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Posted: 11 years ago
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i m going to prove you wrong by unreserving fast

i m here baby!! First let me start with the banner, awesome. WAY TOO AWESOME! I love the title fridge notes. So they are apart at this moment and interacting through this cute notes. They say every small chore of their lives including eating ice-creams to throwing tantrums at each other, Armaan's rant over Shanky . I have never read anything before like this where daily patterns of lives are shown with the help of notes. For that bow down! You have written it beautifully with a slight tinge of humor and easiness. And whats with the shampoo gel 🤣and Shubhankar crying ?! I love it. Best thing, its long .

-update soon.
Edited by exhalelove. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
WOW! awesome concept, really enjoyed reading! looking forward to the next part :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awwsome Concept! AR defines Cuteness mahn and aww they are unabe to catchup face to face but with notes <333 ! Reall an awwsome shot luking forward to another part :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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1/9- 6:40 am.

That man cracks me up, even through notes. I love how nonchalant he gets. I so agree, those nurses are always trying to talk to me and I can always hear them say 'Dr. Armaan is so good-looking, Dr. Riddhima is so lucky.' Ah, sasurjee is the original Hitler, not Dr. Kirti.
-Armaan

1/9- 6:35 pm.

Armaan, stop calling my father Hitler. He's very sweet; it's just you who always tries portraying him like some kind of villain. Don't remind me. They are always glaring at me like I've stolen some diamond necklace of theirs. Those women irritate the hell out of me. Every. Single. Day. Also, there's very little shampoo left Armaan so buy a bottle today.
-Riddhima

2/9- 6:50 am.

Those women love me, but they can't have me. They're just jealous of you Basket. But I love it when you're jealous, you're very cute when you are. I didn't know which shampoo to buy, the earlier one or the current one so I bought both. Next time, write the name of the shampoo as well Basket. It's tough for a guy to buy stuff like that.
-Armaan

2/9- 6:40 pm.

I don't know why you love it so much when I'm jealous Armaan. About the shampoo, get used to it Armaan. You are my husband so you have to go for grocery shopping at times when I'm unable to. Aage jaake bhi you have to go for shopping, don't you? Bye.
-Riddhima

3/9- 6:45 am.

Oye hoye Basket, you've already started planning for our future? Where did my sharmeeli Basket go? Anyway, since your demands are clear to me, I guess I'll write down all the brand names for future use. Would that be fine your highness?
-Armaan

3/9- 6:30 pm.

Armaan, do you have to make me blush? Can't you just leave it at times? I didn't mean it in that, I just meant it in 'what if I'm stuck in the hospital' way. Tum bhi na Armaan. Dr. Shubhankar wanted another excuse. I swear, senior doctors have all the luck in the world and they use it to their full benefit. I feel like going and telling Dad but then I can understand his plight so I don't tell him. Urgh, I miss you Armaan.
-Riddhima

4/9- 6:40 am.

Dr. Shubhankar can't think of plain excuses but he's a cardiologist, beats me how he got there. Anyway, just tell him to tell your dad that one of his school friends is seriously ill and is on his death bed so he has to go and meet him. Remind me why we are still not allowed to take holidays unless we're sick? I miss you too Basket.
-Armaan

4/9- 6:45 pm.

He's a genius, and geniuses tend to be crazy. We are not allowed because they think that we are taking holidays only to meet each other and as hard as it is to accept this, it is true. I have one more patient added to my list today. It is going to be busy. Bye.
-Riddhima

5/9- 6:55 am.

That's a good point. Is it that new kid from the Orphanage? I saw him today, he was very cute. But he seems to be the kind who is very silent. What is his disease anyway? He looked completely fit to me. Minnie made an appearance again today. I told her about your idea and she seemed pretty excited but you know, she came with her boyfriend. I don't like the look of him but that stubborn girl kept telling me how sweet he is. Huh.
-Armaan

5/9- 6:40 pm.

Yeah, that's him. He's a lonely kid so he's come for psychiatric treatment but I guess he has dengue as well, but he doesn't talk to anyone. Armaan, you know, you sound like a father and you sound so protective. I'm sure he's a nice guy Armaan, you never know. At least give him a chance.
-Riddhima

6/9- 7:00 am.

