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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#101

That was an amazing update, Manreet... Loved the insight u gave... And Im personally happy abt Kokila Devi wanting her girls to be treated well..Now that u have mentioned Im gonna picturize Aruna Irani too.. Felt bad for Anjali and her fate...And then ArHi.. They were sweet... Arnav wanting to be in her arms, seeking solace... Just something I expected from Arnav. . He is already feeling protective towards Khushi...Lets see what destiny has in store for them...

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ArhiMaria

@ArhiMaria

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#102

Your writing is beautiful Manreet! This update made me very sad! I am feeling sorry for all the women who are dragged to this life. Khushi had to live with the fact that she has been sold and she is expected to please men as and when they required. :( Devi makes sure her grils are not abused but at the end of the day innocent girls are still being forced into intercourse just to please men.

Arnav was considerate but I still found myself feeling sad for Khushi because of the way her first night happened without arnav knowing of just how innocent Khushi is and how she was forced into doing what she is doing.

Thank you for the PM!

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KrishVeer

@KrishVeer

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#103

Another amazingly beautiful chapter by you which left me speechless. I don't know what it is, but I'm enchanted at the moment by your writing. It was really beautiful❤️

I must say Anjali and Kokila Devi has won my heart by now. Anjali, I did expect her to be a nice person, but I didn't think that Kokila would be this nice. So I'm still surprised that she actually made Khushi feel better through her words, although her full intention may not have been that. Also loved the fact that Kokila Devi treats her girls well, and also that she makes sure that her girls are well respected😊

Anjali was sold by her husband! I swear if I was Anjali, I would have showed her husband his rightful place one day. Disgusting man😡

Coming to Arnav and Khushi, I saw them as two kids who were trying hard to make each other comfortable on their first day at kindergarten. Their innocence was as such, that it's the purest form which we see in a child. Loved the way Arnav opened up to Khushi to make her feel less nervous. And I already knew that he would not make use of Khushi on the first night. See, now that's whom you called a gentleman in true sense. Khushi's shyness and nervousness was well narrated, and the best part was when she felt how perfectly their hands with a stark colour difference fitted perfectly together😳

Thanks for sharing such an amazingly enchanting update🤗

Eagerly waiting for the next chapter

Update soon😉

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Penny

@penny25

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#104

dis is di...in response to u're reply...

if u're planning to introduce me to dese real realities of life...m all up for it...:)
wanna read u're stories...so i get an insight to such minds..so dat i dont make d mistake of judging dem...

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Afsha Ismail

@Chamkili06

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#105

I lovvveddd ittt
Like totallly
Im sooo happpy arnav ws a gentlemen nd respctd her..im sute hes gonna ask deviji to hv khushi for himself hamesha ke liye

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zayana khan

@zayana123

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#106

I really like this concept... M eager 2 read how you gonna continue in your style of writing... I really love the start...

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palaayan

@palaayan

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#107

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kondhili

@kondhili

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#108

Oh i can see that you are going to update chapter 3 soon...😃

My thoughts on Chapter 2 :

Arnav seems to be completely captivated by khushi. Surely its not love as of now...but very soon love will blossom in the tender hearts of not just khushi but Arnav too.

And then is when the real drama will begin. I hope Arnav is man enough and strong enough to withstand that storm.

Kokila's 'There is no escape' does ignite a fear in my heart but given the way she treats her girls i am hoping that Arnav and khushi's love might touch her heart too.

Loved the update, manreet...you are doing a good job of narrating this tale.

P.S: Are u sending pms for this SS??

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Afsha Ismail

@Chamkili06

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#109

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woaaah..i'm left a little confused..more like shockd..Khushi exposed to all this at such a tender age..and its been three months since Arnavs been with Khushi..but just physically? i wish there was more than jst this kind of "pleasure" !

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Aisha

@Aisha1996

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#110

Awesome update 👏👏
Loved it 😛
Poor payal feeling so bad for her, how can her mother do this to her for just money 😭
Lavanya which is showing that she is enjoying this life so much will Also have some terrible reason why she live in khotta

Eagerly waiting to read next part :)

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