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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey devi maiyya, msg milte hi tapak gayi. Res.
Unres.

I really love the way you describe a character's introspection. The window to their soul. I wonder what both Khushi and Arnav have still kept away from each other, apparently something to do with the prologue... but I have all the patience to wait and see how it all unfolds. And knowing that it's you, I am sure it's gonna be fantastic.

And once again, albeit the entire update was brilliant, but the inner turmoils and the irony that they still are happy for their love ones amidst this turmoil was brought out so well.

A special mention for Anya and her monologue about her mother. Her dilemma, it was so poignant.
Edited by cineraria - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsome...
beautifully written...
i loved the convo between ana and aman... and khushi's thought process was potrayed very well...trust is an essential factor...hope arnav gain's khushi's trust soon...
they both are not revealing one truth...and wat is it?????waiting for nxt updte...
thks for the pm dr...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Love and trust! Two words that form the foundation of any relationship. Perhaps the only two words that have the ability to sustain any relationship! You take any one out and the relationship will falter! N that has been the case with arnav n khushi! Love was never the problem here! In fact arnav's loved her too much, so much so that this love only made him let her go, for her own good! N khushi loved him so much that even after five years her love for him hasnt changed or diminished a bit! As for trust, i dont think either had any on each other! Neither arnav trusted khushi five years back with his sorrow, n khushi well she has legitimate reason to mistrust him! In fact i absolutely loved her line' i can trust him with my life but not with my line'!!!! Sort of summed it all! So in the end their problem has been ' abundance of love but lack of trust'!!! So i think khushi needs to work on the love part while arnav can on the trust part!!! Lets see where it takes both of them from here! Given that both have finally accepted their feelings to themselves and things are lot clearer than they were earlier!!!
Oh by the way you gave khushi the ultimate setting and surroundings for her 'introspection'!!! However i felt the place , the beautiful serene sea, the sand, the peace, calmness , all these are more conducive to make a person forget his tensions and just enjoy the moment, feel the nature! Seek that ultimate solace!!
N then like a demi god arnav emerges out of sea!!! I have been visually replaying this image since i have read the chapter!!! Bliss!!!
N yes i loved how khushi held her own n didnt give in to arnav's demands/ requests whatever u call it to talk to him!! Yes do it khushi when u feel like it and not when he asks for it! N dont feel bad about giving him pain, He is used to it! Rather feeds on it. But i really wonder what is it that he wants to tell her now? What piece of info has he withheld from her??? Really curious!!

As for aman and anya , the real hero n heroine of this chapter, i would say god bless these two! They have been really lucky to get each other as life partners! N after this chapter my respect for aman has increased even more! I guess he is the most stable of the three men here!!! He really knows how to say right things at the right time!! Really liked how he supported her all along!!
N this part has also made me suspicious! Is it possible that anya is not ahalya's daughter? Given how she said she dont find any similarity with ahalya? Or it was just an observation and nothing of consequence? One thing also caught my attention! Its strange how these friends have been shortchanged in one department or the other. If ana and pal got the love of their lived they were deprived of the parents' love! Khushi who was blessed with parents' love had to struggle all her life to get Arnav's love!
What to say! Life is seldom fair!!
Lovely chapter sandhya!!! Lot of thinking, introspection, realisations happened here!!!
Waiting for the next part!!
Edited by Nandz - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesum update loved it i really want asr woo his khushi soon but whn i think bout prolounge i cant understand does he deserve it to be with khushi again m really confuse n eagerly waiting whn u will put prolounge on cht n on wat way for now m feeling helpless for khushi she is having tough time btwn her heart n mind
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Posted: 11 years ago
Read it and looved it, Sandy. I'll comment soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautifully well written & wonderful chapter..love it👏 ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow...i'm a big fan of our great indian weddings...n this update made me experience one such with d way u describd d while setting n d background...anya n d beautiful flashback der was heartwarming...love aman..actually i love all of dem..hehehe..awesome update dear...thanks.
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Posted: 11 years ago
It was another beautiful chapter and Sandhya you know it😉
But what made me curious is what Khushi is hiding?
Has she broken her engagement? Then I am already with my champagne bottle to celebrate and say Cheers! with everyone here, because I know all will be ecstatic as me.
And Arnav babua whatever you did you did and you cannot change it but please work hard and don't let her go this time.
Please update soon because somehow this romantic tale feeling little mysterious to me. 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
it was one very beautiful update sandhya and i loved the wedding atmosphere and the added romance on the side. well the romance is almost lying in the background for arnav and khushi but it can be denied that when these two are together or just by being in the same room, the atmosphere is sizzling with tension! n i loved the update mostly because looks like nandu has not made it yet to the wedding. now im hoping that he doesnt make his grand and very unwelcomed entry at the wrong time!

arnav telling khushi wat he felt all these years ago and y he had to let her go against his will( well technically it was breaking his heart as well) may have lifted a stone from khushi's heart knowing that he did loved her and cared for her at some point but i dont think its enough for her to give her love for him another go. she needs time to assimilate all this and to be able to trust him with her heart again. like they say once bitten twice shy!

i loved arnav determination in not allowing her to commit one of the biggest mistake of her life! thank goodness arnav is not letting go of her without hell of a fight! nothing is lost when there is still hope!

wats the truth anya and khushi has been talking about!! is is about the baby?? i have a feeling that it must be and thats wat khushi has to tell him! now even arnav is confusing me! wats with his ultimate truth!!

im sure anya must be looking like a regal princess and a very gorgeous bride and she is lucky to tying the knot with the one who loves her more than anything and to be having the blessings of her loved ones on her special day! n aman is right, none of the raizada siblings are like their father, they have rose above all that and they are amazing human beings. n im pretty sure that anya will be an awesome mum in the future!

splendid update and it was all the love, emotions and drama i was expecting from this one update. u totally nailed it! now im super excited for that conversation between arnav and khushi!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update!!!!! What does Arnav want to tell Khushi??? And what did Anna ask Khushi to tell Arnav??!! Omg I can't wait for the next update already! 😊 😊

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