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Posted: 11 years ago
Res 😊i guess m first to comment fo the 1st time... It wz n amazing update di... The way khushi got to know the truth wz shattering... She wz so much broken still she stood hr ground n watched the CD... N wot hpnd after that was so heartwrenching... The way she felt and the way Arnav broke watchng khushi wz so so painfull... N now finally when she in labour she is not ready to except the baby... Ofcourse she won't... How could she wn she knows that it does not below to the man she loves n keeps him above all... I don't know wotz gonna hapned with the baby now as she is not responding to the doctors... I really prey that fate should not play this bad to anyone ever... All n all a very nice update Di... With the perfect blend of emotions as u always do... Thnkx n do continue soon... Tc
Edited by sweety421 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
What an emotional and roller coaster update. Everything is out in bright sunlight for Kushi & Arnav. I completely agree with author's note. There is no right or wrong. Every character acted according to circumstances and situations. Arnav & Kushi took decisions that they felt that are right at that time. We can't revert time and change good or bad decisions. We make choices and face the consequences. Standing to the choice we made is most important in any decision we make. Kushi may or may not have aborted the baby if she knew about rape and Arnav may or may not have supported her decision. Time & decisions can't be predicted.
I really liked Kushi's character though her characterization sounds far from practical. Any normal girl would have screamed at Arnav after witnessing him walking out on her but she took blame on herself and supported his action(s). Arnav is falling into deeper and deeper pit after witnessing her trust and love for him. Can anybody really love a person so much?. What a change of demeanor in Kushi after knowing the facts. Is she the same person who want to give up on her husband for her baby?. Again desperate situations demands desperate decisions. Kushi is in such a mental state she don't want to see anything other than Arnav. Innocent baby is undergoing fetus distress which can be life threatening for her as well as baby. But is Kushi wrong?. I don't think so. I would have done the same or much worse in this situation. Arnav is always her support and now he has to be stronger for her.
Arnav & Kushi both are in so much mental pain and only time can heal and tell what future holds for them. Deepthi I just want to say you have nailed this chapter. Kudos to your writting skills.
Edited by jduke - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Deepu... Can you imagine... I am commenting at 2am... I couldn't sleep until I read the update. But couldn't find time. I am very Sorry for commenting late...
Arnav and Khushi in TVK... they are really amazing characters...

Even though they started their relation with hatred... they became an ideal couple for Love and Trust. For Submission and Sacrifice. For Care and Concern. For Strength and Support.

They can fight themselves to support the other.

They can facade the strength to pull the other from grief.

They can shatter into pieces within themselves to put the other shattered heart together.

I was really worried for Arnav than Khushi... As I told you before... I couldn't imagine how he could handle the shattered Khushi... But I would say... he did pretty good. But How could she able to be that strong to see the proof of assault happened to her by that animal. She is indeed a strong women.

And her reaction about Arnav seeing her in that state and leaving her to that animal... I didn't expect it. She understood the reaction of Arnav very well... That ia reallly brilliant Deepu... for this you really need a hatsoff.

And what she him about why he didn't stand on his words about saving her all his life... She was worried for him. Every bit of her is worrying about him...crying for him..although she didn't shed any tears... her every drop of blood is crying out for Arnav...

And she chose Arnav over her child... because she couldn't accept the child as her's... How could she handle that. She will spent every moment of her rest of life thinking about Arnav ,.. that how he suffered every second after seeing her in that state with another person. How he would have suffere after knowing the truth... How he would have suffered to hide the truth from her.

Now the questions left for us are... What she will do now... What Arnav will do now... What will happen to them... And what is Khushi's decision about the child... How Arnav will convince her about the baby... I know Deepu.. you don't have to answer these questions... I will patiently wait for the story to unfold the answers...

And again... Deepu... you are really Brilliant... Brilliant... Brillinat ... Writer...Period.

Sorry for the short comment... I will write more later... Very Very Sleepy Deepu... I know you will understand... Afterall you are my angel...

Edited by lovedrops - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Deepthi, what an intense update it was??

Let me write about my feelings from Arnav's POV and then Khushi's.

Arnav knows his wife was raped. If knowing it is one aspect, visually seeing what happened is a totally different thing. To relive those moments and to curse and blame yourself for everything that happened must have been worse than a thousand needles poking at him at that instant. Everytime Khushi mentioned the word Arnav in the video, it must have torn Arnav's heart into pieces.

First reaction to every unfortunate incident in any person's life is what if the circumstances were different, what if I had taken a different decision, thats human nature. Arnav might feel that he did not protect Khushi enough and it lead to these circumstances, but no one can change fate. If things have to happen then it will. No one can change it.

Coming to Khushi, even before coming to AR ventures office, probably she held on to the last thread of hope that may be, maybe it was not Adi and it was Arnav with whom she slept. But even after hearing everything, she still could not understand how she could have slept with Adi. I guess her asking to see the recording and trying to know the entire truth was totally natural. And then she got the biggest shock when she was continuously mentioning Arnav's name while it was Adi there and that she was raped by Adi brutally.

For someone who loves her husband more than anything, who believes that her mind, body and soul belongs only to her husband, what a shock it must have been!!!! She even understood how Arnav must have felt when he entered the room and exited with a shock and did not even blame him for that.

If first the shock of the rape was not enough, then the realisation that the child in her womb was the outcome of the rape and not her husband's, must have hit her like an avalanche effect. How can any woman accept the child immediately knowing the entire truth behind its existence???

She will probably accept it eventually but she would need time.

Even in the delivery room, she is only thinking of what happened and that its not his baby!!!

What will happen to her and the baby now??? I hope both of them make it safely.

Deepthi, regarding the note, you don't have to explain the actions taken by characters in your story at all. You are writing it as you imagine it. You make them react in a certain way according to the nature of the characters. No two people react the same in this world under any given circumstance. So we are totally with you in this story and there is no second opinion about it.

Edited by canapoem - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update heart breaking bitter truth is out right now Khushi is in shock she just found out the one thing she wanted to give to her husband the love of her life was stolen the baby she is carrying the reason she almost lost him and herself the reason she was fight for proof of virtue the baby she was sure was her husband own was not but a remnant of a dreadful night that taken from both of them and then to know he hid it and took the blame it will only be Arnav who will make her accept the child if not fore anything it will be him who will show her the way out of this maze poor Arnav he went through a lot to cover the truth up and now it in the open this must have been a very difficult chapter to wright well done amazing thanks for the pm.
Edited by dumas - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update dear.. It literally squeezed my heart while reading khushi's reaction after knowing the truth... Plz update soon
Edited by sweetydoll32 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update Emotional Khushi saw the disc with the event from that night Feeling bad for both arnav n khushi Khushi doesn't want to have the baby
Wonder what's going to happen next
Cant wait for the next update
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Such an intense update... Waiting to see what happens next. Please update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
I am just crying...arnav should have told her before,...I know she won't be able to love this baby...I am still hoping that it is girl like khushi then may be there is hope...
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Posted: 11 years ago
my heart bleeds for both of them.

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