Oh, poor kid. Now you're taking his side as well? It's been a day since he came and he's turned both of you against me. I told you Riddhima, I don't like that guy. Also, buy some ice cream, I finished it. Hmph. Bye.
-Armaan

6/9- 6:45 pm.

Baby, you're so cute. You are behaving like a father now, accept it. Accha haan, I almost forgot. Papa said that after this month gets over, he's going to have a party for celebrating how all of us stood through all this without any contact for a month and he wants the two of us to organize it. Are you up for it? Or should I tell Muskaan?
-Riddhima

7/9- 6:30 am.

Vaah sasurjee said that. I didn't know sasurjee gets such good ideas. We will organize, of course, is that even a question? But is this a typical sasurjee party or is beer and wine allowed? It narrows down the menu. AND NO, I am not behaving like a father basket. I am behaving like a normal human being who is concerned for his friend, why are you so hell bent on proving me wrong?
-Armaan

7/9- 6:00 pm.

Okay, before anything else, you know, Sid came to the hospital today! He brought Yuvi along with him and he got a girl called Nidhi as well, and she's his fiance. They look really good together and it was so cute. You should have been here. Sid was literally agreeing to every word of hers and Yuvi was snickering at every chance he got. Poor Sid couldn't say anything too, the girl was literally going on and on. She's a doctor as well and turns out they came here to meet the Modi family for marriage. Isn't that cool? Even Sid is getting married. We should all have a dinner together once this whole ordeal gets over. Also, I'm not hell bent on proving you wrong baby, you are wrong. You are so behaving like a father. I don't want to hear anything else. Lalalalala.
-Riddhima

8/9- 6:50 am.

Oh no, she snatched my Sid from me. I'm not going to spare Nidhi. Why didn't I get to meet him and you did? Please don't tell me you're planning to matchmake for Yuvi now that he's the only loner. Let the guy be happy for once. ALSO, NO, I am not behaving like her father and stop doing that lalalala thing. I did that once.
-Armaan

8/9- 6:30 pm.

EXCUSE ME DR. ARMAAN MALLIK. What do you mean by 'letting him be happy'? Do you mean you're not happy? How did she snatch Sid from you? I remember that you guys were bromancing, not dating. You're married, in case you forgot so she she didn't snatch Sid from anyone. YOU are behaving like FATHER. Accept it.
-Riddhima

9/9- 7:10 am.

Minnie's not talking to me now. I wonder what that idiot told her about me. I told you there's something wrong. Baby, I'm very happy but Yuvi will never get a girl as awesome as you. Also, Nidhi did snatch my brother away from me, didn't she? We were never dating.
-Armaan

9/9- 6:50 pm.

Shoot, I'm late again. It's all because of you Armaan! Couldn't you check and see that the toothpaste got over. I had to go out and buy one, all because of you. HUH, bye.
-Riddhima

10/9- 7:00 am.

What? I didn't know I was supposed to buy one. Leave a note reminding me Riddhima, you know how I forget these things. Don't 'huh' me. It was your entire fault. By the way, Anjali told me you have to go shopping on the 17th. She apparently misses you a lot and wants you for herself.
-Armaan

10/9- 6:40 pm.

Armaan, when you see that something is about to get over, you buy a new one, you don't wait for it to get over. It's not rocket science. Oh I miss Anjy Di too. On that earlier note, stop flattering me. I know how you meant it. Also, Minnie's not talking to you because you're not giving the boy a chance, in fact, the guy is begging her to talk to you. Brother? Please stop kidding Armaan.
-Riddhima

11/9- 6:50 am.

Thank you Riddhima jee. I didn't know that. I'm not flattering you, that is the truth. Excuse me; I did give him a chance. He's probably instigating her behind you back and acting in front of you. I still don't trust him. Sid will always remain my brother. What are you trying to say woman?
-Armaan

11/9- 6:30 pm.

I'm only there to help you darling, nothing else. You don't have to say thanks. :) Whatever. No, he is not instigating her. Armaan, get rid of that protective veil and see that the guy likes her a lot. Show some trust Armaan, come on. Okay, whatever. Sid is your brother. (I still don't believe it though.)
-Riddhima

12/9- 5:30 am.

