Updated! *FF:The plot thickens*(Vidarth/Sandhir)*Ch 27 pg 59 (10 July)

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whinyteen96

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Awww...Thanks (once again) for the dedication! 🤗

Arey! What did I do? Just read it before everyone else...😉

What else? You already know that this update was just fab! 😆

Love ya!

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Pihu1596

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Wow!!!!!! OMG!!!!
VIDHARTH!!!!!
I m still pinching myself.
The entire thing was simply mind blowing.
I m a hardcore Randhirian/Sandhirian bt I always thought VIDHARTH had G8 potential. Its good to read smthing so amazing n gripping.
U penned down everything perfectly,I read all 4 chps in 1 go n I m yearning 4 more.so... plzzz UPDATE SOONISH:)
I cnt wait*puppy eyes*

P.S. plzzz send me PM if u cn n I m also sending u a buddy request:)

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Madhusmita das

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

VidArth is so hot here...they are amazing. n sandhir..they are beyond words. ❤️

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Hafsa94

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

You rock! Seriously. I really get so interested in ur writing. Keep at it, update soon. :-)

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Unknown

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Heylos!

I love this fic! The way you have portrayed Vidhushi's redemption and inner guilt is just awe-worthy!

I love the way this fic is shaping up!

Conti sooon!

Pari

PS: Please do send me a scrap or a PM when you update😃

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Kri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

WOAH! THIS VIDARTH FF/SS IS AMAZING.👏👏👏... I DON'T THINK YOU UNDERSTAND THE LEVEL OF AMAZING-NESS THAT IS LOADED HERE? 😃YOU'RE GOING TO UPDATE DAILY?! WHATTT! THIS GIVES ME ANOTHER REASON TO REJOICE!😆😃😳

ASHDI! (You're older than me! so I'll call you that from now on)... wwowoowowoww! 👏 you're an amazing writer! and the fact you're doing a ff/ss over vidarth makes me love ya 100 times more.🤗... that's saying a lot because I'm a hardcore sandhirian... hehehe😆😆

coming to the chapters...
WOW! The intensity between parth and vidushi is just brilliant. And I love how Sandhir are going to fake engagement! ...

Vidarth is literally my fav in this ff.. It's just amazing! I can't wait for more yaar! PLease update fast and when you do PM ME! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! PM ME (or scrap me if you need to...)

I loved it. So captivating! Congrats on making everyone fall in love with it! 👏🤗

Love, Kri :) 🤗

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Manu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Hey

The update was superb !! 👏

Sandhir were awesome like always !! But the refreshing part of your FF is VidArth which is too good !!

Eagerly waiting for the next one !!😃

Please PM me when you update !!

Much love

Mansi

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Ashlesha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Hey guys! Thanks for all your amazing comments. I was at my keyboard like a mad thing. There will be a double update as I will unable to post tommorow. Ch6 will be up today itself. Don't hate me for this.

Vidushi was frozen to the chair. Parth's words had turned her into a living statue. Speechless and non motile.

"Here's the deal. Be my girlfriend till we leave FITE and I will not tell a soul about your dirty little secret. But if I find out that you are trying to be over-smart, you'll be out of here, get it?" Parth's tone was so cold and clinical that she shuddered, blinking nervously. The full meaning of his words finally sank in and she knew she was completely and utterly defeated

"Why...why are you doing this? I promise I won't do anything..." Vidushi pleaded him to reconsider his decision.

"Because, stupid girl, it's going to be useful to me. I get to keep an eye on you without anyone becoming suspicious and everyone keeps their nose out of my life and my past. And as for you, you get to stay in FITE and be Parth Kashyap's girlfriend. Isn't that what you wanted for so long?" Parth's husky voice, this bad ass attitude was making her blush madly.

Yes, she had wanted Parth to ask her out, call her his girlfriend. But not like this. Not like this.

She shook her head. " No. I don't want this. I'll do anything but this."

"Pack your bags then." Parth ordered coldly and he pulled her up from the chair.

"No..no." Vidushi clutched at his collar.

"Do you agree then?" Parth smirked.

"What are the rules?" Vidushi sighed, knowing she was well and truly beaten.

"Don't ever let anyone know this is a compromise between us. Don't ever lie to me or attempt to embarrass me. Don't poke your nose in anyone's life . Don't cheat on me and never let anyone even suspect that we are not in love. Get it?" Parth pulled her hand off his collar and held it tightly.

Vidushi nodded, out of words.

"So, if anyone asks the story is that you were upset and I saw you crying. We talked and I asked you out. Everyone knows you had a crush on me so they'll never doubt why you said yes. " Parth pushed her hair back in a typical boyfriend move.

Vidushi flinched.

He gave her a glare."Get used to this. It's going to be like this for two and a half years unless you decide you are done with FITE."

Vidushi nodded. There was nothing else she could do right now.

"Go wash your face." Parth ordered, letting go of her hand.

She nodded and pulled her bag out from under the table. She wanted to get out of his sight more than she had ever wanted anything.

