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What an interesting development from the previous part Anne! You write so darn well and have knack for engrossing your readers! :-)
I must admit though I never expected this High and Mighty ASR to break into tears and seek support in the arms of Khushi a mere employee whom he treats rather harshly and this is based on how he reacted when he discovered that Khushi is actually in this bus too. His harsh words indicated his attitude towards her there. So you can imagine my surprise at his gestures in this chapter, then it all made sense at the end when you mentioned how Arnav always made sure she got home safe and even visited her when she fell ill in the one year period. It is only then that one can realise that his harshness is only on the surface and deep down he feels more for Khushi than we can imagine. Khushi being Anjali's best friend was another revelation that took me by surprise.
There some really adorable moments throughout, loving the way you have built Arshi's intense chemistry. The attraction is obvious and the bonding is beautiful to see too. Looking forward to the next part already! :=)
Kumkum Bhagya
Anupamaa
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