Okay, so I woke up a little too early so this will probably be an essay. I spoke to Minnie's boyfriend today and I found out his name is Sharan. Well, the name isn't too bad. At least it's a man name. I also found out that he gave Minnie 24 teddy bears on her birthday. At least he's well off. He's a normal guy and he reminds me of myself. (It is not a good thing.) But I think I can let him hang around as long as he doesn't try something hanky panky with Minnie. Also, this really hilarious thing happened with Rahul today. Muskaan left late so when Rahul and I entered, Muskaan was still there. Rahul thought he was hallucinating and was shouting for medicines until Muski came and slapped him and then he came back to his senses. I found this whole scene so hilarious that I literally fell down while laughing, making everone else laugh, but it was totally worth it. All in all, it was totally fun. I also don't care that this took two separate notes and this is like the second or third time this happened. I was just bored since I woke up so early. I love you! Also, yes, Sid is my brother.
-Armaan

12/9- 6:40 pm.

See, I told you he's a nice guy. You don't listen to me, ever. Aw, 24? That's so sweet. You never do that stuff for me Armaan. Hanky panky? Which generation are you from baby? But you're awesome and if he's like you, it's a good thing. Rahul is stupidly funny and I can imagine Muski's reaction. You fell down? For some odd reason, I'm laughing like crazy too. I'm surprised you woke up early, you almost never do. Anything special? I love you too.
-Riddhima

13/9- 6:30 am.

I'm back to my normal timings, see? You want me to do that? I don't mind doing that. I'm from the same generation as you so I know what these kids do. Being Armaan is not a good thing because that means being a playboy. Yes, Rahul was teased the whole day yesterday as well. It's a good thing. You look beautiful when you laugh. Actually, you look beautiful even when you cry. So overall, you look really beautiful.
-Armaan

13/9- 6:25 pm.

Aww Armaan, it's always a good thing to be you, trust me, I know. Poor Rahul. Muskaan told me as well. Also, can you believe we have to do this only for 2 more days? Armaan, now don't make me blush. I know I'm not as beautiful as you make me out to be.
-Riddhima

14/9- 6:35 am.

Just 2 more days. Time passes by so quickly. I can finally see you Riddhima, not glimpse in a car but actually see you. I'm bored of seeing the same old picture. I can ever pull your dupatta and tease you while you cook. We can go out together to buy groceries. So much of stuff. But we got through it Basket, we got through it together.
-Armaan

14/9- 6:30 pm.

I'm surprised you didn't mention you wanted to see me blush. You've really grown up Armaan. Maybe this wasn't such a bad thing after all. We did understand how to stay connected. Armaan, I really wonder if you love me or if you love my dupatta. It's such a dilemma.
-Riddhima

15/9- 6: 45 am.

Final Day Basket. This is the final freaking day. It's been so long since I caught a proper glimpse of you. Of course I want to see you blush, isn't that my favorite pastime? I love you; the dupatta is part of the package deal. There's no huge dilemma.
-Armaan

15/9- 6:40 pm.

Final shift Armaan, we're almost there. You at least caught a glimpse of me, I didn't get even that. But I will see you in the morning tomorrow since it's our day off. I can't wait Armaan. I simply can't wait to see your face baby. I missed you so much!
-Riddhima

That was the last of the notes. The next morning, when Riddhima came back from her shift, she saw Armaan wide awake and sitting in the living room.

"Armaan? Why aren't you asleep?" she asked him.

"I was waiting for you Basket. I missed you too and the excitement was too high so I wasn't sleepy." Armaan said and instantaneously yawned. Riddhima pulled him into a hug and within minutes, both of them were on the bed, almost asleep.

You couldn't get through everything with notes on the fridge now, can you?



Thanks for the encouragement Salwa. 😛 Well, the update is thanks to the song which popped randomly, 'Tonight Tonight' by Hot Chelle Rae. xD This is the last part of the two shot. :P Credit for the banner to Lil and for the header to Adii. 😃

Love,
Ananya

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Posted: 11 years ago
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This was cute.

Comment over.

Sorry a bit lazy.

