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canapoem

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Posted: 11 years ago

#521

Edited my comments on page 74.

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/108650923

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Posted: 11 years ago

#522

That was a painful update
looking forward to the next part

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umaraj84

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Posted: 11 years ago

#523

Again an intense emotional update .
I know I am wicked to say this i dont want the child to survive..I don't believe the child born in hate will grow to be gud human. There s this gene factor. Arnav and kushi deserve better life .. They have suffered a lot .. The child presence in their life will keep reminding them wat they lost..
I remember reading in early chapters that Anjali will help the rape victims ,kushi s one such victim here.. Will Anjali support kushi or the doctor n her override t?

Can't wait to see how u unfold the story henceforth ..

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mishal07

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Posted: 11 years ago

#524

Awesome update.

it was too intense and emotional.

everything is out now and khushi knew the truth.

she was already in dilemma about the child and now after knowing the truth she wanted to get rid of baby.

ufff they both suffered a lot.

hope everything 'll be fine.

waiting for next update eagerly.

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Raadhiya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#525

I feel am so lucky to read dis ff di
amazing

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.ButterCup.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#526

That was a very emotional update.. Poor Khushi.. She was devastated after knowing the whole truth.. Her pain pierces my heart.. ArShi ke aik dusery ke leye be'panah pyar dekh kar mera dil bhar aya... Itni muhabbat... Jab muhabbat apni inteha ko pohnch jaye usay Ishq kehte hain... aur apni anna ko khatam karne ka naam Ishq e majazi hai... So heart wrenching and so heart touching update.. And you portray their emotions outstandingly... How arnav will convince her... How will he make her calm down.. How will he soothes her pain... arnav toh khud toot ke bikhar gaya hai.. Mujhe yaqeen hai..Wo Apne dard ko bhula kar..woh khushi ke dard ko bantega.. aur baant raha hai.. The way he embraces her and asked her that in that incident, she is not at fault... This one was the biggest shock for her.. How will she come out of this shock... Thanks for the pm.. Looking forward to the next part..

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FeistyDewdrop

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Posted: 11 years ago

#527

deeps.. M in the bus at the moment going for work... Caught up wid the last 3 updates now n m crying profously... :( :( thsnk god foe the dupatta i have...

will comment longer as soon as i compose myself!!

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sweetfairy007

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Posted: 11 years ago

#528

Hi deep,

Thankyou very much for coming up with an update in express speed.That shows your concern for us.(?) Yes we were very much in distress.Yesterday night when I was laying in bed waiting for sleep to come I was just thinking of Khushi.Her reaction...I dont know how to express that feeling.I even dont want to imagine that heartwrenching scene.I thought Khushi will faint immediately.

But you wrote in a different way...Very strong Khushi trying to know what actually happened.Trying to face it.But poor girl she in between forgot as an outcome of the rape she is pregnant.Oh!!!!!

A pregnant lady avoiding the child's push.SHe is that much mentally in an anguished state that the LABOUR PAIN itself is very small for her.Such a condition in real life scenario will be there? First time I was hearing such a condition.And you deep,you are right many women will be having such type of mental condition.That child will be bringing these women only bad memories.You showed me I knew very little of this cruel world.What can she do now?How she can vanish her child?

But I feel you will not make the child to die.SHE WILL PASS this phase also.

What all GOD is keeping in store for a women's life!

Aap aaye thay? I was not expecting such a scene was also waiting in this DVD.I almost forgot about that.Khushi finally witnessed that also.

So much to write...

You are a blessed writer.Dont stop ever.Need a lot of applausing...👏👏👏👏

Love you

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nuts4u

@nuts4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#529

oh my god...m so so scared...it was very very painful chapter...every ones actions are reasonable...Aranv was trying to protect her and so hide the facts so he was right i am feeling sorry for Khushi and hope she and Aranv will get all the courage in this world to fight back this disaster together...