He grabbed her just before she went out of the door and whispered "Don't wear any of the eye make up shit again. It makes you look like a chudail." Parth let go of her and walked out, leaving behind his scared so called girlfriend.

Sanyukta was hiding her face behind Randhir's back. It was part fear and part stubbornness to hide her fear from Randhir that motivated her to do something like this.

She cursed herself for letting him talk her into the hell she was facing. Sitting behind Randhir Singh Shekhawat on a bike was something other girls would kill for. But Sanyukta? Oh,no..Sanyukta Agarwal wanted to kill Randhir for subjecting her to this...beast. Randhir was driving like a maniac. Sanyukta liked a bit of speed, yes. But she did not like to be on a life threatening ride like this.

"Slow down" She hissed.

She didn't hear a reply but he did slow down a tiny bit.

After about an eternity of hiding her face in Randhir's shirt, Sanyukta exhaled in relief. They were finally there.

The board above them read ## Jewelers.

Randhir took Sanyu's hand in his own and both of them gave each other a look of pure understanding.

"Ready to take off that Idiot's ring?" Randhir asked, already knowing her answer.

Sanyukta gave him an impish look that said everything.

They both walked into the shop, hand in hand, ready for step one of their plan.

Edited by Burn_the_Ashes - 10 years ago

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Anmol

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Posted: 11 years ago

#59

Chapter 6
It took the shop assistant about five minutes to take the accursed ring of Sanyukta's finger.

Sanyukta immediately felt like a huge weight had been taken off her shoulder. She quickly thanked God for small mercies,not noticing that the assistant handed the ring to Randhir and Randhir quietly pocketed it. The assistant then proceeded to talk bout the shop's new wedding collection . Randhir nodded his head and the assistant rushed off to show 'Sir and Madam' the new exclusive rings.

"Randhir! Why do we need to get exclusive rings? Simple ones will do." Sanyukta whispered softly.

"If we want our families to believe us then we can't compromise on this kind of stuff" Randhir explained.

"Still! These things are expensive!" Sanyukta took a last shot at persuading him.

Randhir only shook his head "I can't put a cheap thing on a priceless person can I?"

"Wow, was that you being cheesy?"Sanyukta giggled

"Hey! Cheesy is nice. Like a pizza!" Randhir's tone was playful.

Sanyukta groaned ."Great. Make me feel even more hungry will you?"

"You want pizza? We can get some after we select the rings" Randhir offered.

Sanyukta gave Randhir a cute smile" Really?"

"Yep. After all, I need to fulfill my stomach's needs too!" Randhir's words made Sanyukta smile even wider.

The Shop Assistant cleared his throat. He held trays and trays of rings. Expensive and shiny cages.

Sanyukta mentally prepared her self for torture.

But she'd bear it. After all, they would be having pizza next.

Randhir watched her eyes sparkle. It was not the reflection of the priceless pieces of gold and silver, but the anticipation of freedom in her eyes.

He knew it because he wanted the same thing. Freedom to run his own life.

"What about this one?" Sanyukta showed him a simple platinum and diamond ring, subtle but rich. Beautiful.

"Do you like it?" Randhir asked

Sanyukta nodded.

"Good, then pick one for me and let's get the hell out of here" Randhir whispered discreetly in her ear.

Sanyukta smiled at his childishness.

She asked the shop assistant to pack the ring she had selected as well as a platinum ring for Randhir.

They waited impatiently for the bill to be handed to them and finally walked out of the store, the rings flashing proudly on their fingers.

"Where to now?" Sanyukta asked with a gleam in her eyes.

"To celebrate my dear, to celebrate." Randhir winked at her.

Both of them began to laugh like crazy people.

"College first? I want to get my phone" Randhir declared.

Sanyukta nodded. "I want Augustus to hear the news from me."

"You are going to tell her about our plan" Randhir stated, looking a bit annoyed.

"Maybe I should? She can help." Sanyukta shrugged.

"I think it's better if less people know the truth." Randhir shook his head.

"Fine. If we want to fool our families me need practice anyway." Sanyukta sighed.

They made their way to college, leaving like they had arrived, Randhir driving like a maniac and Sanyuka begging him to slow down...

...

Vidushi wanted to scream. She wanted to grab him and punch him till he took back all his words. Chudail?? How dare he call her that?

"Kya samajhta hai apne aap ko? I'm not going to be that girl who keeps her head down and does whatever he tells her to do. No thanks!" Vidushi rushed to the washroom and took a look at her face.

Oh my god.

She took back the anger at Parth for calling her a Chudail. Because, frankly speaking, she did not look okay at all. The dark smudges made her look like a raccoon. She fished out her make up remover from her bag and shaking her head, got to work.

The cold water on her face made her calm down and think about everything that had happened.

Parth. The guy she had been so desperately crushing on had forced her to become his girlfriend. She was Parth Kashyup's girlfriend. But only for the eyes of the world. Vidushi knew he saw her as nothing more than a troublesome burden. She wiped her face with her napkin and sighed. Her face looked so different without the layers of makeup.

