raat ne sab kuch badal diya...par.usi raat ne mujhe ehsaas kraya hai..riddhima ki armaan riddhima ke.bina adhoora hai..mujhse door mat ho riddhima...me.mar jaunga...me.mar jaunga...

IN MUMBAI

(shilpa locker room me armaan ki photo ko dekh.rhi hoti hai..ki uska phone ring hota hai..shilpa.phone uthati hai..aur puchti hai..)
Shilpa- kya.hua kuch.pta chala?
Man- ha madam...jha accident hua tha na...vha se kuch.door par.hume kuch.samaan mila hai...aap agar kal aakar dekhle..hume shaq hai ki vo armaan ka hi hai..
Shilpa(khush.hote huye..)- ha me...kal aa jaungi..me zarur aungi...(shilpa phone rakh.deti.hai..aur smile karte.huye.armaan ke photo.se kehti hai..)armaan me tumhare ek kadam aur paas aa gyi hu...ab bas..TUM KADAM PICHE MAT LELENA...


Thanku readers..!!

hope u all enjoy the part..!!

& sorry for delay..!!

plz do hit like button and plz do comment..!! 😊😊

tc..!! love u all..<3

Nikita..<3

written by anika..:)

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