When i m over my #nomoretypingphase# i will make it bigger. 😛
Edited by exhalelove. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I just caught up with your oneshots and love them. Especially this one with AR leaving notes on the fridge 😆 Really cute!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awww these frigde notes were so sweeettt
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I am just going to say that this was the cutest two shot ever! I so loved the way you wrote this. It felt so real. The rahul and muski part made me laugh. I could see that happening. And lol Shubhankar you made him crazy! Oh and I love how you mentioned every character and made space for each of them. And thankz for giving me something to read!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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'I'll be in black, find me if you can.' Her words reverberated in his mind as his eyes sought out for the woman in question. He looked around and he found thousands of women with masks on, some golden while some were black. Some were blue while some were pink. But none of them were in black. It was always one of the other colors. But the other girls weren't as gutsy as her now, were they? He spotted one woman finally but she was on the stocky side but the woman he was looking for was on the slimmer side. So he kept looking.

After 15 minutes of failure, he decided to take a seat and look around. He went up to the bar and ordered a scotch when a woman came and took a seat next to him. The first thing he noticed was her eyes. They were piercingly green and held some sort of drug in them which made it hard for him to look away. The next thing he noticed was her body. She wasn't fat, nor was she slim. She had curves in all the right places which were highlighted by her dark red dress. She seemed to be sizing him up as well since she was looking up and down. She gave a slight nod and he hoped it was because she approved of him. But then he wondered, 'she was just a stranger, why did he care?'

She ordered a cocktail and he eagerly jumped in and said the drink's on him. 'Smooth Armaan, very smooth.' He thought to himself. She looked at him and gave him a slight smirk with her eyebrows up. He chose to ignore it and continued with his search, trying very hard not to look at her legs or her hair or anything.

"Sir, your scotch," He heard the waiter say from behind him.

"I didn't order the scotch." Armaan told the waiter.

"It's on the lady sir." The waiter said, pointing to the woman sitting next to Armaan. She raised her glass as if she was raising it to a toast and gave him a small smile. He mirrored her action and smiled back himself. Within a few minutes, he found himself asking her for a dance. She unsurprisingly said yes and he lead her to the dance floor. He attempted to find out something or the other about her but it was of no use. She kept her mouth closed and simply danced. He felt like Prince Charming, trying to coax something out of his Cinderella.

Out of the corner of his eye, he spotted a woman in a black gown with a golden mask on looking around. 'Gotcha.' He muttered and excused himself from the arms of his Cinderella.

As he reached the woman, he pulled her by the arm towards himself and twister her hand behind her back.

"I found you, didn't I?" He asked her, smirking.

"Excuse me, who are you? Leave my hand, you jerk." She said and tried to free her hand from his grasp. Suddenly, some guy came and freed the girl.

"Dude, what the hell do you think you're doing with my girlfriend?" The guy said, punching Armaan in his face.

Armaan stood up holding his jaw and apologized to the guy and the girl. When he turned around to look for Cinderella, he found her smirking and holding up her purse, the letter 'R' engraved on it, as clear as crystal. She then smirked at him and started leaving, weaving through the crowd seamlessly. He tried following her but was stuck in the crowd. Two minutes later, he found that she was calling him.

"I told you I'll be in black, didn't I? It's sad really that you couldn't find me, even if I was standing inches away from you." She mocked him.

"You were in blue, you liar." Armaan told her.

"Oh please Armaan. Riddhima Gupta is deceitful, but she's not a liar. My mask was black in colour. Good luck finding me now darling." She said, her tone clearly saying 'catch me if you can'.

"Don't worry. Prince Charming found his Cinderella. This Prince Charming will too. Just keep your heels in check. You never know, it may lead to you." He said and cut the call, smiling.



I had a long night, pretty much what came out of it. 😆 Thank you for all the comments on the two shot! <3 I'm glad you guys liked it. :D
Banner Credit- Salwiii. :P

Love,
Ananya
Edited by ARandKJFan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Give lazy readers like us a chance to unreserve lady !

Okay the banner i think i dont like it anymore now 🤣 Coming to the OS its nice and err kinky 😆 sorry to put it that way even though it doesnt have any sexy scenes. I had a gut feeling he was looking for Riddhima in that "black dress" but when you introduced a 'piercing green eyed lady' i was like okay so it is not Riddhima he was searching. So you win for putting up a nice and cute mystery. Armaan got PUNCHED 🤣 And i like her answer which was like 'you go girl attitude' about the black mask. Prince Charming and Cinderella. Nice way to put it.

In short this was A M A Z I N G.
Edited by exhalelove. - 11 years ago

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