'Fresh Faced Fool. They will rip you to shreds. Go on, smile!' she heard it's snide voice in her ear again.

She shook her head and hid under the shadow of foundation and eye make up just like she always did.

...

Parth was thinking of how he was going to break the news of Vidushi and him dating. It was going to be tough. He had occasionally said a lot of disapproving words about Vidushi to Sanyu and he knew Sanyu was the person most likely to catch him a lie.

He finally decided that since he hadn't thought it through he would call Vidushi up and ask her to meet him. She was an excellent manipulator and she could definitely come up with some sort of plan. He picked up his cell and looked for her in his contact list. Luckily, he was the captain of the dream team and that meant he had the contact numbers of all the members. He pressed call and waited for her to pick up.

...

Parth(heart) calling.

Vidushi blinked in disbelief.

The call ended and within seconds, he was calling her again.

'Pick it up Vidushi, before he gets pissed off and calls off the deal'

She answered the call with trembling hands.

"Hell...o?" unfortunately her voice trembled too.

"Cut the crap. Meet me in the lab. If you are not there in 5 minutes you can go pack your bags" Parth sounded pissed. Vidushi struggled to answer but the call ended with a click of a button from Parth's side.

She walked briskly, wanting to curl up somewhere and have a good cry. But more than that she wanted to kick him for using her like this. She composed herself and before pushing open the lab door.

He sat in one of the chairs at the very end of the room. Looking right at her. His glare intensified as she walked closer. She stopped when she was two chairs away from him, wanting her personal space. He, on the other had, was busing giving her a critical look, noticing what she was wearing. A long white skirt and a black sleeveless top. Not bad. His eyes stopped at her face. She was wearing that makeup again. He got out of his chair and pulled her to him, pushing her against the table and caging her in.

"Get away from me!" her voice was a breathy tone.

And it was then that Parth realized how close they were. Only a few inches separated them, he could remove them if he wanted to, she wasn't really going to complain. After all, she liked him, didn't she?

"Parth... let me go!" Vidushi pushed him back, making him pull her with him.

"Parth!" She pushed at him again, this time making a noise like an angry kitten.

He couldn't stop the smile from spreading on his face.

"Aww...is little Vidu going to stop me from doing what I want?" his teasing tone accomplished something none of them had envisioned happening.

Vidushi slapped him.

It made a sick sound to her own ears. She was trembling but somehow she managed to get her words out. Without faltering "Don't call me Vidu" The glare she gave him rivaled all of the disdainful words

His arms went around her, pulling her as close as possible. She gave a squeal of shock when he picked her up and placed her on the table. Legs dangling and so close to him, she felt scared. Her eyes yearned to close, to take a preparatory precaution for the slap she knew would come.

Instead, Parth leaned over her, his eyes a dark inferno, something she couldn't fathom etched in their depths.

" Let me go" She finally managed to whisper, tearing her eyes from his.

" No." Parth's reply only frustrated her further and she let out a sigh "What do you want from me?"

Parth moved away from her, his eyes suddenly filled with confusion."I don't know" He mumbled, leaving her sitting on one of the lab tables.

"Wait! Get me off this thing" Vidushi yelled.

"I told you to get that eye makeup off. You are still wearing it." Parth smiled at her before he walked out of the door.

"Hey, comeback here, how am I supposed to get off this thing?" She yelled again.

"Jump." Parth shrugged and started to walk towards the door again.

"I.. can't." her face had gone white and he could see she was breathing heavily.

"Why not?" Parth chuckled.

"I'm...I'm scared" Vidushi finally admitted, shame blazing on her face.

Parth walked over to her and got her off the table. The moment her feet touched the ground she pushed him away and ran.

She didn't care that he followed her, she didn't care about him at all. Why should she? He was a harsh dominating dictator. Not the guy she thought she was in love with.

'So this is how it feels when your heart gets broken for the first time' the thought was as blinding as the tears that blinded her vision.

Edited by Honey-FLAB - 11 years ago

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Ayesha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#60

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So madam aapko mera pura review chahiye..??

So bear with it now...

I just loved it would be an understatement...

The way you write is way tooo good...

Moi loves it to the core...

You know what I seriously hated Parth for his rude behaviour par I know that's the crux of their relationship...he asking her be my gf?? 😲 OMFG...!!!!

Phir she slapping him and vo kuch nahi bola?? 😲

Then Sandhir scenes ki toh baat hi nahi karti Mein,..they are sooo adorable...*dreamy xpression*

RD is sooo sweet...and so are the couples in ur ff...

U no a secret...?? I'll tell u ...I actually like vidarth very much in this ff...

I love this ff more than u n u no that...🤣

Par then without u this ff will be incomplete...

I won't tell update ASAP...🤣
(I already read further chapters) coz ur my personal ff writer...🤣

Ab itna review bas hai ya aur bhi bada wala chahiye??

Lemme tell u one thing..
Greedy Dog Lost The Bone...🤣

Love
Ayeshu...

Edited by Craziness123 - 11 years ago