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Afsha Ismail

@Chamkili06

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#141

Unres :)
Ahh welcome Bk :D

And coming to the update..Lavanyaa..ah i already love her characterr :D thank god..she told himm..treasure her..i relli hope he does treasure Khushi..and think abt THEM..of her..nt jst for his needs..bt for his heart :)

Edited by Afsha29 - 11 years ago

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sfghfj

@sfghfj

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#142

awesome update. pls continue soon

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anu1017

@anu1017

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#143

Awesome update as usual M!!! Wow Arnav is totally irrevocably in love with Khushi!!!

It will be interesting to see how Arnav will convince his parents for both England and Khushi as he cannot keep on seeing her in the haveli.

I am so happy you are back to updating as I was missing my favorite story lol!!!

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Urvi.96

@Urvi.96

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#144

Yayyy, finally an update!!!

Loved the chapter but would still love to see some more verbal communication between Arshi. Interested to read about Lavanya's background story as well. What she said to Arnav about Khushi is so true! Hope he realizes the importance of his Pari before it's too late!

Edited by Urvi.S - 11 years ago

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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#145

This appears to be beautifully crafted story and while I do feel compelled to leave you more then few words, I am not sure what to say.

You've captured the turmoils and the happenings of a sex industry really well and without insulting the women are part of the industry. Thank you for that.

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#146

Nice update Manreet... Arnav is not in favor of continuing his fathers business.. He has seen a better life abroad and wants to settle there..But if he leaves, he will have to leave Khushi behind.. Lavanya is a mystery.. She wants Khushi to go away from the haveli and have a good life with Arnav from the looks of it...

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Parvathi Devi

@honey-sweety

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#147

That was wonderful update...

I some what feel sad for Arnav but i feel sad for Arnav's dad also.. every parents want to spend their time with their son...

Yeyyy.. i knew it i knew it, Lavanya wants to show outsiders ki she is rough and tough girl.. but she is soft and kind hearted girl if i am not wrong...

Loved the way Kushi taking care of Arnav, when he is desperate state... Loved their bonding and understand level...

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gmsk

@gmsk

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#148

Fantabulous update it was..

Totally a delight to read..

I love the way you have shaped up lavanya's character as well..

I'll be commenting on this thread only..

I feel more comfortable on IF..

Lookng forward to read more

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rvas

@rvas

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#149

read all four parts in one go...it's a beautifully written story and each individual character you have introduced so far is so intriguing and there is promise of so much more to come...loved it