Arshi FF: The Valiant Knight - Thread 8 - Completed - Note on Page 142

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Tulips123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#501

Heart wrenching update deepu
I don't how u write it
But I can't stop myself from cry my eyes out reading this update
noone should go thru this heartache
U r gifted girl the emotions i felt while reading this update.
Reading this i can imagine every scene
Hats off to you :)

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premdewaani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#502

I just don't know how to start.. This is so Heart breaking and emotional.. So much pain and heart breaks.. No one should suffer like this.. Feeling really really sad for both Arnav and khushi.. And really hats off to you dear for writing such brilliantly.. Their emotions their actions were just too good.. You know you start imagining when you read pieces like this.. Really really good.. Can' wait to read the part 2..

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Sj236

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Posted: 11 years ago

#503

shocked will b an understatement now!
What is khushi trying to do!
Awsummm update. :)

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Arshifan4life

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Posted: 11 years ago

#504

The truth is finally out hope arshi will deal with it positively and everything works out

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Parvathi Devi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#505

That was emotional yet Sad Update...

Poor Arshi, they are going through alot... Adi was Dead with simple pain but he gave immense pain of lifelong to Arshi...

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Rimi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#506

it was very heartbreaking scene to watch khushi broke down to this extent...
quite emotinal...plz continue soon...

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nonie3081

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Posted: 11 years ago

#507

Very emotional and difficult chapter ... I feel for both of them . Knowing that she was illusioned all along and, that the child is not his, and her paramount love for him, it must be heart breaking , a betrayal at no fault of hers . For Arnav it's tough too as he knows Khushi will try to search that pain / accusation in his eyes., the child she wanted to be theirs is not his and she will know what he did to Akash .

I just hope it becomes normal soon.

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kaprasin

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Posted: 11 years ago

#508

what an update was that? such a strong woman we all have ever seen. She is more worried about arnav than her rape. Still in the aftershock of reading the update. u r such a wonderful writer deepthi.. hats off to u.. u really deserve it. i felt like watching a drama in tv. beutifully written wordings of arnav and khushi.