Finally caught up with this story. I read it all in one go and I'm so impressed with you!
Here's my thoughts:
Prologue:
~Manreet you left me in awe of your writing skills,you not only perfect in sweet romance but in such an intense story as well I applaud u!
~Shaym that pathetic excuse of a human,its so sad to see what he has done to Khushi just weeks after her parents death.
~Arnav the elite that's running away from his own problems to hopefully find solace in Khushi's arms.
~Aman calling Arnav babu was cute.
Chapter 1:
~It was disgusting the manner in which Shaym thought of his own niece,there's some sick people out there maybe Anjali is right Khushi could have seen worst thankfully she ended up in deviji haveli.
~Eager to read about Khushi's experience in those 3 months!
~One look and Arnav was enchanted,looking forward to see how they story progress.
~Its really sad that such situations are a reality and a much harsher reality!
~I hope Khushi found a mother and sister in devi and anjali and I'm sure they have they own horrid stories to tell.
Chapter2:
~Omg Anjali's own husband sold her because she could not mother children that's heartbreaking!
~I like Devi's character she has a mothers warmth to her but at the same time there's no pretenses and false hope.
~Khushi has given herself to Arnav, and her young heart is definitely affected by her Arnav babu.
Chapter 3:
~Payal's story is definitely a reality we experience even in today's times..
~I am intrigued by Lavanya...
~Well I'm glad Arnav requested Khushi for himself only not every1 is as fortunate.
Chapter 4:
~I don't think Arnav has thought about his and his Pari's relationship passed finding solace in her. He doesn't realize that once his gone they will be no pari or maybe he thinks he won't need a Pari because all his problems will be solved once his gone,but I'm not writing him of yet I think his fighting his own inner battles and have not yet thought about Khushi in any other way and normally distance is the only way people realize they feelings. I wonder if Khushi is in for a heartbreak I think after Arnav giving herself to another man would kill her soul.
~ It breaks my heart that Khushi is just used as an escape but then I have to be realistic about the situation she is in my heart goes out to all the women that are in such a profession I'm sure majority of them will not get a happily ever after nor such a refined house like Devi ji's khotta.
~Loved La advice to Arnav and I'm sure one day he will remember it.
~I like how you developing Arhi's relationship you have described they physical relationship sensually.
Baring your body and baring your soul is to different elements so eager to see them bond on and emotional level with more communication
~This story shows your versatility as a writer and is a wake up call to all of us to appreciate the lives we got because there are many girls out there that doesn't
have the luxurious we have yet we still ungrateful..
I'm am happy that you tackled such a women centric sensitive topic. You doing a great job I'm loving it.
~I like how you added a little of everyone's story and made us understand how the women ended up in such a situation!
Ye Hai Mohabbatein
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